广东省新兴县惠能中学高中英语二轮复习 优化句子的四种常用方法课件.ppt

优化句子的四种常用方法 篇章结构连贯的常用词语 整合信息的十种语言手段 优化句子的四种常用方法 此方法多用于介绍人物 事物或地点等 例1 介绍事物 2008广东 背景 射击最初只是生存工具 19世纪末才发展成为一项体育运动 shooting ameansofsurvivaloriginally developedintoasportonlyinthelate19thcentury 同位语手段 例2 介绍人物 2009广东 时间 上周末对象 眼科医生 eye doctor 王教授主题 我国中小学生近视 eye sightedness 问题lastweekend ihadaninterviewwithprofessorwang aneye doctor concerningtheissueofshort sightednessoftheschoolchildreninchina 例3 介绍地点姓名 李华身份 育才中学学生职位 学生会主席校址 你们大学附近i mlihua chairmanofthestudentunionofyucaimiddleschool whichisclosetoyouruniversity 1 翻译 李敏是个女孩子 今年18岁 她在光华中学学习 她是我的邻居也是我最好的朋友 运用 1 liming agirlof18 myneighbourandmybestfriend isstudyinginguanghuamiddleschool 2 整合 guangzhouisthecapitalofguangdongprovince itislocatedinthemiddleofguangdongprovince itisthecultureandeconomycenterofguangdongprovince 2 guangzhou thecapitalandthecultureandeconomiccenterofguangdongprovince islocatedinthemiddleofguangdong 3 整合 zhanghaiismale heis23yearsold hegraduatedfromhunannormaluniversitylastyear 3 zhanghai male 23yearsold graduatedfromhunannormaluniversitylastyear 常用的并列连词有and but or otherwise nor so yet however for aswellas both and notonly butalso either or neither nor and then since等 运用并列句 例4 他不喜欢音乐 也不喜欢运动 一般 hedoesn tlikemusic hedoesn tlikesports either 高级 helikesneithermusicnorsports 例5 我不喜欢他 他很自私 一般 idon tlikehim heisselfish 高级 idon tlikehim forheisselfish 4 heworkshardhimself heencouragesustoworkhard too 运用用连接词整合下列句子 4 henotonlyworkshardhimselfbutalsoencouragesustoworkhard 5 theseglassesareveryexpensive pleasebecarefulwiththem 5 pleasebecarefulwiththeglasses fortheyareveryexpensive 6 halfofthegirlschoosefilmandtvstarsastheiridols 48 oftheboysfavorsportsstars 6 halfofthegirlschoosefilmandtvstarsastheiridolswhile48 oftheboysfavorsportsstars 7 accordingtotheprofessor thecauseofshort sightednessisverycomplicated nomedicinecancureit 7 accordingtotheprofessor thecauseofshort sightednessisverycomplicated sonomedicinecancureit 8 iamgoodatexpressingmyself ihavethelanguageadvantageoverothers 8 notonlyamigoodatexpressingmyselfbutialsohavethelanguageadvantageoverothers 例6 我很惊讶 一切进展得那么顺利 一般 iwassurprised everythingwentonverywell 高级 tomysurprise everythingwentonwell 运用短语 根据具体情况我们可以用现在分词 过去分词 介词短语 不定式短语等 例7 她回到舞厅 她寻找丢失的项链 一般 shewentback shewantedtofindherlostnecklace 高级 shewentbacktofindherlostnecklace 例8 故事是用简单的英语写的 很受英语初学者的欢迎 一般 thestoriesarewritteninsimpleenglish theyarepopularwithenglishbeginners 高级 writteninsimpleenglish thestoriesarepopularwithenglishbeginners 9 hewasill hedidn tgotoschool 运用用短语整合句子 9 beingill hedidn tgotoschool 10 themanissingingasong heismybrother 10 themansingingasongismybrother 11 i mwritingtoinviteyoutobeajudgeatourenglishspeechcontest itwillbeheldonjune5 11 i mwritingtoinviteyoutobeajudgeatourenglishspeechcontesttobeheldonjune5 12 aftershelistenedtomeforawhile shegavemeabigsmileandsaidshelikedmyvoiceverymuch 12 afterlisteningtomeforawhile shegavemeabigsmile sayingshelikedmyvoiceverymuch 例9 废水被直接排放河里 河水被严重污染 一般 wastewaterisdirectlyletintotheriver theriverisseriouslypolluted 高级 theriverisseriouslypollutedbecausewastewaterisdirectlyletintotheriver 运用从句 最常用的是状语从句 主语从句 宾语从句和定语从句 例10 他病得很重 这让我着急 一般 hewasseriouslyill itmademeworried 高级 thathewasseriouslyillmademeworried hewasseriouslyill whichmademeworried 运用用从句整合下列句子 13 heneverlostagame iwasreallyastonished 13 iwasreallyastonishedthatheneverlostagame 14 lihuaismyclassmate hisenglishisverygood 14 lihuaismyclassmate whoseenglishisverygood 15 asformyself thomasedisonismyidol hisinventionshavegreatlychangedourlife 15 asformyself thomasedisonismyidolbecausehisinventionshavegreatlychangedourlife 或asformyself thomasedison whoseinventionshavegreatlychangedourlife ismyidol 16 currentlychinahasabout350millionsmokers amongthesesmokers75 aremenand25 arewomen 16 currentlychinahasabout350millionsmokers amongwhom75 aremenand25 arewomen 17 wearenowlivinginaninformationage tv cellsandthewebarewidelyusedinthisage 17 wearenowlivinginaninformationageinwhichtv cellsandthewebarewidelyused 需要注意的是 我们在写作时 不要一味地追求复杂句型 能简则简 能用短语 就不用从句 在句式多样的前提下 尽量做到精练 温馨提示 例11 我到家后马上给他打电话 一般 afterigothome icalledhimatonce 较好 aftergettinghome icalledhimatonce 例12 我正在餐桌旁吃饭 一个人朝我走了过来 那个人戴着一顶黑帽子 复杂 iwaseatingatthetablewhenamanwhowaswearingablackhatcameuptome 简明 wheniwaseatingatthetable amanwearingablackhatcameuptome 综合练习 下面是广东2008年高考英语试题基础写作的内容 请用上面所讲的四种方法整合句子 18 shootingwasoriginallyameansofsurvival itdevelopedintoasportonlyinthelate19thcentury thesportfirstappearedin1896 nonewerecontestedduringthe1904and1928games thesportreturnedtotheolympicsin1932 womenwerefirstallowedtocompeteintheolympicshootingin1968 thesporthadjustthreeeventsatthe1896olympicgames nowithas17shootingevents 18 shooting whichwasoriginallyameansofsurvival developedintoasportonlyinthelate19thcentury th