英语人教版八年级下册Unit 4SectionB3a-3b.ppt

Unit4Whydon tyoutalktoyourparents SectionB3a 3bWriting WashiMiddleSchoolXuJin Lead in Doyouliketogototheafter schoolclasses Whatdoyouthinkoftakingafter schoolclasses Discussion Groupwork Shouldchildrengototheafter schoolclasses TeamReport Group1 Group2 Writing 李芳在最近的半期考试中成绩很不理想 所以父母为她报了个培训班希望她可以提高成绩 李芳有些犹豫不决 写信向杂志社的你寻求帮助 你可以给她哪些建议呢 要求 1 文体规范 无语法错误 2 字数70字左右 DearLiFang Yours Pre writing UsefulExpressionsIthink inmyopinion asfarasIsee children parentsshould shouldn t Iagree Idon treallyagree because Althoughsomeparentsarerightaboutdoingsth itisimportantforchildren parentsto UsefulExpressions Ibelieveitisbetterifchildren parents sothat Perhapschildren parentsshould could Ifchildren theywill Inaword Allinall Ibelieve Ihope While writing IndividualWork Tryyourbesttowritetheletter Post reading Peerreview同学互评 Exchangeyourpassagewithyourdeskmates andgiveaproperscore Corretthemistakes Astandardforevaluation 1 内容完整 语句流畅 无语法错误 书写规范 给12 15分 2 内容较完整 语句较流畅 基本无语法错误 书写较规范 给9 11分 3 内容不完整 语句欠流畅 语法错误相对较多 书写较规范 给5 8分 4 写出极少内容 语法错误较多 书写不规范 只有个别句子可读或不知所云 给0 4分 Collectivecorrection 集体纠正 Somestudentsshowthepassagestotheclassandcorrectthemistakestogether Onepossibleversion DearLiFang Idon tagreethatyougototheafter schoolclasses Becausealltheseactivitiescancausealotofstressforyou It snotgoodforyourdevelopment Inmyopinion youshouldhavetimetorelaxandthinkforyourself too Ithinkit sbetterthatyourparentsshouldn tcompareyouwithotherchildren Perhapstheyshouldletyoubeyourself Butdon tbeworried Youcanbefriendlytohavecommunicationwiththem Inaword Ihopeyouwillliv