7月7日海淀九龙25人白金写作课堂笔记.doc

7月7日海淀九龙25人白金写作课堂笔记(2011-07-07 23:04:07) 作业：1.增加高等教育的投资是政府目前的首要任务。2.在不久的将来增加养老金是政府义不容辞的责任。3.犯罪率是否得到有效的控制很大程度上取决于政府的改造犯罪分的政策。4.大学是否要推广像历史，传统文化这样的人文类课程很大程度上取决于学生的兴趣。5.如何改造犯罪分子是一个经常讨论的话题当大多数人越来越关注世界范围内不断增长的犯罪率的时候。6.为什么时尚成为人们选择衣服的重要标准成为一个经常讨论的话题，当大多数人越来越关注生活质量的时候。7.当家长和孩子之间缺乏沟通的时候，代沟就出现了。8. 当自然资源缺乏的时候，经济衰退就出现了。9. 当人们缺乏环保意识的时候，乱丢东西的习惯就出现了。平时学习的资料如下 /s/blog_6773a1430100l5nf.html/s/blog_6773a1430100l5nh.html/s/blog_6773a1430100l5nj.html/s/blog_6773a1430100iwmx.html/s/blog_6773a1430100moe0.html要求：第一步：同义词/近义词第二步： 主题句翻译（1）（2）（3）第三步： 168思路表+主题词经济角度的主题词正面：stimulate consumption 刺激消费enhance the product reputation 提高产品的知名度enhance the brand image 提高品牌形象enjoy the enormous popularity among the public 在人们中间享有很高的知名度。attract consumers to purchase products 吸引消费者来购买产品enhance the circulation of products 加快商品流通bring more benefits to 给某人带来诸多好处Generate more profits to . 给。产生更多利润Be regarded as the major pillar of economic development 把。认为是经济发展的支柱=Serve as the pillar industry in national economyFacilitate economic growth 推动经济增长=Serve as the facilitator of economic growth=Make contribution to economic growth 推动经济增长reduce the financial burden on the country 减轻国家的经济负担alleviate the financial pressure on sb减轻了某人的经济负担increase revenues 增加收益collect money from tax payers 从纳税人那里获取资金invest more into a field 投资某个领域反面prevent economy from moving forward 阻碍经济向前发展be regarded as the major barrier to economic development 被认为是阻碍经济发展的主要障碍bring more losses to 给某人带来很多损失increase the financial burden on the country 增加了国家的经济负担be afflicted with the heavy financial pressure from 遭受着来自于。 的经济负担=suffer from heavy financial pressure from科技角度：正面improve the technological strengths in different fields 提高在不同领域的技术优势technological competitiveness 科技竞争力boost the public enthusiasm for natural science 提高了大家对自然科学的热情motivate people to pursue science and technology 激励人们去从事科学技术enhance the national power in the international community 提高国家在国际社会上的能力improve national defense 提高国防力量guarantee the public security确保了大家的安全improve the national status in the international community提高了国家在国际社会的地位popularize science and technology among the public 在大众当中普及科学技术Technology serves as the driving force for economic development. 科技起着经济发展推动力的作用。Technology-intensive industry 技术密集型产业Develop high technology 研发高科技Develop environmentally friendly technology研发环保科技Modern inventions 现代发明Modern innovations 现代革新Revolutionary changes 革命性的变化Dominate the others in many aspects 在很多方面主导别人enhance the circulation of information 加快信息流通embark on the information highway 走上了信息高速路bring considerable convenience to 给某人带来巨大方便bring considerable convenience to people in communication 给人们的沟通带来巨大方便improve efficiency in work or other aspects 提高在工作或其他方面的效率diversify the public ways of life将人们的生活方式多样化convert the public ideology on .改变了人们在。方面的想法Be well-informed of 清楚地知道。 Be open-minded 思维开阔Have more tolerance of what is different from ones own 对不同于自己的事物抱有更多的宽容反面exert negative effects on the environment 对环境有负面影响trigger a series of unrecoverable damages to the environment 给环境产生一系列不可修复的破坏。bring negative effects to the public lives 给大众生活带来负面影响The widespread use of technology breeds the alienation among people. 科技的广泛使用使人们疏远。Make people develop an unhealthy lifestyle让人们养成了不健康的生活方式Lead a sedentary lifestyle 过着缺乏锻炼的生活方式Lifestyle-related diseases which are incurable不可治愈的与生活习惯相关的疾病Spinal problems 脊椎病Slipped discs 腰间盘突出reduce the opportunities of getting in touch with the outside减少了大家和外界接触的机会be addicted to such technological tools which have enjoyed the enormous popularity worldwide 沉迷于在全球普及的这些科技产品be indulgent in=be obsessed with 沉迷于。社会角度：正面strengthen the public responsibility for the society as a whole加强了大家对整个社会的责任心create a good social atmosphere 创造良好的社会氛围maintain social stability 维护社会的稳定sustain the social development 维护社会的发展ensure/guarantee justice in the society 确保社会公平正义ensure equality in different sectors 确保了各个行业的平等convert the values on 改变了。