高考英语书面表达专项训练课件.ppt

高考题型专题复习书面表达 高三英语组 命题规律 1 审清题意2 罗列要点3 确定顺序 关键词和主要句型4 连词成句 组织成文5 检查修改6 书写规范 写作的基本方法 practice看图作文 题目要求 为迎接高考 你常常复习功课到深夜 请根据下列图画用英语写一篇日记 注意 1 日记须包括所有图画的内容 可以适当增加细节 使日记连贯 2 词数 100左右 3 日期已给出 thursday may15 2008fine 审题 1 体裁 2 主要时态 3 人称 4 要点 5 注意日记的格式 日记 记叙文 一般过去时 描述一天上午的经历 第一人称i 抓住四个要点 时间 地点 人物 事件的前后经过 keywords p1 jointhewordstosentence iwokeupatnineo clockthismorning wakeup nineo clock morning keywords p2 jointhewordstosentences jointhelasttwosentencestogether getdressed rushinto preparebreakfast getmyschoolbag 1 igotdressed 2 irushedintothelivingroom 3 motherwaspreparingbreakfastthere irushedintothelivingroom wheremotherwaspreparingbreakfast keywords p3 getonmybike runout couldn tsayanything jointhewordstosentences igotmyschoolbag iranout igotonmybike mothercouldn tsayanything jointhesentencestogether beforeshecouldsayanything igotmyschoolbag ranoutandgotonmybike keywordsp4 gettotheschoolgate tomysurprise find close realize sunday jointhewordstosentences tomysurprise whenigottotheschoolgate ifounditwasclosed thenirealizeditwassunday pleasechangethelastsentenceintoacomplexsentence 1 itwasthenthatirealizeditwassunday 2 notuntilthendidirealizeitwassunday thursday may15 2008fineioftenstayuplatetogoovermylessonsforcollegeentranceexamination lastnightididn tgotobeduntil12o clock when1wokeupthismorningitwasalready9o clock igotdressedandwashedmyselfquickly thenlrushedintotheliving room wheremotherwaspreparingbreakfast beforeshecouldsayanything igotmyschool bag ranoutandgotonmybike irodeasfastasicould itseemedonlyafewminutesbeforelgottotheschoolgate tomysurprise itwasclosed itwasthenthatlrealizeditwassunday 如何使书面表达显出文采展示个性亮而出众 summary 一 trytoavoidmistakes 二 trytousecomplexsentences 三 trytousedifferentsentencestructuresorcomplicatedstructures 四 trytouseadvancedwords 五 避生就熟 进行 曲线 表达 六 多种表达法交替使用 1 trytoavoidmistakes 1 butwas6o clock a 缺胳膊少腿 型 2 however otherstudentsagainsttheidea 3 heseatedonthegrass it are himself b 画蛇添足 型 1 语意重复 hereturnedbackyesterday 2 谓语重复 butthereare60 ofthestudentareagainsttheideaofentrancefee 3 多宾语 或宾语不恰当 hedressedhisclothesquickly 去掉back 去掉thereare或在are前加关系代词who 去掉hisclothes或把hisclothes改为himself c 张冠李戴 型 1 误用主语 don tworry yourbodywillgetwellsoon 2 误用谓语 thetimepastquickly 3 误用宾语 iwassopleasedtohearfromyourletter 4 误用表语 thepriceofmycarisveryexpensive 5 误用定语 chinahasamorepopulationthanjapan 6 误用介词 thethiefranawaytothedirectionofthecoast yourbodyyou pastpassed yourletteryou hearfromreceive expensivehigh morelarger toin c 张冠李戴 型 1 误用主语 don tworry yourbodywillgetwellsoon 2 误用谓语 thetimepastquickly 3 误用宾语 iwassopleasedtohearfromyourletter 4 误用表语 thepriceofmycarisveryexpensive 5 误用定语 chinahasamorepopulationthanjapan 6 误用介词 thethiefranawaytothedirectionofthecoast yourbodyyou d 瞻前不顾后 型 1 althoughhewasverytired buthewentonworkingintheoffice 2 ononehand 60 ofthestudentsareagainsttheidea but40 ofthestud