高中英语：unit2 continuous learningwriting课件（牛津上海版S2A）.ppt

unit2continuouslearning argumentativewriting 议论文 评分标准 高考 25分制 structure3 content10 language12 step1审题 2001年高考作文 请你谈谈汽车进入家庭后 对家庭 环境和经济可能产生的影响 nowadaysprivatecarshaveenteredquitealotoffamilies andmoreandmorepeopleareconsideringbuyingthemselvesprivatecars whatimpactwillprivatecarsmakeonfamilies environmentandeconomy 提炼中心话题brainstorming初步确定中心观点 practice 2003年高考题 你的好友因家境一般买不起名牌而闷闷不乐 给他写封信 谈谈你的看法和建议 收信人 徐海青寄信人 黄平写信日期 2003年6月8日 step2列提纲 中心句 1 privatecarsenablepeopletoenjoymoreflexibletransportation 2 privatecarspromotethedevelopmentofeconomyinmanyfields 3 toomanyprivatecarsmakethepollutionproblemsworse step3 动笔 结构 introductionparagraph 2 supportingpart 3 conclusionparagraph introductionparagraph towriteoneortwosentencestoexplainthebackgroundofthetopic thengivethetopicsentence practice what syourviewonkeepingunusualanimalsaspets likeasnake acrocodile 鳄鱼 etc samplebeginning mostpeoplewillagreethatpetsmakepeople slivesfullerandmorebeautiful itistruethatkeepingpetsbenefitspeoplealot butidon tthinkkeepingunusualpetsisalsogoodtopeople therearethreereasonsforthat topicsentence backgroundofthetopic usefulphrasesforthispart first firstly firstofall atfirst aboveall second secondly then besides furthermore inaddition inadditionto atlast lastbutnotleast topicforthought 当前 越来越多的人参加夜校学习 不同的人有不同的目的 请谈谈你的看法 samplewritingforthesupportingpart firstly morepracticalknowledge suchasagodcommandofaforeignlanguageorcomputerskills willprovidepeoplewithbetterandwiderjobopportunities foradults especiallyforthosewhoareatpresentlaiddownfromtheirwork willbewellpreparedwhenreturntothejobmarket secondly attendingeveningschoolcanhelppeoplekilltheirsparetime manypeoplechoosetogotoeveningschoolsimplybecausetheyseemhavenothingtodo intheeveningschool theycanmakefriendswithothers generalreasons supportingdetails conclusionparagraph usefulphrasesforthisparagraph inaword toconclude tosumup inshort etc inthispart youshouldrestateyourtopicandgiveashortsummary revision introduction topicsentence reason1 reason2 reason3 details details details conclusion examples datafacts reasoning practice 根据下列表格提示写一篇题为 thelifeexpectancyofchinesepeopleisgettinghigherandhigher 文章共为三段 a 简单说明表格内容b 说出产生这种现象的原因c 得出结论 accordingtothetable wecanseethatthechineseaveragelifeexpectancyhasbeengettinghigherandhighertheseyears itwas35beforeliberation 62in1963 70in1992andabout75in2002 therearethreemainreasonsfortherises firstofall foodwhichweeathasbeenmorenutritiousthaneverbefore peoplepaymoreattentiontoawell balanceddiet fruitsandvegetablesareingreatneedbypeopletogetmorevitamins sotheirhealthhasbeenimprovedalot secondly peoplenowtakeanactivepartinsports theyfindthatsportsactivitieshelpthemtobestrongerandhealthier thisalsomakesthemlivelonger lastbutnotleast greatprogresshasbeenmadeinthefieldofscience scientistshavefoundalotofmethodstotreatdiseases cancerisnolongeradifficultproblemintheworld morepeoplecanbecuredofseriousdiseaseswhichwerefatalbefore toconclude withthedevelopmentofthemodernscienceandtechnology ourlifeissuretobecomebetterandbetter theaveragelifespanwillkeeponrising fromthetable wecanseethatpeoplearelivinglongerandlonger theaveragelifeexpectancywas35in1949andithasbeenmorethandoubledby2002 thereareseveralreasonswhichcanaccountfortherises firstofall betterdiethelpspeopletolivelonger withthedevelopmentofeconomy peoplearegettingricher whichenablesthemnotjusttohaveenoughfoodtoliveonbuttochoosewhatdoesgoodtotheirhealth besides people sawarenessoftheimportanceofdoingexercisekeepspeoplehealthyandstrong whichleadstolongerlifespan weoftenseepeople oldoryoung takingpartinactivitiessuchastaiji fandanceandjogging inadditiontohealthfoodandexercise thedevelopmentofmedicalsciencealsocontributesalottopeople slongerlife itisreportedmanytimesthatdiseaseswhichwerefatalinthepastcanbecuredwithoutanydifficulties tosumup withbetterdiet growingawarenessoftheimportanceofdoingexerciseandadvancedmedicaltreatment noonecandenythefactthatp