「写作教程 第二册 答案[精制课件]」.ppt

Unit1 Follow upexercises 1 精制课件 Writeafocusedtopicsentenceforthefollowingsubject LookingforjobsApersoncanlookforajobinseveralways PenguinsPenguinsresemblehumanbeingsinmanyrespects 2 精制课件 PersonalityOne spersonalityplaysanimportantroleinforeignlanguagelearning WeatherLivinginaplacewheretheweatherisalwayswarmhasmanyadvantages 3 精制课件 4 ParagraphIAllinventionsareeitherbasicinventionsorimprovementsonearlierinventions Paragraph2Therewasaseriousaccidentinthechemistrylabyesterday Paragraph3Nutritionaldeficiencyisamajorproblemoftheelderly 4 精制课件 5 Paragraph1Theworldhasenjoyedmanybenefitsfromtheinventionoftelephone Paragraph2Ihadaterriblemorningtoday 5 精制课件 6 Topicsentence 5 7 4 1 6 9 8 3 2 6 精制课件 7 1 Firstofall2 Secondly3 Byandby4 Inaddition5 Inshort 7 精制课件 8 Severaltechniqueshavebeenusedtoachievecoherence l Repetitionofkeywords junkfood students asareunderlined 2 Useoftransitionalsignals Foronereason Also Asaresult however asareitalicized 3 Useofpronouns they their this asareboldfaced 8 精制课件 Unit2FOLLOW UPEXERCISES 3 WhenIwasachild wenevervariedourChristmasEveritual Wealwaysbeganourprivatecelebrationpromptlyat6p m onDecember24whenthewholefamilyassembledinoursmallkitchen WewatchedasMotherandmyoldersisterpreparedalightsupper Assoonaswefinishedthemeal werushedintothelivingroomtodecoratethetree Theyoungerchildrenstartedthedecoratingbyputtingtinselandcolorful 9 精制课件 ballsonthebranchesnearthebaseofthetree Meanwhile thetwoolderchildrenwereplacingornamentsonthehigherbranches Finally ourparentscompletedthedecoratingbyplacingabeautifulgolden hairedangelattheverytopofthetree Afterwefinishedthetree wehurriedlydressedandwalkeddownthestreettoMidnightMass Aswelistenedtotheservice werememberedthereasonwecelebratedChristmas ThenwereturnedhomewhereweatesomeofMother sChristmasgoodies WealwaysendedourChristmasEveritualaround2a m bygatheringaroundthetreeandsinging SilentNight 10 精制课件 4 Logicalsequenceofthesentences 4 10 5 12 3 7 15 9 14 2 11 8 13 6 1Topicsentence Myfamilyspenttwofun filleddaysatDisneyWorldlastyear 11 精制课件 12 精制课件 13 精制课件 14 精制课件 Concludingsentence Althoughwewereverytiredatmidnight weagreedthatourtwo dayvacationatDisneyWorldwasoneofthebestwehadeverhad 5 1 Then 2 morning 3 afternoon 4 Then 5 Afterthat 6 when 7 already 8 after 15 精制课件 6 SampleparagraphTheNewYearcelebrationwassounforgettableformewhenIwasachild WeeksbeforetheNewYear sDay mymotherwouldletmehelphersendoutNewYear scardsandgoshoppingwithher Inthecrowdedmarkets1boughtfirecrackers likealltheotherkids Then beginningonNewYear sEve thesoundofexplodingfirecrackerswaseverywhere dayandnight OnNewYear sDay Iwatchedhugeparadesgobyinthemiddleofthestreets Peoplewearingcostumesdancedpastus Someofthemwereplayinginstruments somewerehavingliondances anddragondances Afterwards weworshipedourancestorsinatempleandvisitedfriendsandrelativestowishthemHappyNewYear 16 精制课件 Unit3FOLLOW UPEXERCISES 3 Logicalsequenceofthesentences 3 6 1 4 7 5 2Relationship Primarily theorganizationoftheparagraphrepresentsmovementingeographicalspace 17 精制课件 4 l Standingintheburned outshellofmylivingroomwasashockingexperience Abovemyheadwerecharredbeams allthatremainedofourceiling Infrontofme whereourtelevisionandstereohadoncestood weretwistedpiecesofmetalandchunksofblackenedglass Strangely someitemsseemedlittledamagedbythefire Forexample IcouldseetheTVtunerknobandadustyCDundertherubble IwalkedthroughtheashesuntilIcametowhatwasleftofoursofa Behindthesofahadbeenawalloffamilyphotographs