2019高考英语改错2带答案.doc

精品文档I was often troubled by lack of confidences. So I applied for a job at an exhibition as reporter last term. The exhibition was held annual to display the latest products in the field of education. At that time, I was responsible for interview parents who bought the learning tools. While talking with him, I found it was not so hard as I think. One lady even praised me but asked her son to learn from me. I realized the experience was in great value and nothing was more excited than communicating with people.From this experience, I am fully aware that we should take real action if our personality that needs improving.【答案】I was often troubled by lack of confidences. So I applied for a job at an exhibition as reporter last term. confidence aThe exhibition was held annual to display the latest products in the field of education. At that time, I annuallywas responsible for interview parents who bought the learning tools. While talking with him, I found it interviewing themwas not so hard as I think. One lady even praised me but asked her son to learn from me. I realized the thought andexperience was in great value and nothing was more excited than communicating with people. of excitingFrom this experience, I am fully aware that we should take real action if our personality that needs 删除thatimproving.How to keep mental healthAs we know, mental health links to our happiness index. However, its vital to keep our mental health. Here are some advice on how to do it.Firstly, accept yourself true. Knowing your own potentials and making practical goal instead of setting high expectations can keep yourself away from heavy burden, thus enjoy good mental health. Secondly, be friendly and sociable. Life with friends is miserable. So make friends. Its their comfort and support which help you go through hardship in life. Lastly, commit yourself to your career. Your efforts bring you a sense of achievement, which will in turn ensure your happiness.In a brief, it pays to focus our attention on our mental health. The more, the best!【答案】How to keep mental healthAs we know, mental health links to our happiness index. However, its vital to keep our mental health. Therefore/ThusHere are some advice on how to do it. isFirstly, accept yourself true. Knowing your own potentials and making practical goal instead of truly goalssetting high expectations can keep yourself away from heavy burden, thus enjoy good mental health. enjoyingSecondly, be friendly and sociable. Life with friends is miserable. So make friends. Its their comfort and withoutsupport which help you go through hardship in life. Lastly, commit yourself to your career. Your efforts thatbring you a sense of achievement, which will in turn ensure your happiness.willIn a brief, it pays to focus our attention on our mental health. The more, the best! betterDear Mr. Li,Im Wang Tao. Im written to tell you my opinion about employing a foreign language teacher.They are two factors to take into consider. For a thing, the sense of humor is necessary for a teacher, who makes his class interesting and lively. For another, ensure efficiency in teaching and learning, the foreigners ability to speak Chinese matters much, so only with the help of Chinese can they communicate with each other smoothly.Various of activities out of class, such as English Evening and English Corner, should be organized by the foreign language teacher, which brings the students more chances to communicate with the teacher and improve his oral English.【答案】Dear Mr. Li,Im Wang Tao. Im written to tell you my opinion about employing a foreign language teacher. writing opinionsThey are two factors to take into consider. For a thing, the sense of humor is necessary for a teacher, There consideration onewho makes his class interesting and lively. 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Besides, Id like you to correct the mistakes what are found in the materials and format.I would appreciate it that if you could do me a favor. I am looking forward to you reply.Yours,Li HuaDear Ms Jenkins,Im Li Hua. I plan to take part-time job in a foreign company during the summer holiday. I had a havealready filled in the application form and have my resume ready for it. But I am not sure about the words and format. However, I am writing to ask for your help and professional advices. Would you please spare some Therefore advicetime to read through the materials attaching? Would you mind find out the mistakes in terms for words and attached finding offormat? Besides, Id like you to correct the mistakes what are found in the materials and format. that或whichI would appreciate it that if you could do me a favor. I am looking forward to you reply. yourYours,Li HuaThe sun was just slowly come up over the mountains today as I took my dogs for its morning walk. I smiled as I watched the clouds gradually turn to white and gold. The air was cool and I wore a big smile in my face. Even though there werent leaf on the trees, but I could still hear birds singing songs of spring. Even my dogs seemed to notice the different in the air. They were playing instead of just do their morning business in the grass. The particular golden sun seemed to make it a beautiful day. As I headed back, I realize something. The beauty of day didnt come from the warmth of the sun. It came from the warmth within my own heart and soul.71. come改为coming 72. its改为their 73. in改为on 74. leaf改为leaves 75.