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Writing 考纲要求 要求考生写出一篇120词以上的短文 试卷上可能给出题目 或规定情景 或要求看图作文 或给出段首句要求续写 或给出关键词要求写成短文 要求能够正确表达思想 意义连贯 无重大语法错误 写作的内容包括大学生的学习和生活以及广受关注的一些社会热点问题 在功能上 主要涉及事件陈述 现象描述 问题概括 举例论证 利弊分析 因果分析 观点阐述 观点总结 短文写作部分的目的是测试学生运用英语书面表达思想的初步能力 高分作文写作四部曲 1 审题构思2 列刚定局3 组织文章4 修改定稿 作文失分的原因 1 不会审题 偏离主题2 汉语思维 逐字翻译3 词汇量小 用词搭配不当4 句子逻辑关系混乱5 语法错误6 随意涂改 卷面混乱7 写作不规范 段落缩进 单词分行 大小写等 作文的有关规定 字数要求 段落要求 作文的硬伤 了解作文评分方法仔细审题 草拟提纲 切题是关键 Bicycle AnImportantMeansofTransportinChina 1 为什么自行车在中国这样普及2 和汽车相比较3 自行车在中国的前途 Outline 1 Peopleprefertoridebikesfor2reasons A convenientB economical2 Therearemoreadvantagesinridingbikesthandrivingcars A noairpollutionB lessparkingspace3 BikeswillremainanimportantmeansoftransportinChina 作文形式 1 中文提示 2 英文提示 3 中英文提示 5 图表作文 图表作文 表格 文章体裁 叙述文 描写文 说明文 议论文 论说文 应用文 文章结构类型 1 原因型结构2 比较型结构3 阐述型结构 原因型结构 Avarietyofreasonshaveledthegrowingnumberofyoungpeopletogiveuptheirwork Somepeoplehavegivenupacareerbecauseitisdemandingtoomuchfromthem Theyfinditdifficulttostandpressureandthecompetitionitentails Otherpeople onthecontrary havequitjobsthatareboringormeaninglesstothem 比较型结构 Itistruethattelevisionhassomebadeffects Foronething ittendstomakepeoplelazyandevenmorallycorrupted Foranother itisadistraction forwhenthetelevisionison itisdifficulttogiveone smindtoanythingelse ButweshouldnotforgettheenormousbenefitsderivedfromTV TVhasbecomethemostimportantsourceofinformationandculture 阐述型结构 Markingupabookisindispensabletoreading First itkeepsyouawakeandreadwithdeeperconcentration Agreatbook richinideas demandsmuchofyoureffort Youcan tletyoureyesglideacrossthelinesofabookandcomeupwithanunderstandingofwhatyouhaveread Inthesecondplace reading ifitisactive isthinking andthinkingtendstoexpressitselfinwords spokenorwritten Themarkedbookisusuallythethought throughbook 论说文的构成 IntroductionBodyConclusion 1 对立法Whenaskedaboutthebiggestproblemtoday manypeoplesaythatitistheseriousenergycrisis 2 Whenaskedwhatkindofcareertheywillpursueupongraduation mostofcollegestudentsrespondthattheywouldchooseajobwhichwillbringthemalotofmoneyandacomfortablelife 写好引言段 3 Whenitcomestowhatmakestheworldgoround somepeoplesayitislove 4 Thereismuchdiscussiontodayaboutwhetherfasteconomicgrowthisdesirable 5 Thereisageneraldebateonthecampustodayoverthephenomenonofcollegestudents doingapart timejob 6 Itiscommonlybelievedthattheriseinteenagesmokingistheinevitableresultofeconomicdevelopment Theyarguethat 7 Itiswidelyfeltthat 8 Itisgenerallyagreedthat 9 Thesedaysweoftenhearabout Theysaythat Butitistrue Closeexaminationdoesn tbearouttheclaim 2 现象法1 Recently theproblemof hasarousedpublicattention hasbeeninthelimelight 2 Inrecentyears manypeoplehavebeenfacedwiththeseriousproblemof 3 Oneofthepressingproblemfacingoursocietytodayis 4 Oneofthehottesttopicsmanypeoplearetalkingaboutnowis 5 Hereandthere incityaftercityacrossthecountry anincreasingnumberof 