Now thewallandthepicturesweregone Ifoundonlyawater loggedscrapofmyweddingpicture 18 精制课件 2 Thecentralfocusis ashockingexperience Tosupportthemainidea thewriterusesalotofdescriptionsandorganizesthesedetailsaccordingtothespacerelationship andthuscoherenceisachieved 19 精制课件 5 1 into 2 crosses 3 Inthecenterof 4 Outside 5 inside 6 Onthefront 7 over 8 down 9 linedwith 10 Attherear 20 精制课件 6 Thisparagraphisdevelopedinacircularorder i e fromeasttonorth andthentosouth Youareencouragedtodescribethehouseusingotherwaysofarrangement 21 精制课件 Unit4FOLLOW UPEXERCISES Lookateachother sparagraphontheproceduresofcompletingsomehouseworkinpairs commentoneachother swriting usingwhatyouhavelearnedinthisunit 22 精制课件 3 Pattern descriptionwithsupplementaryexplanations 23 精制课件 24 精制课件 4 with 2 while 3 slowly 4 Gradually 5 With 6 Bythistime 7 Suddenly 8 final 9 ending 10 applause 25 精制课件 5 Task1 26 精制课件 Linkingwordsandphrasesthatconnecttheseprocedures firstly also afterward Then signalstheend 27 精制课件 6 AccordingtotheChineselunarcalendar the15thdayoftheeighthlunarmonthisthedayfortheMid AutumnFestival andthedayusuallyfallsononeofthedaysinthelatterhalfofSeptember Forthisoccasionpeopleneedtobuymooncakesinadvance Andwhenthateveningcomeswithafullmoonrising Chinesefamiliesbegintohaveabigdinnertogether Thefamilymembersenjoymanydelicacies includingsweetorsaltymooncakesaswellassome 28 精制课件 specialfoodliketarosandyoungsoyabeans Forthosewhoareabsentfromthefamily mooncakeshavealreadybeensenttothemdaysbefore Whenthefamilyenjoyallofthese theywilllookupatthefullmoon chattingormissingtheirfarawayrelativesorfriends Forthem thefullmoonsymbolizes reunion SuchfeelingsandscenesarefullyexpressedbyaChinesesaying themoonathomeisexceptionallybrighter 29 精制课件 Unit5FOLLOW UPEXERCISES TheoutlineforParagraphB Topicsentence WorkinginanappleplantwastheworstjobIeverhad Examples I Firstofall theworkwasphysicallyhard 30 精制课件 Specificdetails l Fortenhoursanightitookcartonsthatrolleddownametaltrackandstackedthemontowoodenskidsinatractortrailer 2 Eachcartoncontainedtwelve32 ouncecansorbottlesofapplejuice andtheywereheavy 31 精制课件 2 Thesecondbadfeatureofthejobwasthepay Specificdetails Iwasgettingtheminimumwageatthattime 1 25anhour plusaminimumofanickelextraforworkingthenightshift 32 精制课件 3 Theworstfeatureoftheappleplantjobwastheworkingconditions Specificdetails 1 Duringworkwewerelimitedtotwo10 minutebreaksandanunpaidhalf hourforlunch 2 Thesteelfloorsofthetruckswerelikeice thequicklypenetratingcoldmademyfeetfeellikestone Concludingsentence Ifelthumiliatedbythepovertythatforcedmetodosuchabitterjob 33 精制课件 4 Logicalsequenceofthesentences 3 6 1 8 2 4 7 5Pattern ItfollowsPatternlandusesmanyexamplestoillustratethecontrollingidea 34 精制课件 5 l Forexample 2 Furthermore 3 Instillanotherinstance 4 Even 5 his 6 these 7 contemporary 35 精制课件 6 Examples2 3and5arerelevantandspecific They reeffectiveexamplesthatcanbeused Examples1and7arenotspecific thoughtrelevant Examples4and6arecompletelyirrelevant Theydon t refertoaMassachusettslaw 36 精制课件 7 1 I veneverseenagirlaslazyasArena 2 EnglishteachersareapplyingdifferentmeanstoteachtheEnglishlanguage 3 Americanshavebeendecreasingtheirworkinghourssinceearly19 0s 4 Myfatherhasbeenagenerousmantohischildren 37 精制课件 Unit6FOLLOW UPEXERCISES 3 Subject Class CharacteristicsRepublic aformofgovernmentinwhichpowerresidesinthepeople theelectorate Wolf alarge dog likecarnivorousmammalwithyellowishorbrownishgrayandcoarsefur erectpointedears andabushytail 38 