2017专四写作新题型特训 DAY 1.ppt

TEM4新题型写作特训 Lecturer 写作题型变化 1 命题形式略有变化 不再考查NOTEWRITING 2 写作模式有所变化Previously 陈述观点 论证观点 得出结论 重申观点或提出建议 NOW 概括双方观点 并提出自己观点 论证观点 得出结论 重申观点或提出建议 TACTICStogetexcellentmarks 仔细审题 分析材料 2 3mins 列出提纲 确定布局 3 4mins 导语部分 引出话题 概括双方观点 主体部分 提出自身观点 并列出多条理由论证自身观点 结尾部分 重申观点或提出建议3 正式写作 30 35mins 4 检查并优化 2 3mins 材料作文 Structureof1stpara Describeaphenomenon introducethediscussedtopic opinionsfrombothsides Introducethediscussedtopic opinionsfrombothsides OLDWINEINANEWBOTTLE 与传统命题作文并无二致 TheImportanceofKeepingaGoodMood Exceptions AmajoradvantageanddisadvantageofadvertisingonTelevision Previously Nowadays moreandmoreadvertisementsareseenonTVeveryday SomepeoplethinkthatadvertisingonTVcanbringuslotsofbenefits butotherholdadifferentopinion Inmyopinion I minfavoroftheformer Nowwhat PassengersShouldnotEatandDrinkonSubwayTrains Previously Inrecentyears eatinganddrinkingonsubwaytrainshavebeenfoundmoreandmorecommon whichhastriggeredmanyproblems Thus insomecitiespassengersareforbiddentodothatandviolatorswillbefined AsfarasI mconcerned eatinganddrinkingonsubwaytrainsareindeedimproperbehaviorsandshouldbediscouraged andthereareseveralreasonsaccountingformystance Nowwhat ShouldPassengers Inrecentyears eatinganddrinkingonsubwaytrainshavebeenfoundmoreandmorecommon whichhastriggeredmanyproblems Thus insomecitiespassengersareforbiddentodothatandviolatorswillbefined Therehasbeenaragingdebateoverthenewregulation Somebelievethateatinganddrinkingdon tthreatthesafetyofthesubwayoperationandarenotagainstanylawandregulation Otherswanttocurbthebadbehaviorsoastomakethepublicenvironmentcleanandtidy 材料作文 导语部分写作 大学生就业时该不该选择大城市 whenitcomestothevastpoolofyoungandunderemployedcollegegraduates theyarereallyonthehornsofadilemmaofchoosingaproperplacetostarttheircareer TochooseamoderncitylikeBJandSH ortostayinasmalltown isatoughquestion Somegraduatespreferbigcitiesforthemetropolisesremainsastrongappealtothemwiththemultitudinousopportunities Smalltowns insomeothergraduates opinion createacomfortableworkenvironment 3 微信存在风险之我见 Nowadays WeChathasgainedpopularity especiallyitsfunctionofShake ShakeandDriftBottlewhichallowsuserstorandomlyconnecttootheruserscloseby However somepeopleareworriedaboutthepotentialrisksbroughtaboutbyWeChat spositioningfunctionwhenusingittosocializewithstrangers 材料作文 导语部分写作 材料作文 导语部分写作 2 是否应该让年轻人担任政府要职 Nowadays whetheryoungpeopleshouldholdimportantpostsinthegovernmenthasbecomeacontroversialissue Manycitizenstendtodistrustyoungleaders workingabilitiesduetotheirageandlackofworkexperience However somepeoplebelievethatyoungstersareeligibleforleadershiprolesbecauseoftheirinnovationabilityandvitality 那么问题来了 Pros cons里那么多points 如何总结归纳 Principlesumayfollow Locatekeywords Writeaone sentencesummarywiththesekeywords MAINBODY 大学生就业时该不该选择大城市 Inmypointofview Ibelieveyouthisforustostrive andthere snobetterplaceforustodosothanbigcities Firstly althoughtheworkingconditioninbigcitiesisfarmorearduous wecanstillgivefullplaytoourinitiatives Secondly inbigcities there remorechancesforgraduatestoimprovethemselves Lastly owingtothefactthatmanycompaniesandorganizationsathomeandabroadaresituatedinhighlydevelopedcities 微信存在风险之我见 AsfarasI mconcerned itgoestoextremetoabandonaninventionjustbecauseofitspotentialrisks Firstly WeChatbringsaboutgreatconveniencetousersforcommunication Secondly WeChatpaysmoreattentiontoprivacythanothercommunicationtools mainbody Stance 1 asfarasI mconcerned 2 astome 3 frommyperspective 4 personallytalking 5 inmyview 6 frommypointofviewetc Elaboration 1 Firstandforemost besides lastbutnotleast 2First second third 3Firstly secondly thirdly 4Ontheonehand ontheotherhand 5Inthefirstplace inthesecondplace lastbutnotleast 6Initially besides furthermore lastbutnotleast CONCLUSION Inconclusion Istronglyholdthatitisbetterforgraduatestochooseajobinbigcities Theabundantopportunitiestherewillenableyoungpeopletoexploittheirpotentialandrealizetheirdreams Althoughlifeinbigcitiesmaybemoredifficultandarduous alltheeffortsandhardshipwillbepaidoffifwearedeterminedtoseizetheopportunities Allinall whileembracingtheconvenienceofWeChat wehavetotakemeasurestoguardagainstitspotentialrisks Aslongasweareawareoftheriskswhichareinherentinsoftware wecansafelyenjoythesurprisebroughtbyrecenttechnologicaladvancement Howtowriteaconclusion Allinall