6 Now inmanybigcities anoverwhelmingmajorityofpeoplehavebeenawarethat Whatliesbehindthephenomenon 7 Withtherapiddevelopmentofsociety 8 WiththeInternetplayinganincreasinglyimportantroleinourlife 3 观点法Nothing wehavebeentoldthesesyears ismoreimportantthandoing NowherehasthegreatprincipleofequalitybeensothoroughlyputinpracticeasinChina Inspiteofthis however womeninmanyplacesarestilldeniedtherighttocompetewithmenforjobsonequaltermsandtherighttoequalopportunitiesforpromotion 3 Nowpeopleingrowingnumbersarecomingtorecognizethefactthat 4 Inrecentyearstherehasbeenanincreasingawarenessofthenecessitytodo 构筑主体段 主体段的功能就是论证和说明文章在引言段中提出的中心思想 第一步 写好主题句 TS 中心思想句是整篇文章的灵魂 主题句是主题段的灵魂 主题句的位置放在段首 HowtowriteTS 主题句的构成 文章的主题 作者的观点写好主题句的方法1 一个完整的句子 2 内容要清楚 3 内容要具体 4 不能是描写细节的句子 PracticewritingTS TravelingAbroad1 近十年来某城市越来越多的人选择出境旅游 2 出现这种现象的原因 3 这种现象可能产生的影响 Reference Para 1Inrecentyears peopleingrowingnumbersincityXareseekingtotravelabroad 接下来用数据说明这一趋势 Para 2Thereareseveralreasonsfortheshockingrise Para 3Beneficialastravelingabroadis itmayalsobringaboutsomenegativeeffects 以下讲带来的负面影响 WhyITakeCET 6 1 有人认为没有必要参加大学英语六级考试 2 我参加六级考试的理由 Reference SomestudentsthinkitunnecessarytotakeCET 6 A ManyreasonsfortakingCET 6arethefollowing Inshort takingCET 6isgoodtobothmystudyandmypersonaldevelopment HowtoSucceedinaJobInterview 1 面试在求职过程中的作用2 取得面试成功的因素 仪表 谈吐 能力 专业知识 自信 实事求是 Nowadays theinterviewhasbecomeindispensableinseekingajobIthinkitnecessarytofollowthefollowingsteps Itisverynecessarytohaveaninterview Reference ReduceWasteonCampus 1 目前有些校园内浪费现象严重 2 浪费的危害 3 从我做起 杜绝浪费 Reference Inrecentyears wastecanbeseenhereandthereoncampus Thewasteproducesharmfuleffectsinmanyaspects Therefore itishightimethatwehadtoreducewasteoncampus 第二步 写好扩展句 支撑句 扩展句的功能 是段落主题句的延伸和发展 起着辅助主题句 扩展段落中心的作用扩展句的特点 清晰详实 条例分明扩展句写法 对主题句采取设问 解答法 Why Because Practicewritingsupportingsentences 主题句 Environmentalprotectionisbecominganimportantscientificfieldandisdrawingagreaterattention 设问 Why Whyisenvironmentalprotectionbecominganimportantscientificfieldanddrawingagreaterattention Continued 解答 Because Itinvolvestheworkagainstwater air pollution desertexpansion soilerosion garbage esp plasticwaste acidrainandsoon Tosolvetheaboveproblems muchknowledgeandresearchworkareneeded Scientistsaswellaspeopleattachprimaryimportancetoenvironmentalprotection TS WatchingTVhasmanyadvantages SupportingSentences WhycanwesaywatchingTVhasmanyadvantages WatchingTVisagoodrelaxation SS1 WatchingTVisentertaining SS2 WatchingTViseducational SS3 对主要扩展句可继续设问 WhyiswatchingTVagoodrelaxation canmeetourneedsforrelaxationbyeasingourmindsandcomfortingthephysicalbody Thepleasantmusicandpicturescankeepusawayfromtensionandfatigue WhyiswatchingTVentertaining Itisimpossibleforustobeatthespotofallkindsofentertainmentintheworld evenwiththebestmeansoftransportation TVcanbringthemrightinfrontofusandwiththemourlifeisfullofjoys