范超fc解2010年大作文大盘点.doc

根据王海涛老师前几年的分析和FC的分析，今年可以多关注下以下十大重点话题。注意这并非是预测，除非我老爸是出题者。这只是在纷繁复杂的材料中，为各位煎熬在考研第一线的同学们缩小下重点关注的范围而已。各位可以从原因，现状，结果和对策几方面展开构思和练笔。一 传统节日和洋节( 讲义上20大必备范文里有一篇，同时请看本文)FC之弱智版（几乎无任何思想）：写之前分析自己的思路，最好用简单的中文写下自己中间段的提纲（13段不要，2段最好要）我们把西方节日的入侵当作坏事来看。第一句：深层含义：节日的问题（名词）洋节在中国越来越流行了（句子）第二句：现状：很多人过洋节，却忽视了中国的传统节日第三句：原因：洋节比传统节日更有吸引力。同时也是人们在当代社会中的减压方式。（这其实是两句了, 两点原因写两句，这是写出深刻含义的最大法宝-挖掘现象背后的原因）当然还可以说由于经济的发展，我们只顾追求自己的物质生活，而忽视了中国的精神传统文化）第四句：结果：对中国传统节日有较大影响，忘记中国传统节日，对中国文化有冲击。第五句：传统节日应该被我们accepted但是现在却被抛弃了第六句：威胁性总结以上分析是把这个事情当作坏事写，而且明显很弱智，没有什么深刻的思路（除开原因分析和结果分析以外）。可见基本套路的重要性和因果分析的重要性。根据以上分析，调整好心态，把套句和实力都发挥出来，简单写作如下（写之前提醒自己：1. be careful! 2. 字一定要工整！ 3. 一句话里主谓是谁！ 4. that后只能接句子！）深层含义/论点：This sketch does reflect a thought-provoking social phenomenon which is not uncommon in China now: the western festivals are prevalent and pervasive in our society. 现状：Nobody could have failed to notice the fact that people in expanding numbers are enjoying the western holidays(换词), regrettably turning a blind eye to the traditional Chinese festivals.原因： 装B句：Several factors, both individual and social, could account for the negative phenomenon. 或者：The reason for the phenomenon may be complicated, but we can, to a large extent, ascribe it to the following interrelated factors.原因一和二：For one thing, the foreign holidays are so fascinating that the youth can not resist its temptation. On the other hand, with the quickening pace of life, people have tremendous pressure in this ruthless and relentless society, and therefore, the colorful western way of celebration(换词)becomes an effective and efficient way of reducing/alleviating their pressure. 或者：People are only in pursuit of the material life, totally ignoring the spiritual heritage（精神遗产） of the Chinese culture. 结果：This phenomenon, to some extent, has its merits. （还是得承认洋节也有合理的好处）However, it undoubtedly poses a probable and potential threat to our traditional Chinese culture which is far-reaching to our children. 总结：Were the situation to continue without proper guidance, the Chinese culture would probably be weakened and even eliminated.( 当然可以用前面教过的所有套句)另外：第三段的建议当中，我们可以写：1. We should be educated and enlightened to cultivate our awareness of traditional Chinese culture. （培养中国文化）2. It is sensible to （做XXX是明智的选择）absorb the foreign essence and resist its negative side, and combine the Chinese festivals with the western ones.（中西合璧）Only in this way can we preserve our glorious civilization and at the same time enjoy the western diversity. FC提醒：没有一种所谓的模板可以搞定所有的文章，不管碰到什么题目，都要以提纲为主，然后结合具体题目自己具体发挥，灵活变通。适当的使用套句和模板可以让自己实力成倍增长，一味的死套模板不顾具体题目的变化只会玉石俱焚二 伪劣商品 请看讲义上的天龙八部详解篇 食品安全问题，属于坏事一般写法，很简单三 乱收费问题 属于坏事一般写法，很简单其中，乱收费的写法：unreasonable charge 不合理收费，这属于教育问题现状：schools in expanding numbers ask for excessive expenses from students family原因：1. they are only in pursuit of their own profit, totally turning a blind eye to students economic condition and realistic interest. 2. The educational (supervision) system in China is far from perfect, which makes it possible for the immoral people to make money in an inappropriate way. 影响：The phenomenon of unreasonable charge not only poses a potential and probable threat on Chinese education, but also adversely affects social stability. 层进: we should provide our students with a positive educational environment, which should be accepted, appreciated and advocated. Regrettably, the current situation is incompatible with this ideal concept. 