精制课件 Jazz astyleofmusicthatfeaturesimprovisationandperformancePersistence akindofqualitynotgivingupevenduringroughtimes 39 精制课件 4 Improveddefinitions Astadiumisastructureorbuildinginwhichsportsspectacularsareheld Socialismisatheoryorsystemofcommunityorganizationthatadvocatesthevestingoftheownershipandcontrolofthemeansofproduction capital landandsoforth inthecommunityasawhole 40 精制课件 3 Photosynthesisistheprocessbywhichplantsusetheenergyoflighttoproducecompounds suchassugarandstarch fromanumberofsubstancesincludingwaterandcarbondioxide 4 Surreptitiousmeans secret 41 精制课件 5 Politicalconservativesarepeoplewhoarededicatedtopreservingtheexistingconditions suchasWilliamF Buckley Jr andPatRobertson 6 Hearingaidsareakindofdevicewhichenablesdeafpeopletohearsoundssuchasnormalspeech 42 精制课件 Unit7Follow upExercises Keytoexercises3 1 Pattern singleeffectandmultiplecauses2 CausesEffect gotdrunkattheparty hadtakenthedrugofBartJr ssuicideAccutane adolescentdepression 43 精制课件 4 Logicalsequenceofthesentences 2 4 1 3 6 5Patternofcauseandeffect singleeffectandmultiplecauses 5 TaskOneTopic Societyitselfmaybeproducingthedistortionsofpersonality mentalillness andemotionalinstability 44 精制课件 PointsCausesEffect1society scompartmentalizing2 society scompetitivedemandsdistortionsofpersonality etc 3 inabilitytorebel 45 精制课件 6 Pointsofcauseandeffect 1 Thelorryisontheleftofthemotorcyclist 2 Thecarisnottravelinginthesamedirection 3 adogisrunninginfrontofthecar 4 Awomanisrunningafterherchildwhoisholdingaball 46 精制课件 Unit8Follow upExercises Keytoexercises3 1 Topic UniversityStudents EntertainmentTopicsentence Universitystudents entertainmentcanbedividedintothreecategoriesaccordingtowhereittakesplace Division a entertainmentathomeb entertainmentoncampusc entertainmentelsewhere2 Topic RolesofYoungMarriedWomeninSocietyTopicsentence Theaverageyoungmarriedwomenintoday ssocietyhasherlifedividedintothreedifferentroles 47 精制课件 Division a theroleofwifeb theroleofmotherc theroleofself3 Topic NeighborsTopicsentence Neighborsfallintothreecategoriesaccordigntotheirdifferentattitudestowardsyou Division a thosewhoarefriendlyb thosewhoareindifferentc thosewhohateyou 48 精制课件 4 1 Mattresses Queen twin firm doubleSinglebasis size2 Exercise Fatigue swimming gymnastics jogglingSinglebasis field3 Churches RomanCatholic Baptism Protestant OrthodoxSingleBasis branch 49 精制课件 4 Vacation Seashore winter summer weekendsSinglebasis time 50 精制课件 5 Logicalsequenceofthesentence 7 3 10 9 1 5 8 4 2 11 6Subject ChristmasgiftsTopicsentence Christmasgiftscanbedividedintothreegroups accordingtotheirafter Christmasfate 51 精制课件 Division thosethatarewelcomedandputintouseverysoonthosethatarehalfwaybetweenbeinghatedandlovedthosethatyoubanishassoonaspossible Concludingsentence ByNewYear sDay youhaveeitherused storedordisposedofeachofyourChristmasgifts 52 精制课件 6 1 types2 Though3 Finally4 however5 Eventhough6 Before7 third8 If9 Then10 these 53 精制课件 Unit9Follow upExercises 3 Pattern point by point 54 精制课件 55 精制课件 4 Logicalsequenceofthesentences 5 3 6 2 4 8 7 1Patternofcomparisonandcontrast subjectbysubject5 similar although difference identical again while But difference consistencycompletely 56 精制课件 5 1 similar2 although3 difference4 identical5 again6 while7 But8 difference9 consistencypletely 57 精制课件 6 TaskOne 58 精制课件 Unit10Follow upExercises 3 Generalstatement Theenormousimportanceoftelevisionnewshadstartedtheprocessofchangeintheprintedpress 59 精制课件 6 1 Thus2 When3 also4 however5 Moreover6 