高中英语写作-建议信幻灯片.ppt

高中写作专题一类 建议信 1 典型建议信范文 1 DearClancy IhavereceivedyourletterandIhaveknownthatyouarenotsogoodatChinese HerearesometipsonhowtolearntheChineselanguagewell 2 Firstofall Isuggestthatyoushouldspendmoretimepracticing listeningandspeakingChineseasoftenaspossible Youknow ittakestimeandenergytolearnaforeignlanguageverywell 3 ThenIthinkthatifyouhavesomesparetimeyoumaytrytowatchasmanyChinesefilmsorTVseriesasyoucantogetyourChineseimproved Ifso youwilldefinitelymakeitinlearningChinese 4 Thirdly Ithinkyoumaytrytosignupforsomecontests forinstance theChinesecharacterdictationcompetitionswithyourclassmatessothatyoucanbuildupyourcourageandexpressyourselfwellinChinese 5 IwishyougreatsuccessandrapidprogressinlearningChinese Iamexpectingtohearingfromyousoon Yours ZhangPeng 6 建议信是向别人提出合理的建议 让对方接受自己的想法 主张 解决有关问题 建议信不是投诉信 观点要合情合理 注意礼貌当先 同时 建议信要简洁明确 理由充足 具有合理性和说服力 通常使用 三段式 写作 通常包括 第一段 说明写信目的 第二段 提出建议与改进措施并给予忠告 第三段 表达希望采纳建议并期盼回复 文体概述 7 段首常用表达 I msogladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceon Inmypersonalopinion itwouldbewiseofyoutotakethefollowingsuggestions Hereareafewsuggestions tipsforyourreference Mysuggestionsareasfollows Itismypleasuretoofferyousomeadviceon 8 表达建议常用表达 Whenitcomestosuchasituation Iwouldliketosuggestthatyou should Itisnecessaryforyouto Inmyopinion itwouldbebetterto AsfarasI mconcerned you dbetter IfIwereyou Iwould Itshouldbeagoodideato What smore itwillbehelpfultoyouthat Whynot 9 段尾常用表达 Ihopeyouwillfindthesesuggestionsuseful helpful practical Ibelievethatyouwilltakemysuggestionsintoaccount consideration I dappreciateifyouacceptmyadvice Waitingforyourgoodnews I mlookingforwardtohearingfromyou 10 Dear Youhaveaskedmeformyadvicewithregardto andIwilltrytomakesomeconductivesuggestionshere Inmyhumbleopinion youwouldbewisetotakethefollowingactions 建议的内容 Ihopeyouwillfindtheseproposalsuseful andIwouldbereadytodiscussthismatterwithyoutofurtherdetails Yourssincerely LiMing 高中英语满分书信作文模板 建议信 11 作文常常感觉无话可说怎么办 12 十句文 1 收到你的来信 知道你的问题2 以下是我的建议 希望对你有用3 第一点建议做法4 此建议的目的或能得到的结果5 第二点建议做法6 此建议的目的或能得到的结果7 第三点建议 如果有的话 8 以上就是我的建议 如果能做到这些 我相信你肯定能 9 希望 祝愿你能尽快解决问题10 期盼收到你的来信 13 练习十句式 根据题目列出作文的中文大致内容 约十句话即可 14 假定你是高中生李岳 有感于校园中存在的随意涂写 scribble 和乱丢垃圾 litter 的行为 请用英文给校长写封信 1 说明写信的目的 2 对这些行为提出批评 3 提出建议 范文 2 DearMr Headmaster IamLiYue astudentfromclassone seniorII Iamwritingtodrawyourattentiontosomeimproperbehavioramongusstudents litteringandscribbling 15 Itmakesourschooldirtyandunpleasant anddoesharmtotheimageofourschool IalwaysfeelashamedwheneverIseethis Itisclearlynotappropriateforastudenttolitterandscribbleabout 16 Iwonderiftheschoolcouldplacemoredustbinsaroundandsetupspecificrulesagainstsuchbehavior Atthesametime studentsshouldbeencouragedtodevelopgoodhabitsandbetterbehavethemselves 17 Ibelievethat withthejointeffortsofbotherteachersandstudents ourschoolwillbecomeamoreenjoyableplaceinthenearfuture Thankforyourconsideration Yoursfaithfully Liyue 18 假如你是李明 你发现部分同学每次遇到重要考试 都会出现一些焦虑症状 请你用英语写一封信 向某学生英文报编辑反映该问题 信的内容应包括下列要点 焦虑症状头晕 乏力 睡眠不好 食欲不振等建议1 考前制定好合适的复习计划2 考试期间正常作息3 睡前洗热水澡 喝热牛奶等有助于睡眠其他建议 内容由考生自己拟定 词数 100个左右 开头已给出 不计词数 参考词汇 头晕 dizzy adj Deareditor I mLiMingofSeniorThree GuangmingMiddleSchool I