高考英语书面表达.ppt

高考英语书面表达写作指导 漫画作文 议论类 2011届 江苏省石庄高级中学高三英语组郭金峰 Steps 1 读图 观察画面 关注题目及图中文字 辨明褒贬 找准角度 联系生活 明晰主旨 大概结构 3 列纲 全面 细致 2 解意 Structure 描述图画 表明看法 联系现实 阐述原因及后果 给出建议或解决方案 Thepictureisabout Thispictureindicates Asaresult Frommypointofview Weshould Steps 1 读图 观察画面 关注题目及图中文字 辨明褒贬 找准角度 联系生活 明晰主旨 大概结构 好单词 短语 句型 3 列纲 全面 细致 2 解意 DreamandrealityThepictureisaboutaboywhoisdreamingofcatchingbutterflieswhilesleeping butbesidehisbedstandhisparentswithguitarandpaintingtoolsintheirhands Ithinkthisisrathercommoninnowadays society Thispictureindicatesanincreasingtendencyforparentstodesignthefuturefortheirchildren Regardlessofthechildren sinterests someparentswantthemtoattendallkindsofotherclasses layingaheavyburdenontheirshoulders Infact thechildrenhavenointerestatall Thechildrenarekeptbusyallday Asaresult thechildrenalmosthavenotimetoplay Frommypointofview parentsshouldlettheirchildrendeveloptheirtalentsbytheirownchoicesandgivethemenoughtimeandspacetolearnwhattheywantto Childrenshouldbeencouragedtogetclosetonature Weshouldhelpchildrenturntheirdreamofenjoyingthebeautyofnatureintoreality Onlyinthiswaycanchildrenhaveahappyandenjoyablelife DreamandrealityThepictureisaboutaboywhoisdreamingofcatchingbutterflieswhilesleeping butbesidehisbedstandhisparentswithviolinsandpaintingtoolsintheirhands Ithinkthisisrathercommoninnowadays society Thispictureindicatesanincreasingtendencyforparentstodesignthefuturefortheirchildren Regardlessofthechildren sinterests someparentswantthemtoattendallkindsofotherclasses layingaheavyburdenontheirshoulders Infact thechildrenhavenointerestatall Thechildrenarekeptbusyallday Asaresult thechildrenalmosthavenotimetoplay Frommypointofview parentsshouldlettheirchildrendeveloptheirtalentsbytheirownchoicesandgivethemenoughtimeandspacetolearnwhattheywantto Childrenshouldbeencouragedtogetclosetonature Weshouldhelpchildrenturntheirdreamofenjoyingthebeautyofnatureintoreality Onlyinthiswaycanchildrenhaveahappyandenjoyablelife Para1 Thepictureisabout Ithink besidehisbedstandhisparentswithviolinsandpaintingtoolsintheirhandsPara2 Thispictureindicates Asaresult RegardlessoflayaheavyburdenonPara3 Frommypointofview Weshouldgetclosetonatureturn intorealityOnlyinthisway Steps 1 读图 观察画面 关注题目及图中文字 辨明褒贬 找准角度 联系生活 明晰主旨 大概结构 好单词 短语 句型 3 列纲 全面 细致 2 解意 4 谋篇 Let spractice Part1描述图画 表明看法 Thepicturedescribes isabout Inthepicture thereis are Asisvividly 生动地 鲜明地 showninthepicture Part2联系现实 阐述原因及后果 Thepictureindicates reflectsthat Whatthepicturereflects indicatesisthat Itisacommonphenomenonthat Thepictureshowsacommonphenomenonthat Part3给出建议或解决方案 Ithink believethat AsfarasI mconcerned Inmyopinion Frommypointofview Onlyinthiswaycan 注意 1 确定人称 时态 单复数2 根据所列提纲扩展句子时 注意英语表达的习惯3 利用一些表示转折 因果等的关联词和过渡句4 全面检查要点 语法和字数 Remember 一篇好的英语漫画作文 仔细审题准确立义规范行文整洁书写 审题 Para 1第一幅画 在刮风下雨 但是生长在温室里的花朵生长很好 第二幅画 花朵离开了温室 花朵不能经历风雨 很弱 Para 2揭示现象 对孩子过度呵护 一旦离开保护难以克服困难 Para 3建议 个人观点 家长不要过度保护 孩子要离开保护伞 挑战困难 Para 1尽管在刮风下雨 