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广东英语基础写作范文选登 * 基础写作经典背诵范文(第1-2篇)1. 基础写作(调查“谁是你的偶像”) 【写作内容】 上周，我们以“谁是你的偶像”为题，在2600名学生中进行了一次调查(survey)。 以下是调查数据：偶 像( idol ) 女 生 男 生伟 人 18 % 18 %父 母 25 % 11 %影视明星 50 % 14 %体育明星 6 % 48 %（没有偶像） 1 % 9 %根据以上数据，写一篇短文，包括以下内容：1调查时间、调查问题以及调查对象； 2男女生在以明星为偶像方面的差异；3“父母”在男女生偶像中的排序差异； 4男女生在以伟人为偶像方面的异同；5你的偶像及理由。【写作要求】 1只能使用5个句子表达全部内容； 2文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。【评分标准】 句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。One possible version： Last week, we did a survey among 2,600 students on “Who Is Your Idol”. The survey shows that half of the girls choose film and TV stars as idols, while 48% of the boys prefer sports stars. As the data shows, “parents” rank the second for the girls, but the forth for the boys. However, the percentage of the boys choosing “great figures” is the same as that of the girls. As for me, Thomas Edison is my idol because his inventions have greatly changed our life.2. 基础写作(介绍奥运中的射击项目)写作内容 你很荣幸地成为2008北京奥运会的一名志愿者，负责编写奥运比赛项目的英语介绍。请根据以下中文提纲，编写射击项目的英语介绍：背景：射击最初只是生存工具，19世纪末才发展成为一项体育运动。1896：第一次成为奥运项目1904：中断1928：中断1932：重回奥运会1968：第一次允许妇女参加奥运射击比赛现状：稳步发展，1896奥运会只有三项射击项目，现今有17项。写作要求 只能使用5个句子表达全部内容评分标准 句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。【基础写作范文1选登】 Shooting, originated as a means of survival, developed into a sport only in the late 19th century. The sport first appeared in 1896, but none were contested during the 1904 and the 1928 Games. The sport returned to the Olympics in 1932. Women were first allowed to compete in the Olympics in shooting in 1968. The sport has grown steadily from just three shooting events at the 1896 Olympic Games to 17 today. 【基础写作范文2选登】It was not until at the end of 19th century that shooting, originated as a means of survival, earned its status as a sport. Shooting became an Olympic event officially in 1896. Yet, twice in history (1904, 1928) shooting was suspended at the Olympics. It returned to the Games in 1932, and women were first allowed to participate in the competition in 1968. The sport has been growing steadily from 1896s three events to todays seventeen. 【基础写作范文3赏析】 Shooting was originally a tool of peoples survival, which developed into a sports event at the end of nineteenth century (定语从句). In 1896, it became one of the Olympic events for the first time(简单句). In 1904 and 1928 Olympics, it was stopped, after which it returned in 1932(定语从句). It was in 1968 that women were allowed to join in the shooting competition for the first time (强调句) . From then on, the event is developing steadily and smoothly with the shooting competition number increasing from 3 in 1896 Olympics to17 by now(简单句中使用“with+复合宾语结构”作为状语).【专家点评】 这篇基础写作的内容看上去很多,要在规定的句数内完整地描述射击这项体育运动的发展过程, 如果全部使用简单句, 就无法在规定的句数内完成整体的写作。但考生经过对全部内容的合理安排, 使用简单句、并列句和复合句,就可在规定的句数内把这篇文章出色完成。这样在各个句子之间, 合理地使用了连词,保证了句与句之间的紧密衔接, 使得这篇基础写作显得非常的紧凑与简洁。基础写作就是考查考生整理信息和组词造句成文的能力, 具体地讲检测考生提取信息、分析信息、构筑信息、处理信息和表达信息的能力。这篇基础写作主要考查了考生构筑信息和表达信息的能力，因为在写作内容中已经把全部信息按照条目列举出来了。范文的作者恰到好处地把全部信息按照时间分割成：最初进入奥运进入奥运后的发展现状，四个阶段，然后按照这条时间线索进行信息的构筑和行文。* 3.基础写作经典背诵范文(第3-4篇) 成语故事基础写作(1) 画蛇添足请用英语解释一下“画蛇添足”这个成语故事。古时几个人分一壶酒。他们都想独自喝完那壶酒，所以就定了一个规矩：每人在地上画一条蛇，谁画得最快，这壶酒就归谁。有一个人很快就把蛇画好了。他正打算喝这壶酒时，看见别人都还在忙着画，就决定给蛇再画上几只脚。结果，他的蛇脚还没加完，另一个人已经把蛇画好了。那人一下把酒壶夺了过去，说：“有谁见过长脚的蛇？”。这个故事告诉我们这样的道理：做得过分和做得不够都是不对的.