mwritingtotellyouaboutsomesymptomsofanxietyamongusstudentsbeforeexams LiMing 19 范文 3 Onepossibleversion IamLiMingofSeniorThree GuangmingMiddleSchool Iamwritingtotellyouaboutsomesymptomsofanxietyamongusstudentsbeforeexams Mostofusfeelnervouswheneverwe retakinganimportantexam Somewillfeeldizzyortired somewillsufferfromlackofsleep andsomewilllosetheirappetite Infact allthesesymptomshaveterribleeffectsonourexamsandwearealleagertogetridofthem 20 Firstofall inmyopinion it simportantforustohaveafightattitudetowardsexams Theyareonlyameansofcheckinghowwearegettingalongwithourstudies sothereisnoneedtoworrytoomuchabouttheresults Studyhardeverydayandmakecarefulplansforeveryexam Inthiswaywecanavoidsufferingfromthepressureofexams Besides enoughsleepcanmakeusenergeticandenableustoperformwellinanexam Therefore duringtheperiodofexams weshouldnotstayuptoolate Wecanalsotryawarmbathoracupofwarmmilkbeforegoingtobed Theymighthelpustohaveasoundsleep 21 We dbettergooutforawalkordosomeoutdoorexercisesbeforeandduringanexamsothatwecankeepourselvesrelaxedandthenconcentrateourselvesonexams 22 假设校英语报正向全体师生征集关于 如何创建安全 健康 和谐的校园 的建议 请你就此写篇短文发表自己的看法 内容主要包括 1 绿色校园 人人有责 2 建立平等合作的教育氛围3 多进行紧急疏散演习 4 禁止携带手机以防浏览不健康网站 参考词汇 疏散演习 evacuationdrills 23 范文 4 Asisknowntousstudents schoolisourhome soweshouldtryeverypossiblemeanstomakeitbetterandbetter Thefollowingaremypointsofview 24 Firstandforemost itiseveryone sresponsibilitytobuildagreenschool Soweshouldkeepourschoolcleanandbeautifulinsteadofthrowingwastehereandthere Besides itisessentialtocreateanequalandcooperativeeducationalatmospherewhereallthestudentscanvoicetheiropinions Thirdly Istronglyrecommendthatourschoolorganizeevacuationdrillsonaregularbasistoensurequickresponsetoemergenciessuchasearthquakesandfires Lastbutnotleast studentsshouldbeforbiddentobringcellphonestoschoolincasetheysurfunhealthywebsites 25 Believethatonlybydoingthesewillwehaveamorewonderfulschool 26 典题示例 为了帮助中学生健康成长 某中学英文报开辟了 HEART TO HEART 专栏 假设你是该栏目的编辑Jamie 收到一封署名为Worried的求助信 信中该同学向你诉说了自己的困扰 近日容易发脾气 使正常的学习和生活受到了影响 请用英文给该同学写一封回信 要点如下 1 表示理解并给予安慰 2 提出建议并说明理由 参考词汇 tempern 脾气 情绪 27 词句推敲 1 给某人提建议 2 向某人征求意见 3 在做某事时遇到困难 4 依我看来 5 与 分享 asksb foradvice givesb someadvice on share with havedifficulty troubleindoingsth inmyopinion inmyview frommypointofviewasfarasI mconcerned 28 6 认为 有用 7 对 有影响 8 摆脱 9 向 求助 10 使自己适应 find helpful useful beneficial haveaneffecton getridof turnto forhelp adaptyourselfto 29 套用句式1 控制你的情绪以及用正确的态度面对现状是非常重要的 2 找他人分担你的苦恼 这是一个有效的办法 Itisofgreatimportancetocontrolyourtemperandhaveacorrectattitudetofaceyourpresentsituation Shareyourproblomwithotherpeople Itisaneffectiveway 30 3 保持积极向上的态度 这能帮你摆脱困境 4 通过这样 你就能释放压力 成为一个强大而且自信的人 5 我希望这些建议会对你有所帮助6 如能看到 我会非常开心的 Ihopeyouwillfindthesesuggestionshelpful useful Iwouldbemorethanhappytosee Remainoptimistic anditwillhelpyougetridofyourproblem Inthisway youcanreleaseyourstressandbecomeastrongandconfidentperson 31 句式升级 将第2句改写成It作形式主语的句子 将第3句该写成sothat引导的结果状语从句 将第4句改写成only引导的倒装句 It saneffectivewaytoshareyourpeoblemwithotherpeople Remainoptimistic sothatyoucangetridofyourproblem Onlyinthiswaycanyoureleaseyourstressandbecomeastrongandconfidentperson 32 妙笔成篇 5 HiWorried I msorrytoknowthatyou r