高三语文专题复习讲评课（书面表达专题浙江卷）课件.ppt

高三复习写作讲评课assessment practiceofwriting 2008年全国高考考试大纲中 语文作文 每错一个字扣一分 重复不计 的新规 引起考生和家长的极大关注 请你就以下要点给某英语报社写一篇英语报道 不必翻译新规定内容 homeworkrevision thecomputerismoreandmorewidelyused youngpeopleliketochatonline whentheyarechatting theydon tcareabouttheirwritting therehavemanywrongcharactersintheircompositions too everyday theyhavemanyhomework theycan trememberthecharacters todealwiththesituation thegovernmenthascarriedoutanewpolicy itwillmakepeoplepayattentiontochinese itwillhelpstudentslearnchinesewell it shightimethatwetookaction wedon thavemuchtime wecandevelopourcountrybyimprovingourmothertonguefirst howdoyougradeit 定档 andwhy homeworkshow let simproveit let simproveit let simproveit let simproveit summary paragraphs topicsentence details tothepoint advancedvocabulary sentencepatterns linkingwords structure content language writing fewmistakes 目前 不少年轻人在写作中喜欢使用网络语言 某英语杂志社就此话题邀请中学生发表看法 请你参考所给要点 写一篇英语短文 有的同学认为 幽默 时尚 好玩有的同学认为 有错别字 不利于语文学习 有时难以理解你的看法 nowadays manyteenagersliketousetheweblanguageintheirwriting somestudentsthinkitishumorousandcool theyusetheweblanguage theyfeelit sfun somethinkitisdifficult theycannotunderstand whentheyarechattingonline theydon tcareabouttheirwriting therehavesomewrongly writtencharacters itisbadforchineselearning ithinkwecanusetheweblanguageandwecanexpressourselvesmorefreely improvethecomposition focusontopicsentences advancedvocabulary patternsandlinkingwords youcannotteachamananything youcanonlyhelphimfinditwithinhimself galileogalilei homework furtherimprovethewritingaccordingtotheassessmentform makeyourfinalcopyasneataspossible let sdivideitintoparts part 1 part 2 part 3 thecomputer rememberthecharacters thegovernment helpstudentslearnchinesewell withlimitedtimetogo byimprovingourmothertonguefirst part2 todealwiththesituation thegovernmentcarryoutanewpolicy part3 asfarasiamconcerned it shightimethatwetookaction part1 itiscommonthattherearemanywrongly writtencharactersinastudent scomposition comeupwiththetopicsentences atopicsentencetellsthereaderwhatacertainpartisabout topicsentenceforpart2 topicsentenceforpart3 topicsentenceforpart1 computer homework raisetheawarenessof haveapositiveeffecton whichendingdoyoulikebest why inmyopinion thepolicyisbeneficialtous itmakessenseinprotectingourculture b asfarasiamconcerned it shightimethatwetookaction weshouldcollectthemistakesandreviewthemfrequently onlybyhardworkingcanweachieveourgoal theydon tcareabouttheirwritting therehavemanywrongcharactersintheircompositions too everyday theyhavemanyhomework writing are much whenyoungpeoplechatonline theyattachlittleimportancetotheirwriting withsomuchhomeworktodo theyhavetroublememorizingthecharacters thenewpolicyisintendedtodealwiththesituation raisingthesocialawarenessofourmothertongue itwillhaveapositiveeffectonchineselearning it shightimethatwetookaction weshouldrefertoadictionaryforunknowncharacters second collectthemistakesandreviewthemfrequently inaword onlybyworkinghardcanweachieveourgoal thereareseveralreasonsbehind b asfarasiamconcernedc forexampled moreover e firstofall a c d b e whentheyarechatting theydon tcaretheirwriting everyday theyhavemuchhomework theyaretoobusytorememberthecharacters itwillmakepeoplepayattentiontoourmothertongue itwillhelpstudentslearnchinesewell canyouimprovethem whentheyarechatting theydon tcaretheirwriting whenchatting theydon tcaretheirwriting ellipsis省略句 everyday theyhavemuchhomework theycan trememberthecharacters theyhavesomuchhomeworktodothattheyfailtorememberthecharacters so that failtodo with withsomuchhomeworktodo theyhavetroubleinrememberingthecharacters itwillmakepeoplepayattentiontoourmothertongue raisetheawarenessof itwillraisetheawarenessofourmothertongue itwillhelpstudentslearnchinesewell haveapositiveeffecton itwillhaveapositiveeffectonstudents chineselearning itwillraisetheawarenessofourmothertongue itwillhaveapositiveeffectonstudents chineselearning theawarenessofourmothertongue itwillhaveapositiveeffectonchineselearning non verbal非谓语 notonly butalso itwillnotonlyraisetheawarenessofourmothertongue butalsohaveapositiveeffectonstudents chineselearning raising itiscommonthattherearemanywrongly writtencharactersinastudent scomposition thereareseveralreasonsbehind forexample whenchattingonline teenagersattachlittleimportancetotheirwriting moreover withsomuchhomeworktodo theyhavetroublememorizingthecharacters todealwiththesituation thegovernmentcarryoutanewpolicy