八年级上册书面表达训练(下).doc

八年级上册书面表达训练作文指导加范例点评与练习( 下)Unit 6Im going to study computer science.写作指南本单元的写作是介绍自己或他人的理想中的工作。在写这样的文章时，首先要写出自己或他人的理想是什么，即希望成为什么人，为什么希望成为那样的人；其次写出应该怎样朝着理想去努力奋斗，即怎样做来实现理想；最后点题。因为是理想中的工作，所以常用be going to 表示的将来时态来描述。假如你是韩明(15岁)，请根据下面的提示词，以My future job为题写一篇短文，60词左右。提示词：like，play sports，write articles，school magazine，sports reporter，grow up，newspaper，work for，CCTVMy future jobIm Han Ming. I am fifteen years old. I like playing sports and writing articles. I play football and basketball every day. And I often write articles for our school magazine. I want to be a sports reporter when I grow up. I am going to write articles for newspapers. And I want to work for CCTV as a sports reporter. Now I work very hard. I think my dream will come true.点评：本文是谈论将来打算的一篇文章。作者根据所给提示，运用be going to 结构，表明了自己为实现愿望所要做出的努力，使文章活泼生动，主题鲜明。写作练习：请你根据下面表格中的提示内容，写一篇英语短文，介绍一下这四位同学的梦想以及他们实现梦想的方式。要求不少于70词。NameDreamHow to do thatFranka computer programmerstudy hard to learn computer scienceSaraha cooklearn from her uncle who is good at cookingMikea writerkeep on writing articlesLindaa pianistuse free time to take piano lessons and practice playing it 参考范文：Everyone has different dreams. Frank is going to be a computer programmer. He is going to study computer science hard. Sarah is going to be a good cook. Her uncle is good at cooking and she is going to learn it from him. Mike is going to keep on writing articles and send them to magazines and newspapers. Linda is going to going to be a pianist. She is going to take piano lessons in her free time and spend more time practicing playing the piano.Unit 7Will people have robots?写作指南本单元的写作要求是对未来生活的变化进行描述。写此类文章需要注意以下事项：1要在“变化”上下工夫，什么样的变化、变化的程度等；且时态多为一般将来时。如果与以前作比较，还可用过去时；如果与现在作比较，可用现在时。2注意基本功的训练，力求语法正确、用词得当、语言地道。单词拼写、标点符号以及书写也是不容忽视的。刘英是一个12岁的女孩，她经常梦想她未来的生活。看下面的表格，写一篇80词左右的短文。NowFutureJobstudentdancerHairshort，straightlong，curlyPlace to liveGuangzhouBeijingTransportationsubwayher own carSportstennisgolfPetstortoisedalmatian(斑点狗)Liu Ying is a twelve-year old girl. She is a student with short straight hair. She lives in Guangzhou and goes to school by subway. She likes playing tennis. She has a pet tortoise. In the future，she wants to be a dancer with long curly hair. She wants to live in Beijing. She will have her own car. She will play golf twice or three times a week. She will have a pet dalmatian.点评：根据要求和提示，作者以第三人称的口气描写了刘英未来的生活梦想。全文恰当地使用了一般将来时态。同时，作者用语通顺简练。例如，“She is a student with short straight hair.”和“She wants to be a dancer with long curly hair.”等，都证实了作者的语言功底。写作练习： 请根据下面的提示，以My hometown in 20 years 为题写一篇70词左右的作文. 提示：1. better environment , bluer sky ,cleaner water, fresher air.2. more people , bigger houses3. happier life 参考范文： My hometown in 20 years I think my hometown will be very different in 20 years . My hometown will become cleaner and more beautiful in 20 years . There will be less pollution and we will see blue sky more often . The water will be cleaner and the air will be fresher . There will be more people in my hometown and people will be able to live in bigger houses . It will also be easier for them to go around. People will become richer and happier. I love my hometown . I hope it will become more and more beautiful . Unit 8How do you make a banana milk shake?写作指南本单元的写作是写某食物制作的过程。在写食物制作过程的文章时，要写清楚所用的各种原料；运用表示先后顺序的first，next，then，finally等词，将各种原料按照先后顺序合理地搭配，写成一篇连贯的食物制作的短文。可运用祈使句，配以恰当的短语。你知道怎样制作苹果奶昔吗？根据下面的图画提示写一篇60词左右的短文，简单介绍一下苹果奶昔的做法。短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数。The apple milk shake is healthy and delicious. Do you like it？Now let me teach you how to make it._.The apple milk shake is healthy and delicious. Do you like it？