写作内容 1）请按内容要求写这个成语故事，要写标题。 2）这个成语故事必须包括所有内容要点，但不要逐条译成英语。写作要求 只能使用5个句子表达全部的内容。评分标准 句子结构准确，信息内容完整和连贯。 Drawing a Snake and Adding Feet to ItLong long ago, several people had a jar of wine among them and all of them wanted to drink it by himself. So they set a rule that every one would draw a snake on the ground and the man who finished first would have the wine. One man finished his snake very soon and he was about to drink the wine when he saw the others were still busy drawing, so he decided to draw the feet to the snake. However, before he could finish the feet, another man finished and grabbed the jar from him, saying, Who has ever seen a snake with feet?” The story of Drawing a Snake and Adding Feet to It.” tells us going too far is as bad as not going far enough.成语故事基础写作 (2) 刻舟求剑 请用英语解释一下“刻舟求剑”这个成语故事。故事大意为：楚国有个人坐船渡江时，他不小心把自己的一把宝剑掉落江中。他马上掏出一把小刀，在宝剑落水的船舷上刻上一个记号。船靠岸后，那个楚人立即从船上刻记号的地方跳下水去捞取掉落的宝剑。他怎么找得到宝剑呢？船又继续行驶，而宝剑却不会再移动。像他这样去找剑，真是太愚蠢可笑了。写作内容1）请按内容要求写这个成语故事，要写标题。2）这个成语故事必须包括所有内容要点，但不要逐条译成英语。写作要求 只能使用5个句子表达全部的内容。评分标准 句子结构准确，信息内容完整和连贯。Making His MarkA man from the state of Chu was taking a boat across a river when he dropped his sword into the water carelessly. Immediately he made a mark on the side of the boat where the sword dropped, hoping to find it later. When the boat stopped moving, he went into the water to search for his sword at the place where he had marked the boat. As we know, the boat had moved but the sword had not. Isnt this a very foolish way to look for a sword?4. 基础写作（“我与奥运”活动）假如你在春节期间到北京大学参加了一个为期十天的冬令营活动。以下是你参加本次活动期间所写的部分日记摘要。 写作内容 你拟向某英文杂志“我与奥运”栏目投稿，请根据日记内容写一篇短文介绍本次活动的内容及你的感受。你的稿件需包括以下五方面的内容： 1.本次活动的概况（名称、时间、地点）； 2.介绍校内活动的内容； 3.介绍校外活动的内容； 4.概述你对本次活动的总体感受； 5.你对本次活动的建议并阐述原因。写作要求 1.只能使用5个句子表达全部内容； 2.文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。评分标准 句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。=During the spring festival, I attended a ten-day winter camp in Beijing University. We took part in many different activities, including a lecture on Olympic Games History and an English language course. We also visited a new sports stadium; which is ten times bigger than our school! Although the lecture was a little boring, most of the activities were very interesting and useful and I had a fabulous time. I think the programme would be even better if there are more outdoor activities because they help to broaden our horizons.* 基础写作经典背诵范文(第5-6篇)5. 基础写作 (一场精彩篮球比赛)【写作内容】 假如你是篮球迷，昨晚你在家观看了一场N B A休斯顿火箭队(The Houston Rockets Team)与洛杉矶湖人队(The Los Angeles Lakers Team)的精彩篮球比赛 ，请你根据以下内容要点写一篇日记。1观看比赛的时间、地点及球队；2姚明来自中国上海，很高，是N B A顶级运动员；3. 他以精湛的球技闻名于世，却不忘他的祖国和老师；4. 姚明是你最喜欢的运动明星，是你心目中的英雄。【写作要求】1必须使用5个句子表达全部的内容；2日记的开头已为你写好。【评分标准】 句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。Sunday, Fine-One possible version:Sunday, FineLast night I watched an exciting basketball match at home The Huston Rockets Team VS The Los Angeles Lakers Team. As we all know, Yao Ming comes from Shanghai, China, who is serving in The Houston Rockets Team and is also a super athlete in NBA now. He is famous all over the world not only for his amazing height, but also for his perfect skills in basketball. In spite of this, he has never forgotten his country and his teachers in China. Yao Ming is my favorite sports star and the hero in my heart.