WhyiswatchingTVeducational EducationTVserviceoffersteachingprogramsonallsubjectsforpeopleofdifferentprofessionsaswellasforstudents childrenandagedpeople Itprovidesthewidesteducationandhaslargenumberofaudience Everyoneofus moreorless benefitfromwatchingTV 结尾段 1 对中心思想的总结2 对主题的解释3 结束句 最后的评论 结尾段举例 Inshort takingCET 6isgoodtobothmystudyandmypersonaldevelopment Toconclude noonecanescapefromtheinterview Remembertheabovepoints andyouwillgetthefinalsuccess 结尾段举例 Inmyopinion numbershavenothingtodowithluck Sodon tbesuperstitiousofthem Onlyweourselvescanbringgoodluck Inaword allthepeopleshouldfightagainstfakecommoditiestilltheyareeliminated 范文欣赏Job huntingforCollegeStudents Para1Wehavebeenhearingthatcollegestudentsarefindingitmoreandmoredifficulttogetajob Thesituationseemspuzzling Foronething collegestudentscompriseonlyalimitedproportionofthepopulation Theyshouldbehighlycompetitiveinthejobmarkets Foranother ourcountryhasbeendevelopingveryquicklyanditdoesneedalotofcollegestudents Para2Ithinkthemajorreasonforthesituationisthatcollegestudentsnowadaysusuallyhaveunrealistichopeswhentheygotofindajob Theymostlywanttohaveaneasyjobwhichpromisesagoodsalaryandalltheopportunitiestoadvancetheircareerdevelopments Theyarereluctanttostartfromtheroutinework say inacompany Para 3Asolutiontotheproblemrequireseffortsonboththesocietyandthestudentsthemselves Oursocietyshouldlearntovaluethetalentsandknowledgeofcollegestudents Bycreatingabetterenvironmentforthestudents oursocietycanbenefitfromtheircontribution Ontheotherhand collegestudentsshouldtakeamoredown to earthattitudetowardtheircareer Theyneedtobemorerealisticandprovethemselvestobecompetentinwork 图表作文开头表达法 Itcanbeseenfromthebarchartthatinthepast10years greatchangeshavetakenplaceintheownershipofhousesinChina Theabovechartshows demonstratesthat Asstrikinglyindicatedinthechart Asindicatedinthetable Itcanbeseenfromthechart table Asisclearlyshowninthechart tablethat 图表作文开头表达法 Inrecentyears peopleingrowingnumbersincityXareseekingtotravelabroad Asisindicatedintheabovechart Asseenfromtheabovepiechart Asshownfromthechart itcanbeconcludedthatAmericanstudentsprefertoreadpopularnovelsratherotherkindsofbooks 使用适当的连接手段 过渡词 用于举例的过渡词forexample forinstance suchas toillustrate acaseinpoint 用于比较和对比的过渡词 similarly inthesameway equallyimportant in bycontrast onthecontrary ontheotherhand unlike however yet likewise whereas while incomparisonwith 表示因果关系和分析原因的过渡词 dueto owingto asaresultof asaresult therefore so thus consequently accordingly asaconsequence inconsequenceof forthisreason among reasons inthat 表示层次递进的过渡词 first second third tobeginwith tostartwith moreover Finally eventually last lastbutnotleast firstofall next later afterthat further foronething foranother inthefirstplace inthesecondplace 表示让步转折的过渡词 although inspiteof despite evenif though regardlessof bycontrast conversely ontheotherhand nev