九年级英语：如何写好英语作文教学课件.ppt

howtowriteacomposition 作文 1 记叙文2 说明文3 议论文英语写作多数为指导性写作或称 半命题写作 也就是说 是先给一定的材料 然后让学生依据所给的材料按要求作文 方法 组写 缩写 扩写 改写 或看图作文等 如何写好英语作文呢 一 写好句子1 句子要正确 2 句子要平行 3 句子要连贯 4 句子要有逻辑性 5 句子要避免过多重复 6 句子要避免头重脚轻 7 句子要避免汉式英语 二 写好段落三 用好过渡词四 写好开头和结尾 一 写好句子 1 句子要正确 1 doyouknowwhereisthepeople spark 2 therearemanyvisitorsenjoythedish manyvisitorsenjoythedish therearemanyvisitorswhoenjoythedish doyouknowwherethepeople sparkis 2 句子要平行 inmysparetime ienjoypopularmusicandcollectingstamps inmysparetime ienjoylisteningtopopularmusicandcollectingstamps 3 句子要连贯gointothepark goforward crossthestreet turnright afteryouentertheparkbythemaingate walkstraighttillyoucometoastream crossthestreamandturnright 4 句子要有逻辑性i mveryinterestedincomputerandwonfirstprizelastyear iwasveryinterestedincomputerandwonfirstprizelastyear 5 句子要避免过多重复 youwillcontinuetowalk you llseeahill youwillgoaroundthehill you llgettoalake afterwalkingforawhile you llcometoahill walkroundtotheothersideofthehill thereyou llseealake 6 句子要避免头重脚轻chinese maths english physics chemistryandcomputerarethemainsubjects themainsubjectsarechinese maths english physics chemistryandcomputer 7 句子要避免汉式英语myspareloversareswimming skating collectingstampsandlisteningtopopularmusic inmysparetime i mfondofswimming inmysparetime myhobbiesareswimming skating inmysparetime ienjoyswimming skating 某英语杂志社 家长之友 栏目要举办一次征文比赛 要求围绕 youcanleadahorsetowater butyoucan tmakeitdrink 这一主题发表意见 请根据下列提示写一篇文章 内容提示 许多家长望子成龙 不惜重金送孩子上私立学校 到国外留学 请家教 给他们买大量的资料 电脑等 但往往这些都 注意事项 投稿人应提示内容 表明自己的观点 nowadays knowledgeisbecomingmoreandmoreimportantwiththedevelopmentofsociety somanyparentsexpectthechildrentobeusefulorsuccessful theysparenoefforttooffertheirchildrenasgoodachanceaspossible theynotonlysendthemabroadforfurthereducationandtoprivateschoolsatgreatexpenses butalsohirepersonalteachers theybuyall kindsoflearningmaterials computersandsoon butnomatterwhattheirparentsdoforthechildren whatbecomesofthechildren someofthemreallymakeit butmostofthemwanttoenjoyandrelaxthemselvesandatlasttheyarereallydisappointing thisprovesthemeaningofthesaying youcanleadahorsetowater butyoucan tmakeitdrink thatistosay youcangivesomeonealltheopportunitiesforsuccess butyoucan tmakeeverypersonsuccessful 二 写好段落 二 写好段落段落本身又是一篇小短文 包括主题句 支持句和结尾句 高考题参考范文 主题句是全文的第一句 sunshuwei aworldchampionindiving isaboyof14fromguangdong 结尾句是全文最后一句 ayearlaterin1990 hewonagoldmedalatthe11thasiangamesandbecameaworldchampionatthe6thworldswimmingchampionshipsearlythisyear 假设你是李晓平 是 江苏中学 的学生 请你围绕 建设和谐社会 的主题 根据下面所给出的要点提示 用英语给全省中学生写一封倡议书 提示1 人与社会 祖国 家乡 学校 热爱关心2 人与人 家人 师长 同学 诚信互助3 人与自然 能源 环境 动植物 爱惜保护4 你的态度 内容由考生自己决定 注意 1 词数 100左右 2 内容可适当发挥 注意行文连贯 dearfellowstudents ourgovernmentisaimingtobuilda harmonioussociety ithinkitiseverycitizen sdutytoworkhardtoachievethisgoal ashighschoolstudents whatshouldwedo firstofall weshouldloveourmotherland let stakeagreatinterestinthedevelopmentofourhometownsandtakeanactivepartinourschool sactivities secondly let sfilltheworldwithlove weshouldshowourrespectforoldpeople ourparentsandourteachers weshouldalsocareforeachotherandhelpthoseinneed mostimportantofall allofusmustbefaithfulandhonestinourdailylife finally let sworktogethertosaveenergyandprotectournaturalenvironment includinganimals trees flowersandgrass 三 过渡词 1 and inaddition first second third 2 before after when later immediately 3 beyond beside behind below inside 4 but still however even though 5 because so therefore thus otherwise 6 sothat indeed aboveall forexample 7 finally inotherwords inbrief 四 开头和结尾开头方法 开门见山 解释和描述主题 提供背景知识 小故事引路 提出问题 倒叙 悬念 名言 描写 等等 结尾方法 总结主要观点 重复开头或题目 提出结论 提出问题 暗示答案 引言 故事 等等 请以你校学生的名义写一篇短文 陈述反对拟在你校附近兴建一座化工厂的理由 短文须包括以下内容 1 大部分同学都反对兴建 2 尽管该厂可能为本市赚钱不少 但弊大于利 3 可能造成噪声污染和空气污染 4 侵占学校部分操场 注意 可以补充若干理由 不要仅仅翻译以上各点 词数 100 120 写作的步骤 1 在头脑中搜索你想用的单词 beagainst construction chemicalfactory makealotofmoney pollute prevent takeup harm playground 2 想好开头句 moststudentsofourschool includingme areagainsttheconstructionofachemicalfactorynearourschool 3 写好其它句子来支持你自己的观点 althoughthefactorywillmakealotofmoneyforourcity wedothinkitwilldousmoreharmthangood theairwillbebadlypollutedandwecan tpreventthenoisefromenteringourclassrooms besides thebuildingofthefactorywilltakeupapartofourplaygroundwhichisnotverylarge wecan thaveenoughplacetoplaygamesandhavesportsafterclass ofcourse theyhavepromisedtotakemeasurestodoitwell however itisfarfromenough too ontheotherhand wewillneverbeabletobreathefreshair 4 适当加上一些评论 5 写出结尾句 wherewouldwegoifitweretakenup 6 补充 完善 加上过渡词 moststudentsofourschool includingme areagainsttheconstructionofachemicalfactorynearourschool althoughthefactorywillmakealotofmoneyforourcity wedothinkitwilldousmoreharmthangood theairwillbebadlypollutedandwecan tpreventthenoisefromenteringourclassrooms besides thebuildingofthefactorywilltakeupapartofourplaygr