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写作提升3句子间、段落间的衔接、过渡与写作训练(3)二、段落间的过渡词 同样地，段落与段落之间使用过渡词也会使段落间的意思更加紧凑，联系更加紧密，从而使文章成为有机的、密不可分的整体。段落间的连接可以分为以下几种情况：1表示列举或递进关系。常用的过渡词有：first(ly)，second(ly)，third(ly) .，then，besides，furthermore，moreover等。例如：Our school has formed a group of “How to get rid of the pollution of the river”Now I would like to give our suggestions on how to deal with the subject.First，we should make some investigations，turn to our teachers for help and consult some experts.We may also go to the Internet to collect some information.Second，we should hand in a report on the river pollution and tell the public our opinions.Third，we should，in groups，clean up the waste things on the river during the holidays，try to plant some trees along the river and set up some bulletin boards to warn people not to pollute the surroundings.2表示段落间的对比或对照关系。常用的过渡词有：however，on the other hand，in contrast，on the contrary等。例如：The traveling craze can be attributed to the following reasons.Firstly，the peoples living conditions have been improved greatly so that many people can afford to travel. Secondly，the higher requirement for quality of life makes traveling one of the most important amusements among the average people.However/On the other hand，the traveling craze causes many problems，such as the higher prices for all travelingrelated aspects，the overcrowded scenic spots，the lower quality of services，etc.3表示总结关系。常见的过渡词有：in conclusion，to sum up，therefore，in a word等。例如：21st century is the century of technology. Nowadays，technology is everywhere around us. The development of technology has a significant effect on society. Several technologies that we usually use are the Internet，computers，and cellphones.These new technologies make our life much easier and better.First，the development of computer changes our life.Also，the Internet is another useful tool for us today.In conclusion/To sum up ，I believe the development of technology brings significant impact to our life.It is very helpful to us and I believe technology will keep improving in the future.【体验写作】在空白处填上适当的连接词或过渡词，使句子、段落间的衔接更加紧密1IT helps us in many ways.(1) First，it can inform us of lots of information.(2) Second，it can make us work faster and more effectively.(3) Moreover，with its help，we can have more time to have fun.2As a popular saying goes，“Time is money.”(1) In fact ，time is more precious than money.When money is spent，you can earn it back if you want to.(2)However ，when time is gone，it will never come back.As the pace of modern life continues to accelerate，the time we can use is quite limited.(3) But there are a lot of things to do in our lives.We should make full use of our time to fulfill what is useful to us3Foreign cars are often more expensive in the United States than American made cars.(1) For one thing foreign cars cost more to buy.Of course，there are reasons for this.The quality of workmanship that goes into making them is very high.Then，high tariffs (关税) on many foreign models have raised prices.(2) Furthermore，foreign cars often cost more to register.In addition，insurance rates can be higher.(3) moreover，parts and repair costs are much greater than those of American cars.(4) However，there are some financial advantages of owning foreign cars.(5) First，many of them get better gas mileage，(6) and they need new tires less often than American cars do.(7) second ，their