*=*Yao MingMy Favorite Sports Star 姚明-我喜欢的明星I am a basketball fan. My favorite sports star is Yao Ming. As we all know, Yao is a super star in NBA now. He is famous in America not only for his amazing height, but also for his perfect skills in basketball and in communications. Although he is very popular throughout the world, he has never forgot his country and his teachers in China. Hes the hero in my heart.6. 基础写作（介绍2008年北京奥运会主体育场 “鸟巢”）写作内容 请根据以下的情景说明和写作要求，使用5个规范的英语句子描述全部所给的信息内容。假如你是一名导游，请你根据所给的提示，向来北京观光的外国游客介绍2008年北京奥运会主体育场 “鸟巢”。场馆名称 国家体育场（鸟巢）建设地点 奥林匹克公园 建筑面积 258，000m; 长330m；宽220m；高69.2m座 席 数 91，000 赛时功能 奥运会开幕式和闭幕式；田径、足球赛后功能 体育比赛和文化、娱乐活动中心 开工时间 2003年12月24日 完工时间 2007年底评 价 中国十大新建筑奇迹之一 写作要求 1. 只能使用5个句子表达全部内容；2. 开头和结尾已为你写好。评分标准 句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。 参考词汇：开幕式和闭幕式 Opening and Closing ceremonies娱乐活动 entertainment平方米 square metres Ladies and gentlemen,Welcome to Beijing! Id like to introduce you to the Beijing National Stadium, also known as Birds Nest. _ Thats all! Thank you!=One possible versionLadies and gentlemen,Welcome to Beijing! Id like to introduce you to the Beijing National Stadium, also known as Birds Nest. The stadium which is 330 metres long, 220 metres wide, and 69.2 metres tall is located in Beijing Olympic Park, covering 258,000 square metres. The splendid Opening and Closing ceremonies are to take place in Birds Nest, where the main track and field events as well as football matches during the games will be held.After the games, Birds Nest will be used as the center of sports games, culture and entertainment events. It began to be built on December 24th, 2003, and was completed at the end of 2007. People all sing high praise for “the Birds Nest”, considering it as one of the ten new construction wonders in China. Thats all! Thank you!* 基础写作经典背诵范文(第7-8篇)7. 基础写作（2008年北京奥运会火炬）写作内容奥运火炬已经正式推出了，根据下列信息，介绍以下奥运火炬。样式 整个火炬像一个中国传统卷轴，意在表明中国通过奥运会传播中国文明。因为纸是中国的四大发明之一，经由古丝绸之路将文明传到了世界各地。颜色 北京奥运会火炬由银红两色组成，体现了中国传统与现代元素。图案 火炬表面布满了据说能够带来祝福与和谐的“祥云”。性能 能够抗低压，低温，狂风暴雨。参考词汇：卷轴 paper scroll 祥云 lucky clouds 元素 element写作要求1. 标题：The Sacred Torch for the 2008 Beijing Olympic Games2. 必须使用5个句子介绍全部所给的内容；3. 将5个句子组织成连贯的短文。评分标准 句子结构的准确性和复杂度；信息内容的完整性和连贯性。=The Sacred Torch for the 2008 Beijing Olympic Games To spread the Chinese culture and civilization, the torch for the 2008 Beijing Olympic Games was designed to resemble an ancient paper scroll. As one of the four great inventions of China, paper has spread civilization to the whole world through the ancient Silk Road. And the whole torch is colored red and silver, embodying (showing) both traditional and modern Chinese elements. More distinctively, the lucky clouds that are said to bring blessings and harmony are covering the surface of the torch. Not only beautiful, the torch is so well-designed that it can withstand low pressure, low temperature and strong winds as well as heavy rain.8. 基础写作（介绍游泳运动员罗雪娟）写作内容 请用英语为上海出版的学生英文报写一段人物介绍，介绍游泳运动员罗雪娟。内容要点如下：1）罗雪娟（Luo Xuejuan）：昵称：罗罗；女，23岁，浙江人；2）从小接受游泳训练，2000年，崭露头角；3）取得成绩：2003年在巴塞罗那（Barcelona）世界锦杯赛中获得三枚金牌；2004年雅典奥运会打破世界纪录，夺得100米蛙泳（breaststroke）冠军。4）其他情况：由于身体原因，现宣布退役，将到北京大学读书。写作要求 1）短文必须使用5个句子介绍包括以上要点的全部内容，可以适当增减细节，使内容连贯；2）介绍须包括所有内容要点，但不要逐条译成英语。【评分标准】 句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。