四 竞争 （基本同08年合作的写法）五 节俭与浪费 （讲义上有啤酒节一文，不过太难，直接天龙八部可以轻松解决，写法和食品安全，乱收费，环境破坏如出一辙）节俭：saving, frugal, thrifty (形容词) saving, frugality, thrift （名词）六 抄袭（讲义上20大里有抄袭一文，属于坏事一般写法，同上写法）注意抄袭违背了诚信和道德：credibility(honesty), morality 不诚信的行为：dishonest behaviors /dishonesty 七 大学生就业问题 （20大里有学生就业难一文，可以重点分析大学生就业的现状和就业难的原因）原因：1. 2.见讲义20大第十一篇就业3.Owing to the quickening pace of life and the unprecedented financial crisis, it is more difficult for college graduates to find their dream job.4. The overseas students come back to China, who occupy a great number of working opportunities from graduate students. 八 私家车和环境问题（20大里的，坏事典型，类似小鸟的哭泣和我进沙退，简单题）九 爱心 (好事典型题, 参看下文)图画描述：一个男人手拿500块，走向赈灾捐款台，而他脑子里想的是：妈妈，这个月我不能跟你寄生活费了分析：第一种写法：这当然是个好事，可以直接歌颂爱心，按照好事的一般写法第二种写法：按照人的价值取向，一面是自己的小家，一面是更多需要帮助的人，我们如何抉择？As is symbolically illustrated in the sketch, a man, holding 500 yuan in hand, is walking towards the donation reception. The most striking feature of the cartoon is that he is extraordinarily concerned about his mother, because he thinks that: “ Mon, I am unable to send you expenses this month”. Undoubtedly, this man faces a difficult choice/dilemma but eventually makes his own choice. Apparently, inferred in this simple picture is a thought-provoking issue: it is our unshirkable obligation to devote our love and support to the people who suffer from disasters. The past several years have witnessed the phenomenon that people in increasing numbers begin to share their love to those in need and spare no efforts to help them out of the desperate situation. This selfless behavior, directly or indirectly, not only plays a crucial role in rebuilding the confidence of the miserable people, but also lays a solid foundation for the moral education of the whole nation, and therefore, it should be accepted, appreciated and advocated. Suppose we live in a ruthless and relentless world in which people just care about themselves but turn a blind eye to others, the situation would become unimaginable and uncontrollable, and the morality of the society would deteriorate and collapse. 第一句：深意第二句：现状第三句：影响并且用了层进第四句：反面论证虽然只有四句，但是每句狂长，把课堂内容基本糅合了，考场上不用写这么长的句子。为什么没有写原因？因为不太好解释，所以现状后直接跟了影响，字数远远超纲了十 BT题：成功梦想和现实（看下文：幸福是什么）幸福是什么FC版Simple as the picture is, its subtle connotation endeavors to arouse peoples deep concern over the issue of real/true happiness. People have been in pursuit of it and always try to give a specific definition ranging from luxurious cars, expensive houses, other recreational devices, to their fame and reputation. Regrettably, it is rather superficial and even ridiculous/absurd to link happiness with material and financial success. The past several years have witnessed the phenomenon that a great number of wealthy people feel unhappy and even desperate, for the reason that they only place emphasis on(attach importance to) money, totally turning a blind eye to the spiritual/mental cultivation. In other words, this money-oriented altitude may not only exert an unfavorable consequence both individually and socially, but also adversely affect our state of mind. If we do not correct the misconception and altitude of happiness, we would pay a high price sooner or later. FC由坏转好版：Undoubtedly, the purpose of the picture is to convince us that due attention has to be paid to the issue of happiness. The past several years have witnessed the phenomenon that many people are only in pursuit of money and other material life style but totally ignore the real mea