英语人教版九年级全册how to better a writing.ppt

文理附中 HowtoBetteraPieceofWriting 黄本英 如何写好英语作文 中考作文评分标准 第四档 15 18分 覆盖所有内容要点 准确使用丰富的词汇和语言结构 全文结构紧凑 有效地使用了语句间的连接成份 符合英语交际习惯 具备较强的语言运用能力 第三档 10 14分 覆盖所有内容要点 恰当使用较丰富的词汇和语言结构 适当运用了语句间的连接成份 较好地达到了交际的目的 第二档 4 9分 没能覆盖所有内容要点 词汇和语言结构不能完全满足写作任务的要求 文章不够连贯 影响对写作内容的理解 第一档 0 3分 漏掉较多内容要点或写的内容与规定任务无关 词汇和语言结构错误较多 内容不连贯 无法传达有效信息 为了更好地开展2014年全民阅读活动 有关部门就如何为市民创造良好的阅读环境广泛征求意见 你班将举行一次英语主题班会来讨论这个话题 请你写一篇发言稿 提出自己的想法和建议 要点提示 1 阅读的重要性 2 你的建议 如建更多小型图书馆 经常性地介绍好书等 要求 1 词数 80词左右 开头已给出 不计入总数 2 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称 2014年中考书面表达 15分 Apieceofwritingfromastudent 学生作文 Hello mydearfriends Asweallknow readingisveryimportanttous Itcanmakesusunderstandtheworld anditcanmakeusfeelrelaxing Iwanttomakemorepeoplelikereading soIhavesomegoodsuggestion Wecanbuildlotsofsmalllibrariesinthecity Iftherearemorenewbooks peoplearemoreinterestedinreading Weshouldkeepthereadingroomquietandclean Itispublicplace Youcan tmakesoundorputrubbishontheground Ihopemyadvicescouldbegood Morepeoplewilllikereading Doyouthinkitisagoodpieceofwriting Whyorwhynot Betterthelayout 布局 BetterthegrammarBetterthevocabulary 词汇 BetterthesentencesBetterthelogic 逻辑 Howcanwemakethewritingbetter Betterthelayout 布局 Howtomakethewritingbetter Step1 Abetterlayoutcanmakethewritingmoreclear Basiclayout基本结构 Paragraph1 Paragraph2 Paragraph3 introduction引入 details细节 conclusion总结 Para 3conclusion Para 2details Putthewritingintoabetterlayout Para 1introduction Hello mydearfriends Asweallknow readingisveryimportanttous Itcanmakesusunderstandtheworld anditcanmakeusfeelrelaxing Iwanttomakemorepeoplelikereading soIhavesomegoodsuggestion Wecanbuildlotsofsmalllibrariesinthecity Iftherearemorenewbooks peoplearemoreinterestedinreading Weshouldkeepthereadingroomquietandclean Itispublicplace Youcan tmakesoundorputrubbishontheground Iwishmyadvicescouldbegood Morepeoplewilllikereading Betterthegrammar Step2 GrammarplaysaveryimportantroleinEnglishwriting Howtomakethewritingbetter Commonmistakesingrammar常见语法错误 Partsofspeech词性 Formsofwords词的形式 Tensesofverbs动词时态 Example XiaoMingisamiddleschoolstudent Hedoesn tlearnEnglishcarefulatall Athome heenjoyswatchTV HealwaysforgottogooverhisEnglishlessons carefully watching forgets Partsofspeech词性 Formsofwords词的形式 Tensesofverbs动词时态 Hello mydearfriends Asweallknow readingisveryimportantforus Itcanmakesusunderstandtheworld anditcanmakeusfeelrelaxing Iwanttomakemorepeoplelikereading soIhavesomegoodsuggestion Wecanbuildlotsofsmalllibrariesinthecity Iftherearemorenewbooks peoplearemoreinterestedinreading Weshouldkeepthereadingroomquietlyandclean Itisapublicplace Youcan tmakesoundorputrubbishontheground Ihopemyadvicescouldbegood Morepeoplewilllikereading Findthegrammaticalmistakes make relaxed suggestions willbe advice quiet Betterthevocabulary 词汇 Step3 Bettervocabularycanmakethewritingmorevivid 生动的 andmeaningful Howtomakethewritingbetter 1 我希望你能帮助我 A Ihopeyoucanhelpme B Ilookforwardtoyourhelp 2 他们冲出教室去吃饭 A Theyrushedoutoftheclassroomforlunch