高考英语写作训练-今昔对比类.doc

今昔对比类作文训练在“今昔对比”的对比类写作中，一定要把握时态的运用，时态通常是一般现在时和一般过去时。写作格式：提出主题句对过去情况的描述对现在情况的描述总结句。当然，也可以对今、昔进行逐条对比。今昔对比类作文常用句型：.Our (school/hometown), as all may know, is not what it used to be.In the past, I wished that our (school/hometown) could be more brilliant,there would be a . But now, everything has changed. My wish comes true. Moreover, In addition, what makes (the school/hometown) more lovely is that If you were here, you would be amazed by the beauty of our (school/campus/hometown)1. 开头常用句型(1) Great changes have taken place. Great changes have taken place in my hometown in the last five year.Quite a few changes have taken place in my school since you left China.Over the past twenty years or so, great changes have taken place in our life.(2) Things have begun to improve since（自从以来，事情有了好转/改善）Things have begun to improve since schools were called on to reduce learning load.2. 对比常用句型: (1)used to, but now 过去常，但是现在(2) in the past, but now 在过去，但是现在(3) once, but now 曾经.，但是现在(4) Things are different now. 情况已大不同了(5) But now, everything has changed. 但是现在全变了今昔对比类作文训练11.联合国教科文组织某考察团正在我国某乡村参观考察。假定你是接待人员,请根据下列提示以发言稿的形式简要介绍这个村的情况：1)大小：近100户人家，约500口人。2)变化：过去很穷，78年后变化很大。人们生活比以前好多了。现已旧貌换新颜。3)教育：原来的学校很小，现已经过改建。新建的教学楼有4层，是村里最美的建筑物。村所有学龄儿童在此免费就读。 注意：1）要点齐全，前后连贯。2）词数：100-120之间。Ladies and gentlemen, Welcome to our school!今昔对比类作文训练2假设你是李明， 你的美国朋友杰克听说你校正在开展研究性学习，来信询问有关情况，请你写一封信，谈一谈开展研究性学习前后，你的学习情况的变化。注意：1用书信格式。2词数：100左右3 生词：研究性学习exploring study ，上网surf the internet。过去现在课堂 老师讲解知识点，学生听讲，记笔记。老师提出问题，学生互相讨论或学生自己提出问题自己讨论解决。完成大量的作业。丰富多彩的课外活动，如读自己感兴趣的书籍， 去图书馆或上网查资料。今昔对比类作文训练3假设你是李华，你的澳大利亚朋友Dick听说中国的中小学正在减轻学生的学习负担，来信询问有关情况。请你根据下表提供的信息，写一封回信，谈一谈减负给你的学习和生活带来的变化。周末活动（减负前）周末活动（减负后）白天：上课、做作业白天：参观博物馆、学习电脑、绘画晚上：做作业晚上：看新闻、读书、看报就寝时间：11：30就寝时间：10：00注意： 1、词数100左右； 2、开头已为你写好。生词：减轻学习负担-reduce learning loadDear Dick, How nice to hear from you again._Best wishes,Li Hua今昔对比类作文训练4请根据下面六幅图的提示和所提供的主题句，写一篇题为“Changes in Our Life” 的英文短文。词数 100 左右。（2004年北京市春季高考写作） 今昔对比类作文训练1范文学生作品Ladies and gentlemen, Welcome to our school! This village is very small. It has nearly 100 families and about 500 people. It used to be very poor. It has changed a lot since 1978 . People here are richer than before. Now it is taking on a new look. In the past, the school here was very small . Now it has been rebuilt. The newly built teaching building has 4 storeys . It is the most beautiful building in the village. All the school-age children can study here. They enjoy free education in it. Thank you.修改为Ladies and gentlemen, Welcome to our school ! This village is a small one with/which has nearly 100 families and about 500 people. It used to be very poor. However, it has changed a lot since 1978 and has been developing very fast. People here live a much better life than before . Now it is taking on a new lookIn the past, the school here was very small and most children couldnt afford to go to school. But now it has been rebuilt andthe newly built teaching building which has 4 storeys is the most beautiful one in the village. All the school-age children can study here. Whats more, they enjoy free education. May you enjoy your stay here / May you have a pleasant time here! 