Now let me teach you how to make it.You need three apples，some icecream and a bottle of milk. First，peel the apples and cut them up. Next，put the apple pieces and icecream into the blender. Then pour the milk into the blender. Turn on the blender and have it work for about one minute. Finally，pour the milk shake into a glass. Now its time to enjoy it!点评：作者按照先后顺序用简洁的语言，根据图画提示将过程描述得恰到好处。作者恰当地运用了表示顺序的词：first，next，then，finally，抓住了重点。同时用了一些词语：cut up，put into，turn on等，使文章充实丰满。写作练习： 假设你是Frank，上周日你妈妈给你做了一份牛肉三明治，你觉得特别好吃。请你根据下面的图表，写一篇70词左右的英语短文，简要的向大家介绍一下你妈妈制作牛肉三明治的过程。 Ingredients: *2 pieces of bread *1spoon of butter *1 onion and 1 tomato (cut up ) *some lettuce *4 pieces of beef *2 spoons of relish(调味品） 参考答案： Last Sunday, my mother mae a beef sandwich for me. It was very delicious and I loved it very much. Now let me tell you how to make a beef sandwich.First, put a spoon of butter on a piece of bread. After that, cut up an onion and a tomato and add then to the bread. Next, put some lettuce and four pieces of beef on the bread. Then put two spoons of relish on the beef. Finally, put another piece of bread on the top. Unit 9Can you come to my party？ 写作指南本单元的写作主要是写关于邀请及回复邀请的文章。在写这样的文章时，不免会用到电子邮件。Email 有正规的格式，但是我们在写作时常用非正式的文体。正文前的称呼通常较为随便，一般不使用如“Dear Mr. Wang”之类的表达。在同辈的亲朋好友或同事间可以直呼其名，但对长辈或上级最好使用头衔加上姓。信尾客套语通常很简明，只须一词像“Thanks，Best，Love”等，不需要一般信函中的“Sincerely yours”或“Best regards”。称呼和正文之间，段落之间，正文和信尾客套话之间一般空一行，开头无须空格。在写正文时，要先对别人的邀请进行感谢。然后叙述不能接受邀请的理由。最后祝他人过得快乐。假如你叫迈克，你的朋友Tom邀请你下周某一天和他一起去参观一个摄影展。请根据你的日程安排给Tom回一封email，说明你不去的理由。Sundaydo the shopping with my motherMondayfinish the math homeworkTuesdayfootball match at 4：00 on TVWednesdaygo to the doctorThursdayhelp my brother with his mathFridayhave a piano lessonSaturdayhelp my parents with the housework the whole dayDear Tom，_Dear Tom，Thanks a lot for the invitation. Im sorry I cant go with you next week. I have a really busy week. On Sunday，Im doing the shopping with my mother. On Monday，I have to finish my math homework. On Tuesday，Im watching the football match at 4：00 on TV. And Im going to the doctor on Wednesday. On Thursday Im helping my brother with his math. On Friday，I have to have a piano lesson. On Saturday Im going to help my parents with the housework the whole day.Yours，Mike点评：首先对别人的邀请表示感谢，对不能接受邀请而表示歉意，并详细陈述理由。对理由的陈述条理而清晰，详细而不啰嗦。写作练习： 假设你是赵凯，你的朋友Frank 邀请你明天参加他的生日聚会。但你的父母在外地出差，奶奶又卧病在床，需要人照顾。并且英语考试即将来临，因此，你无法去参加他的生日聚会。请你给Frank 写封信说明情况，表达歉意，并祝他生日快乐，玩的开心。70词左右（信的格式及开头已给出，不计入总词数）。Dear Frank,Thank you very much for inviting me to your birthday party tomorrow._ Yours, Zhao Kai 参考答案：Dear Frank,Thank you very much for inviting me to your birthday party tomorrow. Id love to go but I am afraid I cant. My parents are away on business. They wont come back until next week, so I have to look after my grandma at home because she is ill in bed. And I also need to prepare for the coming English exam. Is very sorry I cant go to your party . Thank you for inviting me. I hope you can have a good time. Yours, Zhao Kai Unit 10If you go to the party，youll have a great time!写作指南本单元的写作是描写假设情况的文章。写这样的文章时要注意：1正确使用好if引导的条件状语从句。在条件状语从句中，一般使用一般现在时表示将来，主句常用一般将来时。2使用生动的语言，把自己的观点、看法描述出来。让读者能感受到颜色、声音、气味等。3在描写的过程中，要运用恰当的过渡词语，使文章衔接自然。你将来可能会有很多钱，请你以 If I have a lot of money，I will .为题，写一篇短文，表述自己拥有财富后将如何帮助他人。If I have a lot of money，I will ._If I have a lot of money，I will .If I have a lot of money，I will buy what I need and do what I want，such as traveling around the world，studying abroad and buying my parents a big house. I hope my dream will come true. Of course，I will do something helpful to others. I will give away money to charities. I will help those kids who are too poor to go to school. In a word，if I have a lot of money，I can do a lot of wonderful things and make a contribution to our country.点评：作者开篇点题，“如果我有很多钱，我就买我需要的，做我想做的”。进而列举了很多想做的事情。作者运用了许多连接词，如：such