的价值观values=outlook 价值观 观念enjoy the keen insight into 拥有敏锐的洞察力The public awareness of environmental protection has been greatly improved.大众的环保意识有了极大的提高Improve the social system 改进了社会体制Make contribution to social courses 为社会的各项事业作出贡献Set up a sound social security system 建立一套完善的社会保障体制develop eco-friendly technology which can bring positive effects to the environment研发环保科技给环境带来正面影响Eco-friendly=environmentally friendly 环保的impose impacts on the environment 给环境带来正面影响反面endanger social credibility which is inevitable for the society as a whole 威胁到社会诚信，而诚信度对这个社会很有必要pose a threat to social credibility 威胁到社会诚信a civilized country 一个文明的国家reduce the level of civilization 降低国家的文明程度civil rights 民权inevitable =indispensable to 不可或缺的lack the awareness of environmental protection 缺乏环保意识There is shortage of infrastructure in many cities. 在很多城市缺乏基础设施Many countries are short of natural resources.很多国家缺乏自然资源There is shortage of a sound social security system at the moment.目前还缺乏完善的社会保障体系At the moment=today=these days=nowadays=in the present=presently 现在 目前Lack the responsibility for the society as a whole 缺乏对整个社会的责任心There exist undeveloped social systems including charity, healthcare and education. 包括慈善，医疗和教育在内的社会体制还不发达。Justice in the society fails the public. 社会的公平正义没有得到保证，让大家很失望。The order of the society is in a mess so that the public lives cannot be made peaceful.社会秩序混乱因此大众生活无法得到安定。In disorder =disorderly =messy 混乱Such violence as unrest, riot and conflict poses a threat to the public security.诸如不安，暴乱，冲突这样的暴力事件会给大众安全带来威胁。Be immoral at the moment目前缺乏道德约束Cultural identity tends to become less unique than before on the background of globalization.在全球化的背景下，文化特征没有像以前那么有特色。National identity tends to become ambiguous on the background of cultural assimilation.在文化同一的背景之下，民族特征逐渐变得模糊、Protect the endangered traditional arts 保护濒临灭绝的传统艺术have the bias against 对。有偏见=have the prejudice againstfar-reaching effects 深远的影响social melting pot 社会大熔炉Deprive sb of freedom 剥夺某人的自由 Some peoples behaviors are against the code of conduct in the society.一些人的行为有违社会道德准则。Be ill-informed of social ethics 缺乏社会伦理exert negative effects on the environment 给环境带来负面的影响consume natural resources in quantity 损耗了大量的自然资源公众角度正面provide people with more opportunities to take part in social activities 给人们提供更多的机会参加社会活动participate in=be engaged in= 参加impose impacts on the public psychological health 给大家的心理健康带来正面的影响improve the standard of living提高了人们的生活水平bring considerable convenience to peoples lives 给人们的生活带来了巨大的方便add color to the public lives 给大众的生活增添了色彩反面take away from sb more opportunities to take part in social activities 剥夺了某人参加社会活动的机会deprive sb of sth 剥夺某人的某事exert negative effects on sbs psychological health 给某人的心理健康带来负面影响bring much trouble to 给某人带来了诸多麻烦reduce the standard of living降低生活水平add boredom to the public lives 让生活变得无聊cause unnecessary waste for the public 给大众带来不必要的浪费expenses 开支 =expenditures教育话题：学校教育、儿童教育、成人教育、家庭教育等社会能力和工作能力正面1 Help sb develop an interest in which will be useful in their future. 有助于某人培养在某方面的兴趣，这将会对他们的将来有用。2 Make sb more sociable and communicative, which is beneficial to their future lives. 让某人变得更加有社交能力和沟通能力，这对他们的将来有好处。3 By offering more opportunities to sb, schools help them to be more experienced and easier to integrate into the society. 通过给某人提供更多的机会，学校帮助他们更有经验，更容易融入社会。4 Sb should be taught how to distinguish between right and wrong, which is essential in their future. 应该教某人如何区分是非，这对他们的将来有重要意义。Distinguish =differentiate 区分5. be made versatile， which will help them win more opportunities in the job market 让某人更加有才能，这会帮助他们在职场上赢得更多的机会反面1 Bother sb, therefore causing them to take no interest in . 让某人厌烦，因此使得他们对某事不感兴趣2 Make sb isolated and less communicative, which is regarded as the main barrier to their future because communication plays an important role in their lives. 让某人孤僻和不善于沟通。这被认为他们未来的主要障碍。因为沟通能力在他们的生活中起着主要作用。Ability grouping3 Fail to integrate into the society, kicked out of the fierce competition. 不能融入社会，被激烈的竞争所淘汰。学习能力和学校表现正面1. Help sb learn how to get on well with others, which is beneficial to their future work. 