=One possible version： Born in Zhejiang Province, Luo Xuejuan, nicknamed Luoluo, is a 23yearold Chinese female Olympic swimming champion. She went in for swimming at an early age and with her great efforts, she began to show her great talent in 2000. Three years later, she drew the worlds attention by getting three gold medals in Barcelona World Championships. At the 2004 Athens Olympics, she broke the world record and got the womens 100-meter breaststroke champion. Due to health problems, Luo Xuejuan has announced retirement and she will study at Beijing University. * 基础写作经典背诵范文(第9-10篇)9. 基础写作（张华的一个梦）【写作内容】 请根据以下的情景说明，使用5个规范的英语句子描述全部所给的信息内容。张华昨晚做了一个梦，梦见自己为北京奥运会做一名志愿者。他充当来自世界各地的运动员及官员的向导兼服务员，给他们指路，为他们递送毛巾（towel）、笔、纸等日常用品，必要时还帮助运动员搬行李；张华同来自世界各国的外国朋友亲切交谈。在交谈中, 张华让外国朋友更多地了解北京和中国。外国朋友感谢他，并且称赞张华的英语说得很好。尽管志愿者工作辛苦，但张华认为很有意义。 【写作要求】 1. 短文的标题为：张华的一个梦； 2. 短文必须使用5个句子介绍包括以上要点的全部内容，可以适当增减细节，使内容连贯。【评分标准】 句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯 One possible version： One Dream of Zhang HuasLast night, Zhang Hua had / dreamed a sweet / wonderful dream, in which he volunteered to serve for the 2008 Beijing Olympics / Olympic Games. As a volunteer, he not only acted as a guide for the officials and athletes from all over the world, showing them the way to their destinations, but also was an attendant, delivering daily supplies, such as towels, pens paper and so on, to the officials and athletes. When necessary, he helped the athletes to carry luggage. In addition, because he tried / did his best to help the foreign friends from different countries know more about Beijing and China, they thanked Zhang Hua very much and thought (that) Zhang Huas English was very good / Zhang Hua could speak English very well / Zhang Hua was good at English.Although the volunteering work was simple and tiring, Zhang Hua thought it was very meaningful and he was quite satisfied with what he had done.10. 基础写作（迎奥运长跑）写作内容假设你校将举行为期一个月的“迎奥运长跑(Running for the Olympics)”活动，你作为通讯员将为学校英语通讯写一篇稿件，内容包括： 活动目的：提高学生体质，迎接北京奥运；活动时间：1 2月1日至 1 2月3 1日； 活动内容:：1 2月1日开幕式，全校学生将进行环校跑 (已举行) ；活动要求：同学们每天跑步，男生跑2公里，女生跑1.5公里；每班的学生总距离要达到2000公里以上，相当于从广州到北京的距离。 【写作要求】 1必须使用5个句子表达全部的内容； 2写作中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。 【评分标准】 句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。=One possible version:Now, a programme called “Running for the Olympics”, is going on in our school, lasting from December l to December 31. The programme is to improve the students health, and welcome the coming Beijing Olympic Games. The opening ceremony was held on December 1, when all the students ran together around the school. During the one-month programme, the students are encouraged to go running everyday, boys for 2 kilometers while girls for l.5 kilometers. The organizers wish that by the end of the programme, the total running distance of all the students in each class will reach 2000 kilometers, equal to the distance from Guangzhou to Beijing. * 基础写作经典背诵范文(第11-12篇)11. 基础写作（北京奥运会的口号）写作内容假如你是李华，请根据以下内容，给你的外国朋友Julia写一封信介绍北京奥运会的口号的内涵与特点。2008年北京奥运会的口号（slogan）是“同一个世界，同一个梦想（One World One Dream）,”其内涵和特点如下：内涵 1、体现了奥林匹克的精髓-团结、友谊、进步、和谐、参与和梦想；2、反映了北京奥运会的三大理念-绿色奥运、科技奥运、人文奥运；3、突出“全人类同属于一个世界，全人类共同追求美好梦想”的主题。特点 1、两个“One”优美排比（in parallel），“World”和“Dream”前后呼应；2、同一个世界，同一个梦想中的中文口号用“同一”来表达；3、文简意深，既是中国的，也是世界的；既易记上口，又便于传播。