温室中的花朵生长很好 Asisvividlyshown itisraininghard buttheflowerinthegreenhouseisgrowingwell Theflowerinthegreenhouseisstillingoodconditiondespite inspiteoftheheavyrain Whenthereisnogreenhouse theflowerbecomesweakeasilyWhenexposedtotheoutside allkindsofweather Whenthereisnoprotectionof 没有温室 花朵变得脆弱 duetolackofprotection 花朵变得脆弱 theflowercan tadjusttothenaturalconditionsandcanhardlysurvivethebadweather theflowertendstogetweakerandweaker andendsupdying hasahardtimestrugglingwithbadweather andcan tsurvive failsto Para 2这是 现象的反映 Thepictureimplies reflectsoverprotectionofthechildren Whatthepictureimplies reflectsisthatparentsoverprotecttheirchildren Theimpliedmeaningofthepicturesis Thisisareflectionof 现象的进一步阐述 生活提高了 大人 小孩 Withtheimprovingoflivingconditions peopleprotecttheirchildrenfromallpossibledifficultieswhilechildrenseemtoenjoyitverymuch worryingaboutnothing 联想相关表达 溺爱满足一切要求视为掌上明珠爱到如此程度以至于 大人 peopletendtospoiltheirchildrenbysatisfyingeveryneedofthem freechildrenofalldifficulties peopleseechildrenastheapplesoftheireyes offeringalltheycantoprotectthem tosuchanextentdoparentslovetheirchildrenthatthey 同时 小孩 meanwhilechildrentakeitforgrantedthattheirparentsarealwaystheretoprotectthem childrenquiteenjoytheshelterparentsprovideforthem 结果 孩子难以在现实社会生存 容易被困难打败 Asaresult childrencan tliveintherealworldwhichistoughsometimesandwilleasilybedefeatedwhenfacingdifficulties losethecompetenceofchallengingallkindsofdifficultiesThereisachancethattheywillsufferjustasthegreenhouseflower Para 3要意识到问题的严重性和教育孩子的重要性 Frommypointofview weshouldrealizetheseriousnessoftheproblemandtheimportanceofeducatingchildren weshouldbeconsciousoftheseverityoftheproblemandattachgreatimportancetoeducatingchildren 作为父母 Asforparents theyshouldn tprotecttheirchildrenallthetimearenotsupposedtoIt sadvisabletoletalonetheirchildreninsomecases theyshouldinstructchildrentofacedifficultiesratherthandoingeverythingforthem 作为孩子 childrenshouldn tliveundertheumbrellaofparentsshouldfacedifficultiesbravelyandgoallouttohandlethem whichistotheiradvantage Asisshowninthepicture theflowerinthegreenhouseisstillingoodconditioninspiteoftheheavyrain Whenexposedtoallkindsofweather theflowertendstogetweakerandweaker Whatthepictureimplies reflectsisthatparentsoverprotecttheirchildren Peopleseechildrenastheapplesoftheireyes offeringalltheycantoprotectthem Meanwhile childrentakeitforgrantedthattheirparentsarealwaystheretoprotectthem Asaresult childrenlosethecompetenceofchallengingallkindsofdifficulties Frommypointofview weshouldbeconsciousoftheseverityoftheproblemandattachgreatimportancetoeducatingchildren Asforparents theyshouldinstructchildrentofacedifficultiesratherthandoingeverythingforthem Asforchildren theyshouldn tliveundertheumbrellaofparents Besides childrenshouldfacedifficultiesbravelyandgoallouttohandlethem whichistotheiradvantage Thankyou 1 Hello Helen Oh I thatyouarehere too A findB foundC haven tfoundD didn tfind2 Please youcanfini