科技论文翻译个人常见错误总结.doc

201004论文翻译个人常见错误总结1. 分析:太中文化原文示例: Aiming at the problem that the wireless sensor network (WSN) node is with limited energy and computing capabilities修改后: Aiming at the problem that the energy and computing capabilities of the wireless sensor network (WSN) node is limited2. 分析:状语?使用方式错误。分词做状语原文示例: A Real time success-Non-free-auction(RTS-NF-A) scheme is proposed with new policies are added into tradition auction scheme.修改后: A Real time success-Non-free-auction(RTS-NF-A) scheme is proposed with new policies being added into tradition auction scheme.3. 分析:词性混淆。句式错误。And 连接两个句子，只省略主语不能省略谓语。原文示例: the proposed scheme is in-time updating, flexibility, and ?high consultation rate of success修改后: the proposed scheme is in-time updating, flexible and has high consultation rate of success4. 分析:状语从句的使用，句式不熟悉。原文示例: WSN is a self organizing wireless network composed of a set of random geographically distributed sensor修改后: WSN is a self organizing wireless network which is composed of a set of random geographically distributed sensor5. 分析:1，词性不对；2，句子结构混乱，不知所云。原文示例: Task allocation is a broad area of high-performance computing research problems修改后: Task allocation is an issue which is studied in high-performance computing broadly.6. 分析:句首大写。名词所有格。原文示例: the traditional field of distributed algorithms can not be applied directly as wireless sensor network node capacity and capability is limited.修改后: The traditional field of distributed algorithms can not be applied directly as wireless sensor network nodes capacity and capability is limited.7. 分析:冠词用法粗心。句子不完整，缺少谓语。原文示例: WSN can be seen as a MAS if a sensor is regard as a agent. However, wireless sensor networks with high dynamics修改后: WSN can be seen as a MAS if a sensor is regard as an agent. However, wireless sensor networks have high dynamics8. 分析:近义词的区分。原文示例: WSN is similar with MAS due to? that Sensors can handle problem indepentely and WSN is a distributed system with a self-organizing feature修改后: WSN is similar with MAS because Sensors can handle problem indepentely and WSN is a distributed system with a self-organizing feature.9. 分析:连词的恰当使用。助动词的使用，句子结构混乱。原文示例: And the introduction of auction to the WSN is not a very good taking into account the dynamics of the network enviroment and its resources constrained(restricted?) feature.修改后: In addition the introduction of auction to the WSN doesnot take into account the dynamics of the network environment and its limited resources.10. 分析:被动语态；主谓一致；介词使用原文示例: The study is build on clustering-based WSN framework. A sensor want find修改后: The study is built on clustering-based WSN framework. A sensor wants to find11. 分析:动词选择；从句用法（要有动词）；主谓一致原文示例: The sensor broadcast the task allocation information to sensors which in the same cluster, then choose the most suitable one by a automatic negotiation.修改后: The sensor sends the task allocation information to sensors which are in the same cluster, then chooses the most suitable one by a automatic negotiation.12. 分析:词性混淆；被动用法原文示例: The whole process of announce, negotiate, and settle on is accomplish by our impoved auction scheme修改后: The whole process of announcement, negotiatiation, and settlement is accomplished by our improved auction scheme13. 分析:并列句，缺少连词。原文示例: is too low, its total utility is修改后: is too low, and its total utility is14. 分析:分词做状语；句子太长时的句式变通；从句中主谓一致原文示例: The sensor will launch an auction to find a successor when it? can not continue to carry out its functions for some reason (to leave or to meet the energy floor threshold). It will sent Notice to sensors that in the same cluster.修改后: The sensor, not continuing to carry out its functions for some reason (to leave or to meet the energy floor threshold), will launch an auction to find a successor. It will send Notice to sensors that are in the same cluster.15. 分析:分词状语从句原文示例: With the DL (150s) remains unchanged,修改后: With the DL (150s) remaining unchanged16. 分析:one of 到底要不要定冠词？上个批注里把a改为了the原文示例: Auction is one of the typical methods for task allocation in MAS修改后: Auction is one of typical methods for task allocation in MAS17. 分析:对于缩写名词第一次出现全称后以后都用缩写原文示例:修改后:18. 分析:词性混淆原文示例: with new policies being added into traditiontraditional auction scheme修改后:19. 分析:定语倒置混乱原文示例: The traditional field of distributed algorithmsdis alg of tra fie can not be applied directly修改后:distributed algorithms of traditional field20. 分析:句式调整原文示例: wireless sensor networks have(has?)WSN has the features of high dynamics, limited computing capacity and energy. high dynamics, the limited nature of the computing capacity and energy features修改后:21. 分析:长短句划分原文示例: The auction method is highly feasible,句号 iItt can allocate task rationally in short time.修改后:22. 分析:时态别人工作介绍用过去式。原文示例: he works of Melodia and the others offeroffered a distributed coordination修改后:23. 分析:英文中句意的体现。原文示例: The sensor sends the task allocation information to sensors前加other which are in the same cluster修改后:24. 分析:介词的使用原文示例: The whole process of announcement, negotiation, and settlement is accomplished byin our improved auction scheme修改后:25. 分析:词汇选择原文示例: Assuming that each attribute is defined in such a wayas:修改后:26. 分析:从句介词用法原文示例: enderee will select the bid whichwhose value is greater than Uthreshold as winner修改后:27. 分析:谓语相同时可以省略？原文示例: RTS-A can effectively reduce the auction time and reduce去掉 node energy consumption.修改后:28. 分析:名词单复数；句子分割。原文示例: Under the Uthreshold constraints, there may be a situation that all bidders utility values are less than the threshold, t. This will lead to auction failures in RTS-A.修改后:29. 分析:介词使用；专有名词首字母大写原文示例: ForIn our experiments, we used javaJava language修改后:30. 分析:副词位置？原文示例: Each thread deals directlydirectly deals with a bidders transaction. Each thread runs independently修改后:31. 分析:英语习惯用法原文示例: As can be seen from the figurethe fig shown,修改后:32. 分析:断句。原文示例: The sensor sends the task allocation information to other sensors which are in the same cluster, then . Then itchooses the most suitable one by a automatic negotiation. The whol