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高屋建瓴整体把握correction 1(2015河南郑州第二次质量预测)dear mandy， im not doing well in my lessons at school, especial in maths.my dad says i must try hard so he wants me go to university.he thinks im lazy，but its not true.i work really hard，often studied late into the night! ive tried to talk to my mother, but she always said i have to work as hard as my brother does.my brother doesnt study very hard, and he always gets excellent grades.its not fair. the only thing i like it is art.my teacher says im the best student shes had for year.when i told my dad, all he said was, “you mustnt waste your time in art.you must focus your mind on your lessons！” im feeling quite puzzling what to do now.would you please help me out? thanks a lot!yours sincerely，lisa答案：dear mandy， im not doing well in my lessons at school， in maths.my dad says i must try hard he wants me go to university.he thinks im lazy，but its not true.i work really hard，often late into the night! ive tried to talk to my mother, but she always i have to work as hard as my brother does.my brother doesnt study very hard， he always gets excellent grades.its not fair. the only thing i like it is art.my teacher says im the best student shes had for .when i told my dad, all he said was, “you mustnt waste your time art.you must focus your mind on your lessons！” im feeling quite what to do now.would you please help me out? thanks a lot!yours sincerely，lisacorrection 2 when i was eight years old and was spending a weekend visit my aunt libby at her home, a man dropped in one evening.at that time, i happened be excited about boats.the visitor discuss the subject in the way that seemed particularly interesting to me.before he left, i said, “what a man! and how extreme he is interested in boats！” my aunt told me that he was a businessman and that he took no interests in the subject.“but why did he talk about boats？” “because he saw you were interested in boats, so he talked about the things to please you.at the same time，he made him agreeable，too.”i still remember that my aunt said.答案： when i was eight years old and was spending a weekend my aunt libby at her home, a man dropped in one evening.at that time, i happened be excited about boats.the visitor the subject in way that seemed particularly interesting to me. he left, i said, “what a man! and how he is interested in boats！” my aunt told me that he was a businessman and that he took no in the subject.“but why did he talk about boats？” “because he saw you were interested in boats, so he talked about the things to please you.at the same time，he made agreeable，too.”i still remember my aunt said.correction 3(2016河南八市重点高中高三联考)my parents tend to making almost all decisions for me.they chose schools and subjects for me.sometimes even the daily timetables have to be decide by them. in my opinion, deciding everything for children do not help them but harm them in many ways.firstly, it will make children lack independence，in which is unfavorable to their development in the long run.secondly, in many cases, parents decisions go against childrens personally ideas and interests, which will naturally influence our growth.i do believe to grow to be independent is the natural way for everybody.parents should give us chances to make our own decision.they may help us make choices instead replacing us to make choices.答案：my parents tend to almost all decisions for me.they schools and subjects for me.sometimes even the daily timetables have to be by them. in my opinion, deciding everything for children not help them but harm them in many ways.firstly, it will make children lack independence，in which is unfavorable to their development in the long run.secondly, in many cases, parentsdecisions go against childrens ideas and interests, which will naturally in