广东省高三课件高考基础写作课件.ppt

高考专题 基础写作 广东汕头华侨中学张宏 exercises 2 4 contents sample 4 homework transition 3 上周 我们以 谁是你的偶像 为题 在2600名学生中进行了一次调查 survey 以下是调查数据 1 调查时间 调查问题以及调查对象 2 男女生在以明星为偶像方面的差异 3 父母 在男女生偶像中的排序差异 4 男女生在以伟人为偶像方面的异同 5 你的偶像及理由 07年广东卷 你很荣幸地成为2008北京奥运会的一名志愿者 负责编写奥运比赛项目的英语介绍 写作内容 请根据以下中文提纲 编写射击项目的英语介绍 背景 射击最初只是生存工具 19世纪末才发展成为一项体育运动 1896 第一次成为奥运项目1904 中断1928 中断1932 重回奥运会1968 第一次允许妇女参加奥运射击比赛现状 稳步发展 1896奥运会只有三项射击项目 现今有17项 08年广东卷 1 写作题材贴近考生的学习和生活 2 信息点多 必须用5句话表达 3 信息呈现方式多为表格 图表等 4 以翻译为基础 注重考察表达能力 一 题型特点 二 能力要求 1 审题能力2 处理信息的能力 信息组合 排列合理3 表达能力 语法正确 句式灵活 信息内容表达准确 完整 语篇连贯 三 表达能力训练 1 写好简单句简单句的五种基本句型 1 主语 不及物动词 s v 2 主语 及物动词 宾语 s v o 3 主语 系动词 表语 s v p 4 主语 及物动词 双宾语 s v o o 5 主语 及物动词 宾语 宾补 s v o c ex 改正下列病句并指出基本句型 myfavouritesubjectsincludingenglishandchinese lastweekweholdadiscussionaboutthistopic thefuturelifewillbecomemoreandmorebetter thefiredestroiedtheirhouses 5 hespendstwohourstostudyenglisheverynight 应改为include 应改为held 应改为betterandbetter 应改为destroyed 应改为studying 6 hecosttendollarsforthebook 7 hefeltconfused hedidn tknowwhattodo 8 hewatchedtvforawhilebeforewenttobed 9 sheisconfidenceandpatience 10 inhisopinion getfatisaterriblething 应改为paid 应改为 he 应改为going 应改为confidentandpatient 应改为gettingfat 2 如何做到句式灵活 1 并列句2 复合句 定语从句 状语从句 名词性从句 3 强调句型4 非谓语动词5 倒装句6 其他句型及结构 ex 按要求改写下列句子 1 englishiswidelyusedintheworld mostbusinesslettersarewritteninenglish 合并为并列句 englishiswidelyusedintheworldandmostbusinesslettersarewritteninenglish 2 peoplethoughtofsomewaystosolvetheproblem thesesolutionsdidn twork 合并为并列句 peoplethoughtofsomewaystosolvetheproblembutthesesolutionsdidn twork 3 isuggestthatyouvisitthegreatwall ithasahistoryofmorethantwothousandyears 合并为定语从句 isuggestthatyouvisitthegreatwall whichhasahistoryofmorethantwothousandyears july11hasbeennamedthesailingdayinourcountrysince2005 zhenghebeganhisfamousvoyageonjuly11 合并为定语从句 july11 whenzhenghebeganhisfamousvoyage hasbeennamedthesailingdayinourcountrysince2005 5 iwillnotbeabletomeetyouattheairport ihavesomeexperimentstodothatday 合并为状语从句 iwillnotbeabletomeetyouattheairportbecauseihavesomeexperimentstodothatday 6 theproblemwascomplicated hesolveditinonlytwohourswithacomputer 合并为状语从句 thoughtheproblemiscomplicated hesolveditinonlytwohourswithacomputer 7 inthepastfiveyears therehavebeenchangesinpeople sdiet itisafact 合并为名词性从句 itisafactthatinthepastfiveyears therehavebeenchangesinpeople sdiet 8 theweatherwasfine wewenttovisitthezhongshanpark 独立主格结构 theweatherbeingfine wewenttovisitthezhongshanpark 9 youshouldnevergiveupwhenyouarefacedwithdifficulties 非谓语 倒装句 nevershouldyougiveupwhenfacedwithdifficulties 10 whenamanandawomanmeet thewomanfirstoffersherhand 改为强调句 whenamanandawomanmeet itisthewomanwhofirstoffersherhand 11 众所周知 吸烟危害健康 一句多译 a itisknowntoallthatsmokingdoesharmtopeople shealth b asisknowntoall smokingharmspeople shealth c everyoneknowsthatsmokingisharmfultopeople shealth 四 如何使文章连贯 过渡词的使用 1 时间 soon then suddenly meanwhile before after earlier inthemorning afterwards later immediately next theotherday nowadays gradually 2 空间 above below up down under near farfrom infrontof behind beside beyond ontheright left around inside outside oppositeto nextto ontopof across 3 列举 forexample suchas first ly second ly finally besides apartform foronething foranotherthing 4 比较 like unlike onthecontrary incontrastto ontheonehand ontheotherhand than notso as as as while similarly theformer thelatter some others one theother comparedwith 5 逻辑关系 a 并列 and aswellas also b 转折 but however yet c 递进 besides apartfrom inaddition what smore furthermore moreover tomakethingsworse d 原因 because becauseof as since forthatreason e 结果 so therefore thus asaresult f 让步 though although inspiteof 五 基础写作的推荐步骤 1 认真审题2 归纳 排列信息点3 确定短语和句型 连词成句4 组句成篇5 检查修改 某报设有一个求助信箱 请根据以下表中列出的信息 以高三学生李华的名义给mr helper写一封英文短信 信的开头和结尾已写好 不计入五句话 dearmr helper i masenior3student iamnowingreatneedofyourhelpbecauseicanhardlystandthegreatpressure iamlookingforwardtoyouradvice yourssincerely lihua 写作步骤 第1步审题 写信 描述高三学生现状 第一人称 一般现在时 6项 第2步整合信息 译成英语 1 每天在校时间约10小时 每天完成作业时间3 4小时 everydaywestayatschoolforabouttenhourstohavelessons wespendatleastthreetofourhoursdoingourhomework 2 每天几乎没有时间娱乐 消遣 a wehardlyhaveanytimeforrelaxation b hardlycanwefindanytimetodowhatwewant 3 每天睡眠时间不足 不利于健康 a wedon thaveenoughtimetosleep whichdoesharmtoourhealth b wesufferfromlackofsleep which inthelongrun isnotgoodforourhealth 4 负担过重的原因是面临高考 a themaincauseofourheavyburdenisthepressurefromthecollegeentranceexamination b thereasonwhywearecarryingsuchaheavyburdenisthatwearefacingthecollegeentranceexamination 5 父母对我们的期望很高 a ourparentsexpecttoomuchofus b ourparentshavehighexpectationsofus dearmr helper i masenior3student iamnowingreatneedofyourhelpbecauseicanhardlystandthegreatpressure everydaywestayatschoolforabouttenhourstohavelessons spendatleastthreetofourhoursdoingourhomework hardlycanwefindanytimetodowhatwewant wesufferfromlackofsleep which inthelongrun isnotgoodforourhealth thereasonwhy