B Theyranoutoftheclassroomforlunch Howcanwebetterthevocabulary Wonderfulphrases 短语 canbeusedinsteadofcommonwords Moresuitablewordscanalsobeusedaccordingtothecontext 上下文 1 Itcanmakeusunderstandtheworld anditcanmakeusfeelrelaxed 2 Weshouldkeepthereadingroomquietandclean 3 Youcan tmakesoundorputrubbishontheground 4 Ihopemyadvicecanbegood Morepeoplewilllikereading haveabetterunderstandingof noise throw drop aresupposedto useful enjoy Turntheunderlinedwordsintobetterones Betterthesentences Step4 Bettersentencescanmakethewritingmoreattractive 有吸引力的 Howtomakethewritingbetter 1 他得了第一名 感到很惊喜 Hewonthefirstplace Hewassurprised B Hewassurprisedtowinthefirstplace A IfinditreallyinterestingtolearnEnglish B LearningEnglishisinteresting Ithink 2 我认为学英语很有趣 Howcanwebetterthesentences Sentencepattern 句型 Simplesentencescanbeputintocomplexsentences 复合句 forbetter Bettersentencepatterns 句型 canbeusedtoimprovethewriting 1 Iwanttomakemorepeoplelikereading Ihavesomegoodsuggestions makemorepeoplelikereading Ihavesomegoodsuggestions Wecanbuildlotsofsmalllibrariesinthecity Lotsofsmalllibrariescan inthecity 3 Youcan tmakenoise andyoucan tthrowrubbishontheground Youarenot makeanynoise throwrubbishontheground Inorderto bebuilt allowedto Turnthesentencesbelowintobetterones or Betterthelogic 逻辑 Step5 Abetterlogiccanmakereadershaveabetterunderstandingofthewriting Howtomakethewritingbetter 表并列 and both and aswellas 表转折 but yet however 表因果 because so asaresult 表递进 notonly butalso what smore 表结果 so that such that 表先后 First Second Third Next Finally 表时间 when while after before assoonas Linkingwords 连接词 Howcanwebetterthelogic IlikeLiuQian Heisacreativemagician IlikeLiuQian heisacreativemagician because Makesentenceswithlinkingwords Hedidmagicshows well everyonewassurprised sothat 2009CCTVSpringFestivalGala heisveryyoung hehaswonmanyprizes Although Hello mydearfriends Asweallknow readingisveryimportantforus Itcan makeushaveabetterunderstandingoftheworld itcanmakeusfeelrelaxed Inordertomakemorepeoplelikereading Ihavesomegoodsuggestions lotsofsmalllibrariescanbebuiltinthecity iftherearemorenewbooks peoplewillbemoreinterestedinreading wearesupposedtokeepthereadingroomquietandclean Itisapublicplace youarenotallowedtomakenoiseorthrowrubbishontheground Ihopemyadvicecouldbeuseful morepeoplewillenjoyreading notonly butalso Firstly Secondly Thirdly Finally lastly so and Fillintheblankswithsuitablelinkingwords Betterthelayout 布局 BetterthegrammarBetterthevocabulary 词汇 BetterthesentencesBetterthelogic 逻辑 Howtobetterapieceofwriting 初中生写作四 定 1 定内容和结构 切题不跑题2 定时态 时态前后呼应 记叙文 日记一般用一般过去时 说明文 布告 通知 介绍用一般现在时 计划等用一般将来时 3 定人称 4 定句型 定用词 应依据内容 先定句型后定用词 写作应注意的几个问题 1 尽量使用简单句 如果复合句用不好就不用 文章算不上完美 但实用 但如果简单句 复合句交叉使用最好 2 把握要点 避免遗漏 注意适度发挥 3 检查时要注意标点符号和大小写是否正确 初中生写作黄金原则 1 模仿 胜过 创新 2 文章要有结构 不能想起一句写一句 3 写你会写的 不写你想写的 4 不要使用Chinglish 中式英语 WritingTask 英语课堂上 老师要求学生就 与人相处 的话题展开讨论 请根据以下讨论结果 以 HowtoGetonWellwithOthers 为题 写一篇英语短文 15分 要点提示 1 与人友好相处的重要性 2 如何与人友好相处的建议 要求 1 词数 80词左右 开头和结尾已经给出 2 文中不能出现自己的姓