2011-2014福建高考英语作文分析.docx

福建高考英语试卷分析 写作篇2014第二节 书面表达（满分25分）如何理解“成功”，不同的人有不同的看法。请认真阅读下面的引语( quotation)，按要求用英语写一篇短文。 “Success is the ability to go from one failure to another with no loss of enthusiasm. - Sir Winston, Churchill 内容要求： 1你对该引语的理解： 2你的相关经历： 3恰当的结尾。 注意： 1短文开头已给出，不计入总词数： 2文中不能出现考生的具体信息： 3词数：120左右。 This quotation from Winston Churchill tells us that _.【考点】考察开放性作文【写作指导】本文属于开放性作文，要求考生根据丘吉尔的名言“Success is the ability to go from one failure to another with no loss of enthusiasm.发表自己的理解，并举例说明。属于议论文的一种，主要使用第三人称和一般现在时。在讲述各人经历时可以使用过去时。要点：1.该名言告诉我们：面对失败，我们不应该泄气，相反我们应该鼓足勇气充满热情继续努力。2.各人经历：学习骑自行车的例子。3.如果我们不尝试，我们就不可能成功，最重要的是我们要坚持下去。本文对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成开放性作文时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。【一句多译】回顾这一切，我感觉如果我失去信心，我就不能学会骑自行车了。（1）Looking back, I feel I wouldnt be able to ride a bike had I lost heart.（2）When I looked back, I feel I wouldnt be able to ride a bike If I had lost heart.【参考范文】 This quotation from Winston Churchill tells us that we shouldnt get discouraged right after failures. Rather, we should keep trying with enthusiasm. Success consists in the ability to continue efforts through failures. At the age of twelve, I got a nice bike as a birthday gift. So excited was I that I couldnt wait to try my hand at riding it. However, it was harder than expected. The bike seemed too heavy and difficult to control. Worse still, I took many falls off the bike. I was about to give up when my father came and encouraged me to keep going. With more practice, I did better and better. Looking back, I feel I wouldnt be able to ride a bike had I lost heart. Actually, we cant succeed in everything we try. Whats important is that we should stick at it.2013第二节 书面表达(满分25分）孩子的成长和教育是社会热议的话题，现今父母包揽一切、孩子过度依赖等现象十分严重。请阅读下面的漫画，按要求用英文写一篇短文。 内容要求： 1.描述漫画内容；2. 分析漫画所揭示的问题； 3. 提出你的看法。注意：1.短文开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2.考生可适当发挥，使文章内容充实、连贯； 3.词数120左右;4. 文中不能出现考生的具体信息。ks5u参考词汇:pave the wayFrom the picture, we can see a family of three walking on a long red carpet. 【写作指导】2013年的图画形式与2012年的类似，都是单幅图漫画类，但无文字提示。该图展现了一个以孩子为中心的三口之家，母亲在前方开路，父亲跟在后面伺候这种以孩子为王、父母为臣的这一社会现象，发人深省。作文题干中要求学生“描述漫画内容、分析漫画所揭示的问题、发表你的看法”。第一段描述漫画内容；第二段提出问题的严重性、分析问题产生的原因；第三段提出解决方法、总结。【参考范文】From the picture we can see a family of three walking on a long red carpet. The son, well dressed, waves proudly in the middle while the father behind bends forward to hold the jacket and the mother in front rolls out the carpet, sweating. ks5uIt shows a common phenomenon nowadays that children are the focus of families, shouldering the hope of their parents. Parents arrange everything for their children and spare no effort to pave the way for their success. As a consequence, children become so reliant on their parents that they have no independent thought or creative ideas.ks5uSuch a situation is of great concern. In my opinion, overprotection and too much care are extremely bad for childrens development. Instead of doing everything for them, parents should encourage their children to overcome difficulties and inspire them to develop by themselves. Only in this way can they grow up to be independent and become truly successful.2012第二节书面表达(满分25分）假定你是某中学生英语报的小记者；以下漫画内容是你的所见所闻,谙根据要求写一篇英语短文投稿。内容要求：1.描述漫画内容；2.发表个人感想。注意：1. 短文标题与开头已给出,不计入总词数；2. 考生可适当发挥，使文章内容充实、连贯3. 词数120左右;4. 文中不能出现考生的具体信息。 参考词汇:告示牌signMind Your Behavior in Public PlacesLast Sunday, I went sightseeing with my friends in the Fairy Lake Park. 【写作指导】2012年的福建省高考英语作文是单幅图漫画类，图片中有出现文字提示。该图，展现了两个外出游玩的旅客坐在景区的小船上随手将垃圾丢入湖中，而直接忽视湖边写着“湖中勿丢垃圾！”的小牌子，该图主要为了提醒人们在公共场所言行举止要文明规范、爱护环境。作文题干中要求学生“描述漫画内容、分析漫画所揭示的问题、发表你的看法”。第一段描述漫画内容；第二段提出存在的问题、分析问题产生的原因；第三段发表自己的看法，提出解决方法、总结。【参考范文】Mind Your Behavior in Public PlacesLast Sunday, I went sightseeing with my friends in the Fairy Lake Park. The park was full of freshness and beauty of spring, with the sun shining and birds singing. When I was enjoying the fantastic scenery around, something unpleasant caught my eye. A young couple in a boat were eating, talking and laughing loudly as if they were the only people in the world. Whats worse, they spat and even threw rubbish into the lake, totally ignoring the noticeable sign No Littering nearby. What a shame! Such behavior left me deep in thought. If all visitors to the Fairy Lake Park do as the couple did, the lake will be severely polluted and soon turned into a huge dustbin. I think all of us should mind our behavior in public places. Only in this way can we live in more comfortable and beautiful surroundings.2011第二节 书面表达（满分25分）为纪念汶川大地震三周年，某英文报发起关于灾区新貌的征文活动。请根据以下图片提示，以“Great Changes”为题，用英语写一篇短文应征。内容要点如下：1.某中学灾后三年来的变化，如教学与活动场所，以及师生精神面貌等；2.发生变化的原因；3.你的感想。注意：1.短文标题与开头已给出，不计入总词数；2.可根据图片提示适当发挥3.词数：120左右Great ChangesI am deeply impressed by the great changes that have taken place in the school over the past three years. 【写作指导】2011年的福建省高考英语作文是多幅图图画类作文。图1中的石碑上刻着“2008.5.12”，背景是汶川地震时坍塌的学校建筑，荒凉的背景；图2中出现的场景则是运动场上充满青春活力的学生，他们背后的教学楼已不再是3年前灾后的样子。同一个地方，三年里发生了翻天覆地的变化；图3中出现无数救援之手，意味着“一方有难，八方支援”，这就是这一系列变化的原因。作文题干中要求学生描述图中学校灾后三年来的变化，如教学与活动场所，以及师生精神面貌等方面的变化，并分析变化的原因、发表看法。第一段描述漫画内容；第二段揭示原因；第三段发表自己的看法。【参考范文】Iamdeeplyimpressedbythegreatchangesthathavetakenplaceintheschooloverthepast threeyears.OnMay12,2008,asevereearthquakedestroyedalmosteverythingintheschool,leavingbadly-damagedbuildings.Itisnow,however,takingonanewlook.Tallbuildingshavebeenputup,includingclassroomandlaboratorybuildings,Thereisalsonewly-builtstandardplayground.Inthenewenvironment,teachersandstudentsarelivinghappilyandworkinghard.Itisreallyamazingthattheonce-ruinedplaceha