indeed7 also8 Yet9 and10 Thus 60 精制课件 Unit11Follow upExercises 3 Thedescriptioncentersononetraitofpersonality UncleAmos sbeingordinaryandaverageinlife 4 Fourmethodsused comparison 1 generalization 2 4 cause effect 3 Theonethatstandsoutisgeneralization 61 精制课件 Unit12Follow upExercises Readagaintheoriginalcompositionyouwroteongenerationgapandrewriteit Pleasepayattentiontotheorganizationalstructureofyourcomposition 62 精制课件 3 63 精制课件 Unit13Follow upExercises 3 sentencesthattell 1 3 6sentencesthatshow 2 4 65 Logicalsequenceofthesentence 8 3 7 1 5 9 13 2 6 12 4 11 10 64 精制课件 Unit14 3 Conclusion Washington sdemeanorwasatalltimescomposedanddignified GeorgeWashingtonwasdignified lookingman GeorgeWashington sappearanceprojectedanairofcomposureanddignity 65 精制课件 4 Thefollowingunderlinedsentencesdonotcontributetothecentralimpression Weusedtogosledridingdownitscurvinggardenpaths Oncemyfatherwantedtobuythehouseandfixitup Inniceweather weplayedpiratesandoutlawsinthelilacbushes Itwasthefavoriteplacetoplayinourneighborhood 66 精制课件 5 Logicalsequenceofthesentences 32718564 67 精制课件 6 1 cozy2 soft3 Ononesideof4 Nextto5 muted6 Ontheothersideof7 nap8 orange9 lighted10 sizzling 68 精制课件 7 1 Thewireremploysthespatialorderinhisdescription Theopeningsentencepresentsanimageofbothendsofthetable withtherestofthedescriptionorganizedfromthesepointsinspace Sentence2showstheprogressionofobjectsfromtheendsofthetabletothecenter Sentence3focusesontheobjectsinthemiddleofthetable Thusthereadercanvisualizethesceneveryvividly 2 Theprepositionalphrasesoflocationanddirectionare Atoneendofthetable Attheotherendofthetable Onabedofcreasedpaper Rounditsshin Besidethis Betweentheserivalends Ionwhichlaybunchesofpurpleraisins OnwhichlayasolidrectangleofSmyrnafigs Inwhichstoodsometallcelerystalks inthecenterofthetable3 Theverbsusedareprimarilystaticverbs like tobe lay and stood whichreinforcethespatialpatternandcontributetothecentralimpression Theyareeffectiveforthepurposeasthepintofviewisthatofanobserverwhoisclosetothescenebeingdescribed 69 精制课件 4 70 精制课件 Unit15 3 paragraph1 Introduction thesisstatement Paragraph2 SupportingparagraphTopic discoveriesofmanufacturesExamples sugar foodsandcosmeticsParagraph3 SupportingparagraphTopic discoveriesofexperimentsExamples red blue yellow 71 精制课件 4 1 Thethesisstatementisthefistsentenceinthefirstparagraph 2 thepurposeistoinform Methodsofdevelopment a processofcalciumcollectioninbonesoverlongtimes b scientificdeductionfromthechangeinbones c exampletosupportthethesis 72 精制课件 3 Unity byintroducingthethesis information inthefistparagraph andexplainingthekeypointsinvolvedintheinformation i e whatcalciumandcalcium 9inbonesareandhowtheycomeintobeing andhowscientistscanmakeuseoftheminthesecondparagraph andfinallycitinganexampletoconfirmthetruthoftheinformation Coherence a byrepetitionofkeywords bones method calcium calcium 9 archaeologistsb byuseoftransitionalwordsandphrases while when because incomparisonto actually littlebylittle 73 精制课件 5 1 confirmed2 findings3 than4 Whereas5 as6 if7 together8 leadto9 where10 adults 74 精制课件 6 Purpose Toinformdriversthattheyshouldkeepthefour secondruleinsteadofthetwo secondruleonhighwaysinordertoavoidcollisionorpileups Topic1 Howcanadriverwhoisfollowingthetwo secondrulecauseachain reactioncollision 1 Mostmultiple carpileupsoccuratspeedsover55milesperhour 2 Theirdriversmayobservethefamoustwo secondrule 3 Thisrulemeanstokeeptwosecondsoftravelingtimebehindthevehicleahead 75 精制课件 Topic3 alsorest