Basicwriting.ppt

Basicwriting基础写作 Howtowriteastoryaboutaperson 本节课重点难点重点 短句变成长句 尤其是复合句和并列句的使用 难点 五个句子之间的自然过渡和衔接词的选用是写作难点 Makethesentencelonger Thelonger thebetter Ourmathsteacherisawoman Ourmathsteacher Ourmathsteacherisa woman Ourmathsteacherisa woman who ourmathsteacherisa woman who 某中学生英语报社举办中学生 2005感动中国 观后感征文 你被2005感动中国人物洪战辉的事迹深深感动 根据下面提示写一篇征文 投给这家报社 洪战辉事迹简介 1 1982年出生于河南农村 2 1994年父亲得了精神病并在当年捡来了一个刚出生的女弃婴 3 1995年 母亲不堪重负离家出走 4 他边学习边照顾捡来的妹妹和生病的父亲 担负着常人难以想象的重担考上大学 并一直带着妹妹上大学 照看她 写作要求 只能用5个句子 不包括已给出的部分 表达全部的内容 参考词汇 2005感动中国TouchChina2005 Group11 Recently IwatchedTouchChina2005onTV 2 IwasdeeplymovedbythestoryofHongZhanhui 3 HewasborninHenanProvincein1982 Sentence1 Recently IwatchedTouchChina2005onTVandwasdeeplymovedbythestoryofHongZhanhuiwhowasborninHenanProvincein1982 Group21 Hewas12 2 Hisfathergotmentaldisease 3 Onedayhebroughthomeanabandonednewly borngirl Sentence2 Group31 Hismothersufferedfromtheheavyburden 2 Ayearlater hismotherdesertedthefamily3 Hongbegantoshouldertheresponsibilityfortakingcareofhislittlesisterandsickfather Sentence3 Ayearlater hismother sufferingfromtheheavyburden desertedthefamilyandHongbegantoshouldertheresponsibilityfortakingcareofhislittlesisterandsickfather Group41 Honglovedschoolandstudiedhard 2 Hewasfinallyadmittedtocollege 3 Hetookhissisterwithhimandcontinuedtocareforher Sentence4 Hong wholovedschoolandstudiedhard finallywasadmittedtocollege buthetookhissisterwithhimandcontinuedtocareforher Group51 Personally Iholdtheview 2 TherearemanygoodqualitiesinHongworthourlearning 3 Thequalitiesarehissenseofresponsibility courageandalovingheart Sentence5 Personally IholdtheviewthattherearemanygoodqualitiesinHongworthourlearning includinghissenseofresponsibility courageandalovingheart Recently IwatchedTouchChina2005onTVandwasdeepmovedbythestoryofHongZhanhuiwhowasborninHenanProvincein1982 Whenhewas12 hisfathergotmentaldiseaseandonedaybroughthomeaabandonednew borngirl What sworse ayearlater hismother sufferingfromtheheavyburden desertedthefamilyandHongbegantoshouldertheresponsibilityfortakingcareofhislittlesisterandsickfather Toourdelight Hong wholovedschoolandstudiedhard finallywasadmittedtocollege buthetookhissisterwithhimandcontinuetocareforher Personally IholdtheviewwhichtherearemanygoodqualitiesinHongworthourlearning hissenseofresponsibility courageandaboveall alovingheart PractiseBasicwriting基础写作实战演练 写作内容 GreatSwimmerMichaelPhelps1 迈克尔 菲尔普斯是美国一位非凡的游泳运动员 1985年6月30日出生于美国马利兰州巴尔的摩市 2 他7岁开始游泳 经历了许多艰苦的训练 15岁的时候 他参加了2000年奥运会 并在200米蝶泳比赛中排名第五 据报道 他是这次次奥运会中自1932年以来竞争的最年轻的男性选手 3 在北京奥林匹克运动会 迈克尔 菲尔普斯实现了他的8枚金牌梦 打破了7个世界纪录 创造了历史 4 你的启示 可以用谚语 写作要求 只能用5个句子 不包括已给出的部分 表达全部的内容 参考词汇 迈克尔 菲尔普斯MichaelPhelps 马利兰州巴尔的摩市Baltimore Maryland 非凡的extraordinary 蝶泳butterfly Greatswimmer MichaelPhelpsMichaelPhelpsisagreatAmericanswimmerwhowasborninBaltimore MarylandonJune30 1985 Whenhewassevenyearsold hestartedswimmingandexperiencedmuchtoughprofessionaltraining Attheageof15 heattendedthe2000Olympicsandplacedfifthinthe200 meterbutterflyastheyoungestmaleathletetocompeteintheOlympicssince1932 Furthermore attheBeijingOlympicGames Phelpsrealizedhis8 gold medaldreamandbravelybroke7worldrecords creatingthehistory It snowonderthatwherethere sawill there saway astheoldsayinggoes DearMr Helper I masenior3student IamnowingreatneedofyourhelpbecauseIcanhardlystandthegreatpressure Everydaywestayatschoolforabouttenhourstohavelessons spendatleastthreetofourhoursdoingourhomework hardlycanwefindanytimetodowhatwewant Wesufferfromlackofsleep which inthelongrun isnotgoodforourhealth Thereasonwhywearecarryingsuchaheavyburdenisthatwearegettingthepres