有助于某人学会和别人友好相处，这对他们的将来有好处。2. Cultivate sbs team spirit 培养某人的团队精神3. The spirit of teamwork 团队精神4. Help sb enrich knowledge and broaden their horizons, which is beneficial to their future work. 帮助他们丰富知识，扩大眼界，这对他们的家来工作有好处。Broaden =expand=widen5. Allow sb to take advantage of individual strengths and combined efforts. 允许某人利用个人的优势和共同的努力。6. When students are armed with rich knowledge and skills, they should be given the ability to enhance the transition from school to work. 当学生具备丰富的知识和技能，他们应该具备加快从学校到工作的过渡期。7. develop students/ childrens potentials in different fields 培养学生/儿童在不同领域的潜力8. develop sbs independence by offering him/her more power to determine what he/she should learn in school9. apply theory to practice 将理论应用于实践反面1. Hamper their personal development 削弱他们个人的发展2. Hamper sbs independence 削弱了某人的独立性3. Lack motives in 缺乏某方面的动机4. Make sb fail to get on well with others 不能和别人友好相处5. Lack the spirit of teamwork 缺乏团队精神6. Overshadow sbs talents in 掩盖了某人在。方面的才华7. Fail to explore sbs potentials in 没有挖掘出某人在。方面的潜力8. Make sb stubborn and inflexible in how to apply theory to practice 在将理论如何应用于实践方面死板不灵活9. Make sb reliant on others 让某人对别人产生过度依赖10. Lack loyalty to 情感和心理健康正面1. Exert positive effects on their psychological health 给某人的心理健康有正面的影响2. Help sb strengthen their self-discipline which is reported an index of personal success in the future. 有助于加强某人的自律，自律被认为是以后个人成功的指标3. Help sb build up confidence and self-esteem 帮助某人建立自信和自尊4. Strive for superiority 追求优越感Inferiority 自卑感反面1. Exert negative effects on sbs psychological health 对某人的心理健康有负面的影响2. Make sb feel arrogant and prideful, failing to get on well with others. 让某人感到傲慢和骄傲，不能和别人友好相处。Bigoted 自大的3. Make sb feel diffident 让某人感到自卑4. make sb stigmatized by others 让某人感到被嘲笑身体健康正面Help develop a healthy lifestyle which is effective to control diseases有助于培养健康的生活方式这有助于控制疾病的产生Participate in more outdoor activities 多参加户外活动反面Make sb get into the sedentary lifestyle which is the main contributor to lifestyle-related diseases.让某人养成缺乏锻炼的生活方式，这形成了生活方式相关的疾病语法内容有同学希望我推荐语法书，我觉得这本不错，外国人写的，简单实用哈/s/blog_6773a1430100rxzj.html下面是课堂PPT文件写作所需基本语法之 6大基本句子结构 主语：名词/代词/ving/to+v/ 名词性从句 To improve the standard of living is the obligation of the government. To provide people with free healthcare is the top priority for the government. Providing people with higher education is the obligation of the government.名词性从句 1）that +完整的句子：表示一个陈述事实的时候； 2） Whether or not When Where +完整的句子 How Why 3） what Which 谓语+宾语/主语+谓语 Who Whether or not one has a sense of humor is largely based on where he was born. FS-1 A is based on B. Whether or not one can succeed in the society is based on his educational background. Whether or not one can get job satisfaction is largely based on his career prospect. Whether or not one can feel happy is largely based on his inner feelings. Whether or not let children use computer everyday is a often discuss topic. _ Whether or not children should be made use a computer every day is an often discussed topic when many people have paid more attention to their upbringing. FS-2: 话题is an often discussed topic when many people have paid more attention to 背景。（适用于首段首句） What advertising can bring the society as a whole is an often discussed topic when many people have paid more attention to the effects of mass media.谓 时：一般现在/现在完成/一般将来/情态动词+v 态： 主动/被动 被动的使用场合： 1） 无主语的句子 2）当主语是泛指或不特指的时候，用被动态 BAD: We should protect our environment as soon as possible. GOOD: The environment should be protected as soon as possible. FS-3 A ensue(s) when B. A=名词 后发生的事情 B=句子 先发生的事情 Health problems ensue when people develop a sedentary lifestyle. Truancy ensues when children tend to take no interest in their studies. Recession ensues when the environment is seriously damaged. 语动词2.主语+谓语+宾语 FS-4 take effective measures against sth Take effective measures to do sth 例子: The authorities should take effective measures to preserve traditional arts.3. 主语+系语+表语 It is of possibil