Unit 1 写作课--劝说信.ppt

Howtowriteapersuasiveletter 如何写好说服性信函 DearBob I msorrytolearnthatyoulikecomputergamesverymuchandoftenstayuplateplayingthem I mwritingtopersuadeyoutochangethishabit Itiswell knownthatthecomputergamesaveryexciting However theycangreatlyinfluencebothofyourhealthandstudiesifyouspenttoomuchtimeonthem First itisbadforyourhealth especiallyyoureyes Second ifittakestoomuchtimeofyourfreetime youhavenotimetodosomethingimportantlikereading Third ifyouoftenstayuplate youwillfeeltiredthefollowingdayandwon tbeabletodowellatschool SoIhopeyouunderstandthebadeffectsofplayingcomputergamesandstopit Yours LiHua 阐述理由 引出话题 表明目的 总结全文 表达祝愿 1 2 3 文体 时态 人称 信件 一般现在时 Thefirstperson 第一人称 Thesecondperson 第二人称 Step1审题的步骤 好文章的评分标准 覆盖所有要点语言结构和选词恰当丰富有效使用连接词 层次清楚 DearBob I msorrytolearnthatyoulikecomputergamesverymuchandoftenstayuplateplayingthem I mwritingtopersuadeyoutochangethishabit ItiswellknownthatthecomputergamesaveryexcitingHowever theycangreatlyinfluencebothofyourhealthandstudiesifyouspenttoomuchtimeonthem First itisbadforyourhealthespeciallyyoureyes Second ifittakestoomuchtimeofyourfreetimeyouhavenotimetodosomethingimportantlikereading Third ifyouoftenstayuplateyouwillfeeltiredthefollowingdayandwon tbeabletodowellatschool SoIhopeyouunderstandthebadeffectsofplayingcomputergamesandstopit Yours LiHua 阐述理由 引出话题 表明目的 总结全文 表达祝愿 正文语言欠丰富 表达不够出彩 引出话题 表明目的 总结全文 表达祝愿 Yours LiHua DearBob I msorrytolearnthatyouaresocrazyaboutcomputergamesandthatyouoftenstayuplateplayingthemI mwritingtopersuadeyoutoquit Thereisnodenyingthatcomputergamesareveryexciting However theycanhaveagreatinfluenceonbothyourhealthandstudiesifyouareaddictedtothem First itisharmfultoyourhealth especiallyyoureyes Second itisawasteoftimebecauseyouhavemuchmoreimportantthingstodo suchasreading Third ifyoudon tgetagoodnightsrest youwillfeeltiredthefollowingdayandwon tbeabletofocusonyourstudiesTherefore Ihopeyouunderstandtheharmfuleffectofplayingcomputergamesandgetridofthehabits 7 可编辑 Itisyourturnnow Haveadiscussionwithyourteammates 假设你是李华 你的外籍朋友Jack不久前选修了他们学校的汉语课程 由于感觉学习起来困难很大 他打算放弃请你给他写一封信 劝他坚持学习 I msorrytolearnthatyouwanttogiveuptheChinesecourse I mwritingtotrytopersuadeyoutocarryonwithit Herearethereasons Tobeginwith itisnormalforyoutohavedifficultylearningaforeignlanguageatfirst especiallyChinese Butastheoldsayinggoes Wherethereisawill thereisaway Sodon tloseheart Inaddition learningChinesewellwillbeofgreatimportanceanduseforyou NotonlywillithelpyoulearnmoreaboutChinesehistoryandculture butalsoallowyoutocommunicatewithChinesepeoplebetter Besides asanativespeakerofChinese I mmorethanwillingtohelpyouwithit Allinall ifyou redeterminedtolearnChinesewell I msureyouwillhaveagoodcommandofitoneday IhopeyoucansticktoChineselearning DearJack I msorrytolearnthatyouwanttogiveuptheChinesecourse I mwritingtotrytopersuadeyoutogoonwithit Herearethereasons Tobeginwith itisnormalforyoutohavedifficultylearningaforeignlanguageatfirst especiallyChinese Sodon tloseheart Inaddition IknowyoulikeChinaverymuchandwanttovisititsomeday LearningChinesewellwillbeveryimportantandusefulforyou NotonlywillithelpyoulearnmoreaboutChinesehistoryandculture butalsoallowyoutocommunicatewithChinese