今昔对比类作文训练1标准范文Ladies and gentlemen, Welcome to our school ! This village is a small one with/which has nearly 100 families and about 500 people. It used to be very poor. However, it has changed a lot since 1978 and has been developing very fast. People here live a much better life than before . Now it is taking on a new look. In the past, the school here was very small and most children couldnt afford to go to school. But now it has been rebuilt and the newly built teaching building which has 4 storeys is the most beautiful one in the village. All the school-age children can study here. Whats more, they enjoy free education. May you enjoy your stay here / May you have a pleasant time here! Thank you.今昔对比类作文训练2Dear Jack,How nice to hear from you again.Dear Jack,How nice to hear from you again. You want to know what is going on in our school. In short, things have been improving since the school began to carry out exploring study. In the past, the teachers always kept on explaining the points in class. We students just listened and took notes. But now we often discuss and try to solve the problems raised by the teachers or ourselves.After class, we enjoyed different kinds of activities instead of doing endless homework. For example, we can read what we are interested in. We can go to the library or surf the Internet for various kinds of information.In a word, we are now masters of study, and we are happy.Best wishes.Yours,Li Ming今昔对比类作文训练3一、评分原则1、本题总分为25分，按5个档次给分。2、评分时，选根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。3、词数少于80和多于120的，从总分中减去2分。4、评分时，应注意的主要内容：内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性、上下文连贯性及语言的得体性。5、拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面，评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。6、如书写较差，以至影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。二、内容要点：1、过去忙于一课、做作业2、现在有时间读课外书、参观博物馆等3、现在有时间看新闻、读报纸4、不必再熬夜三、各档次的给分范围和要求：第五档次（很好）：（21-25分）完全完成了试题规定的任务。-覆盖所有内容要点。-应用较多的语法结构和词汇。-语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复结构或较高级词汇所致其；具备较强的语言运用能力。-有效地使用了语句音的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。完全达到了预期的写作目的。第四档（好）（16-20分）完全完成了试题规定的任务。-虽漏掉1、2个次重点，但覆盖所有主要内容。-应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。-语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确，些许错误主要是因尝试复杂语法结构或词汇所致。-应用简单的语句音的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。达到了预期的写作目的。第三档（适当）：（11-15）基本完成了试题规定的任务。-虽漏掉一些内容，但酸辣所有主要内容。-应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。-有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，但不影响理解。-应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文内容连贯。整体而言，基本达到了预期的写作目的。第二档（较差）：（6-10分）未恰当完成试题规定的任务。-漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容，写了一些无关内容。-语法结构单调，词汇项目有限。-有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响了对写作内容的理解。-较少使用语句的连接成分，内容缺少连贯性。信息未能清楚地传达给读者。第一档（差）：（1-5分）未完成试题规定的任务。-明显遗漏主要内容，写一些无关内容，原因可能是未理解试题要求。-语法结构单调、词汇项目有限。-较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响对写作内容的理解。-缺乏语句间的连接成分，内容不连贯。信息未能传达给读都。未能传达给读者任何信息；内容太少、无法评判；写的内容均与所要求内容无关或所写内容无法看清。四、说明：1、内容要点可用不同方式表达。 2、对紧扣主题的适当发挥不予扣分。五、One possible version:Dear Dick,How nice to hear from you again. You want to know what is going on in schools in China? In short, things have begun to improve since schools were called on to reduce learning load. I dont know about others, but I used to have to work even at weekends doing endless homework and attending classes as well. Now I have more free time. I can follow my own interests such as reading books, visiting museums, and taking computer lessons. In the evenings I can watch news on TV or read newspapers. Whats more, I can go to bed earlier. As far as I know, everyone is happy about this new arrangement of things.Best wi