写作要求 1. 信的开头和结尾已给出；2. 只能使用个句子表达全部的内容。评分标准 句子结构准确性，信息内容完整性，篇章结构连贯。Dear Julia:Now I would like to tell you something about the Slogan of the Beijing Olympic Games.Thats all. Thank you. Yours truly, Li HuaOne possible version:Dear Julia:Now I would like to tell you something about the Slogan of the Beijing Olympic Games.The slogan of the Beijing Olympic Games, “One world One Dream”, fully reflects the essence of the Olympics unity, friendship, progress, harmony, participation and dream. On the other hand, it also reflects the three concepts of the Beijing Olympic Games Green Olympics, High-tech Olympics and Culture-enriched Olympics. “One World One Dream” is simple in expressions, but profound in meaning; it is of China, and also of the world. The two “One ”s are perfectly used in parallel, and the words “World” and “Dream” form a good match, so the slogan is easy to remember, read and spread. It is the word “tongyi” in Chinese which means “the same” that is used for the English word “One”, on the whole, which highlights the theme of “the whole mankind lives in the same world and seeks for the same dream and ideal.” Thats all. Thank you. Yours truly, Li Hua12. 基础写作（应聘北京奥运志愿者）写作内容 假设你是新华中学的学生李华，某英文报招聘兼职北京奥运志愿者，你有意应聘，请按下列要点给报社写一封自荐信，内容包括：1. 表示感兴趣；2. 说明优势：知识面、英语水平、合作精神、相关经历；3. 希望得到回复写作要求 1. 信的开头和结尾已给出；2. 只能使用个句子表达全部的内容。评分标准句子结构准确性，信息内容完整性，篇章结构连贯。Dear Sir or Madam，Im a student from Xinhua Middle School. Im glad to learn that you want a few Olympic Games volunteers, which Im quite interested in Im looking forward to your reply. Yours faithfully, Li HuaOne possible version:Dear Sir or Madam，Im a student from Xinhua Middle School. Im glad to learn that you want a few Olympic Games volunteers, which Im quite interested in I think Im fit for the job because as a student, Ive read a lot and have much knowledge in many fields. Im fond of English and do well in both speaking and writing. Besides, Im easy to get along with and enjoy working together with others. Above all, I once worked as a reporter for my school broadcasting station. So Im sure I can do the job well if I get the position. Im looking forward to your reply. Yours faithfully, Li Hua* 基础写作经典背诵范文(第13-14篇)13. 基础写作（中国的基本情况）假如你叫李华,你的美国朋友Daniel想在2008年随同父母来中国观看奥运会，他对中国很感兴趣,想及早了解中国的基本情况。请你根据提示给他写一篇英语作文。写作内容国名中华人民共和国 地理位置 亚洲东部,面临太平洋 面积 九百六十万平方公里人口 13亿 民 族 56 气候 冬冷夏热国情 1. 有勤劳勇敢的人民,拥有5000年的文明； 2. 首都北京将在2008年8月8日举办第29届奥运会。写作要求 1、只能使用5个句子表达全部内容； 2、文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。评分标准 句子结构准确, 信息内容完整, 篇章结构连贯=One possible version:The Peoples Republic of China lies in the east of Asia, facing the Pacific Ocean, and covers a total area of 9600000 square kilometers and five of the worlds 24 times areas. China belongs to continental climate, that is, cold in winter and hot in summer depending on different areas.China has 56 nationalities with the largest population of 1.3 billion in the world. We are a hard-working and brave people with a civilization of 5000 years. So we hope China will successfully host the 29th Olympic Games on October 8th, 2008, in the capital of Beijing, China.14. 基础写作（购买一本英语书面表达的书）【写作内容】 假如你是李华，刚进入高三学习，需要购买一本英语书面表达的书，请根据下列提示，写信给你在外文书店工作的朋友 Jack，请他帮你挑选。书的内容要求 1含写作技巧；如文章结构，过渡词使用； 2有多种写作题材及其范文； 3最好有近三年高考的书面表达题。其