考生便条中典型错误实例分析.doc

考生便条中典型错误实例分析1 格式错误 格式错误主要是日期(Date),称呼(Heading)和结尾(Ending)缺失,不全,写错或位置错误,标点遗忘或错用,大小写错误等. 错误一:不正确的日期格式 标点有误:如 April 23 2006； April. 23. 2006； 4, 23rd 2006； 23rd. Apri. 2006； Apri. 23, 2006； April 23th, 2006. 顺序有误:按照汉语习惯,将日期写在便条末尾,或完全按照汉语日期的写法写成2006,4,23 . 错误二:不正确的称呼格式 称呼与日期写在同一行:Dear Michael, 23rd April 称呼不规范:如 To Michael, Hello Michael 错误三:不正确的结尾,写成Your classmate Mary, Yours Mary, Sincerely, Yours, sincerely或遗漏此部分. 2 内容错误 错误一:便条开头不当,如Nice writing to you., Im Angela., Im your classmate Yama. 便条应开门见山,而不应当罗嗦. 错误二:遗漏所要求的内容或内容不够具体,如Please tell me the time and place for the excursion(内容不够具体) 错误三:写些不相关的话,如 I love traveling very much. And Im glad to hear that you also have some experience in it. 一个典型的例子是I enjoy traveling very much. It presents us beauty of our country and gives us opportunities to know our society. But I have just visited several places so far. On the one hand, I dont have so much time; on the other hand, I seldom have opportunities. This time it is an opportunity for me.字数为55字,相当于整个便条所需字数,而此部分的内容仅涉及写便条人对远足的兴趣,与主要内容不相关. 3 语言错误 虽然便条的字数只有5060个字,但是学生的语法错误和用词混淆等语言问题层出不穷. 错误一:语法错误 时态错误:I would like to join the excursion you organized. (应改为are organizing) Im interested in this kind of activities very much, so I write to you and ask about some more details. (应改为am writing) Could you please tell me the place where we meet. (应改为will meet) I want to know the time we left. (应改为will leave/are leaving) Please call me if you had time before you start the excursion. (应改为have) I heard that you were organizing a weekend excursion. (应改为are organizing) You know Im free this weekend, so I really want to join this trip. (应改为will be) 冠词错误:Youre organizing a excursion for the class. (应改为an) 语序错误:I need to know when will we come back, for Ill have other things to do on Sunday afternoon. (宾语从句中表疑问也用陈述句语序,应改为 we will) 一致性错误:Id like to join you, but theres a few questions I want to ask.(主谓不一致,应改为are) Can I join you to enjoy ourselves (代词与先行词不一致,应改为myself) 动词形式的误用:I am wonder if I can join you for the excursion.(应改为wonder/am wondering) We can have some games when we are rest. (应改为are having a rest/are resting) 句子中逗号误用:Im very interested in this trip, Id like to go with you. 以上例句错误地将两个完整的句子用逗号连接,而没有用连接词,改正方法是用并列连词或从属连词把两个句子连接起来.即Id like to go with you because Im very interested in this trip. 或Im very interested in this trip, so Id like to go with you. 其它:I have heard of that youre organizing a weekend excursion for the class.(应去掉of) Im not sure about where and at what time we shall meet. (应去掉about) Will there be any students from other classes join the trip (句中有出现了两个谓语,应改为Will there be any students from other classes who will join the trip 或Will any students from other classes join the trip ) 错误二:拼写错误,如beatiful, heared, nviroment, organizition, excusion等 错误三:用词错误 同义词混淆:Im looking forward to your answer/response.(混淆 answer, response 与 reply) Its a good chance to know each other better. (混淆chance 与 opportunity) Wish everything goes well with you. (混淆 wish与 hope) I hope I can join the trip, either. (混淆 either 与 too) Wish everything goes well with you. (混淆 wish 与 hope) As you know, we all need to take some time to recognize each other better. (混淆recognize与know) Please tell me the accurate time of the excursion. (混淆accurate与exact) Could you tell me the time and the address of the excursion (混淆 address与 destination) I want to know how we can get to the place and where well live during this trip. (混淆live 与 stay) I dont know when and where to attend the excursion. (混淆 attend 与 join) I affirm it will be a wonderful trip. (混淆 affirm 与 am sure) 搭配错误:Id like to join with/in you. (join 表示加入某人当中时作及物动词,直接跟宾语) Im really interested with it. (形容词与介词搭配不当) It may increase my view. (动词与名词搭配不当,应改为broaden my horizon) Thanks very much. (应改为Thanks a lot. / Many thanks. 或 Thank you very much.) Im