去掉but 或but改为yet 76. different改为difference(s) 77. do改为doing 78. particular改为particularly 79. realize改为realized 80. 在day前加theFor 65 years, Mr Li has been walk around our neighborhood twice the day. Its a part of his daily exercise routine. He is a retiring biology teacher. As Mr Li gets older and older, he has to rest several time along his route. Therefore, he still gets up early and sticks his routine. The neighbors have noticed his stops. We place different chairs along our route and invite him to sit and took a rest. Now, the mile-long route is spotted with chairs. When we see Mr Li to go by, we realize we should also get out but have a walk.For 65 years, Mr Li has been walkwalking around our neighborhood twice thea day. Its a part of his daily exercise routine. He is a retiringretired biology teacher. As Mr Li gets older and older, he has to rest several timetimes along his route. ThereforeHowever, he still gets up early and sticks to his routine. The neighbors have noticed his stops.We place different chairs along ourhis route and invite him to sit and tooktake a rest. Now, the mile-long route is spotted with chairs. When we see Mr Li to go by, we realize we should also get out butand have a walk.Alibaba founder Jack Ma, his company has been valued at morethan $ 221 billion of which Ma owned 6%, is put in the top position amongChinas wealthiest. But he stays outside the list of the worlds 10 richpeople.Fought against a hard life, young Ma still managed to learn English well enough to gain a degree and became a teacher. Afterwards hestarted a translation agency in which took him to the US, where he introducedto the Internet. His fate was bound to change before he was accidentally appointed to take an American visitor Jerry Yang, a co-founder of Yahoo, in atour of the Great Wall. The meeting obvious proved to be a turning point forall of them, promoting the birth of Alibaba and later cooperation with JerryYang.71.hiswhose；ownedowns；richrichest；foughtfighting；去掉in；he和introduced 之间加上was；beforewhen/after；in on；obviouslyobvious；all bothLast week I noticed Jack coughing on our math class. See this, I offered to take him to a clinic. There the doctor asked Jack how he had coughed sometimes for long time. Jack nodded his head immediate. The doctor then wrote a prescription with instruction on how to take the Chinese medicine. When Jack tasted the medicine, he almost brings it up. I comforted him with an old saying “Good medicine for health tastes bitter to the mouth”. Jack managed to swallow them unwillingly. But when he had recovered three days later, he felt amazing at the effect of the Chinese medicine.Last week I noticed Jack coughing on our math class. See this, I offered to take him to a clinic. There in Seeingthe doctor asked Jack how he had coughed sometimes for long time. Jack nodded his head immediate. if/whether a immediatelyThe doctor then wrote a prescription with instruction on how to take the Chinese medicine. When Jack instructionstasted the medicine, he almost brings it up. I comforted him with an old saying “Good medicine for health broughttastes bitter to the mouth”. Jack managed to swallow them unwillingly. But when he had recovered three itdays later, he felt amazing at the effect of the Chinese medicine. amazedIn order to promote participation in outdoors exercise, our school organized an activity to climb Tianlong Mountain on April 10. The majority of my class joined the activity.Early in the morning, having assembled outside the school gate, we head straight to the thickly-forested Tianlong Mountain. We set out for the top in high spirits the moment when we arrived at the foot of the mountain. In a course of the climb, we cooperated with each other to pass the rocky or steep areas. Laughing and cheering, we eventually reached the summit, which we were greeted by the bright sunshine and fresh air. Viewing from the top, the city was beautiful. Bathing in the warm sunshine, we entertained us with stories, songs, dances and game.This event was extremely beneficial and we strongly suggest that similar events are held every year!短文改错：第一段： 第一行：outdoors - outdoor 第二行：joined后面加 in第二段 第一行： head-headed 第三行：去掉when 第三行:In a course of -In the course of 第五行： which - where 第六行：Viewing-Viewed第七行：us-ourselves 第七行：game-games第三段 第二行 are held - be heldDear Peter, How time flies! It had been almost a year since you left China to Sweden. During your home stay at my home, we had such wonderful time that it seemed as if everything was happened yesterday. I have been long to hear all about you and missing