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大学英语四级考试优秀范文Part 1:2010年12月 1.目前不少父母为孩子包办一切 2.为了让孩子独立，父母应该How Should Parents Help Children to Be IndependentIt is beyond reproach that children are always considered the apple of parents” eyes ,which is especially true in single-child families. However ,many parents go so far as to take over everything for their life and study even to their future.It is not unusual to witness that an increasing number of children are accompanied by parent on their first day in college. I declare in no uncertain terms that it will end up with the children” s lack of independence .In such a world full of fierce competition ,being independent becomes essential for a would-be success .Thus ,what should parents do ?In my humble opinion, on the one hand ,parents should raise children in a free-ranging way instead of being “helicopter” parents, who always seem to hover over their children; on the other hand ,parents should teach children to be responsible for their own behaviors instead of monopolizing everything .I cling to the belief that only when parents realize what is better for their children and care them in a right way ,can they help children develop independence.精彩点评：引入话题：孩子是父母的掌上明珠。自然过渡：但是，有些父母却为孩子包办一切。引用生活中的实例，证实父母为孩子包办并非空穴来风。分析包办所带来的后果。提出问题：父母应该如何做？和具体阐述解决问题的策略，层次分明。简要总结前文所提的具体侧咧，是文章结尾不显突兀。加分亮点：beyond reproach 无可非议 be accompanied by有陪同 declare in no uncertain terms 毫不讳言 fierce competition 激烈的竞争 essential 至关重要的 cling to the belief 坚信Part 2:2010年6月1.如今不少学生在英语学习中不重视拼写 2.出现这种现象的原因是 3.为了改变这种状况，我认为 Due Attention Should Be Given to Spelling Nowadays, an increasing number of students seem to attach less importance to spelling in English learning .Thus ,numerous misspellings appear in their papers, and what ”s worse , a well-organized essay is therefore totally impossible. There are various reasons responsible for this embarrassing situation. For on thing ,much more students give priorities to oral English at the cost of dosing less spelling exercises ,let alone reflect on what they learned the other day .For another ,many teachers put so much emphasis on communication and grammar in teaching that they seldom highlight spelling, and occasionally worse still, they themselves are caught in spelling. To change this situation, I hold to the belief that students and teachers should work together. On the one hand ,students should stop complaining about spellings ,and they should realize correct spelling is a must in learning English .On the other hand, teachers should pay more attention to spelling in teaching, for example, focusing on pronunciation and word formation. Only via joint effort can students gain much ground in spelling.精彩点评：开门见山，描述现象：很多学生不重视拼写。和使用thus, and what” s worse 说明该现象造成的结果：拼写错误连篇，文章结构混乱。本段分析造成上述结果的原因。和for on thingfor another具体列举不同的原因，层次分明。概括提出解决问题的方法。和使用on the one hand on the other hand 结构，针对上述成因，提出两种对应的解决方案。最后结尾常用的倒装句，总结前文。加分亮点：embarrassing 令人为难的，尴尬的 give priorities to 认为优先 Put emphasis on 强调Part 3：2009年12月1. 建设绿色校园十分重要2. 绿色校园不仅是指绿色的环境3. 为了建设绿色校园，我们应该Creating a Green Campus During recent years ,the topic of a green campus ,which has aroused widely public attention, is becoming more and more popular. Undoubtedly, a green campus, the indispensable part for the development of college students ,has a profound impact on both individuals and society, for its significance cannot be neglected A green environment ,rather than anything else, plays a decisive role in the growth of college students .Meanwhile ,it should also be mentioned that a preen campus includes not only the places where the students live, but also the mental environment .Without green surrounding ,the soul of students would be not as pure as we wish. In that case ,in no place other than campus should we attempt to make a green atmosphere . Due to the seriousness of the situation, it is crucial for us to take effective measures to create a green campus .In the first place, it” s essential that law and regulations should be worked out and enforced by the government and authorities. Furthermore, it is high time that we enhanced the awareness of the students themselves. Only in this way can we get satisfactory results. With these measures taken ,it is reasonable for us to believe that a green campus will be achieved in the near future.精彩点评：开门见山，提出绿色校园的话题已经引起社会关注。点名绿色校园的重要意义。用not only .but also 句型介绍绿色校园的内涵和外延。半倒装句的运用恰到好处，引出下文要阐述的内容，即社会各界应行动起来，推动绿色校园的建设。和结构连接词in the first place 和furthermore 的运用，使得论述清晰明了。结尾常用的倒装句，总结前文。 加分亮点：undoubtedly 毋庸置疑地 indispensable必不可少的，必需的 significance意义Part 4:2009年6月1. 越来越多的博物馆现在免费向公众开放，目的是2. 有人认为这样做会带来一些问题3. 在我看来Free Admissions to Museums?Recently ,more and more museums are open to the public free of charge. By doing so ,they can attract more visitors ,and offer the visitors more opportunities to explore and get easy access to the world of history ,culture and knowledge.However, some people view that the practice also brings problems and concerns. They are right in a sense .For one thing ,their main concern is that with more visitors ,it is possible that objects exhibited can get damaged more easily. For another ,it becomes a huge economic burden for museums to run as usual without any profits from the visitors.In my opinion, I am absolutely in favor of this practice. The reason lies in the fact that the government should provide more opportunities for citizens to explore and get access to the knowledge world .Moreover, kids and teenagers can acquire knowledge in a more vivid way in the museums .I hope all the people can share the same national treasures in more free museums.精彩点评：开门见山，提出论点。并说明这样做的目的。话题一转，阐明这个举措的弊端。和运用关联词For one thing For another,使文章层次分明。利用in my opinion 衔接文章，引出自己的观点。最后提出希望，总结全文。加分亮点：get access to 接触 in favor of 赞同 vivid 生动的 鲜明的Part 5:2008年12月1. 一次性塑料袋曾广为使用2. 由此带来的问题3. 限制使用一次性塑料袋的意义Limiting the Use of Disposable Plastic BagsRecently, limiting the use of disposable plastic bags has been brought to popular attention in China. No one would deny that it was a real convenience in our daily life . However ,what would our society be like with the excessive use ?The sharp increase in using plastic bags has given a rise to such problems as environmental pollution. It takes many years for plastic bags to be absorbed by soil, which blocks the drainage system and causes water pollution. What s worse ,some bags are of poor-quality, and even harmful to public health.Awareness of the matter in question is one thing ,but more important to us is the step of how to cope with it .From June 1st this year, using of disposable plastic bags in supermarkets is limited strictly. Consequently, people come to take environment-friendly cloth bags and the business cost in supermarkets is cut down as well. Only in this way can we protect both the environment and our own health.精彩点评：开门见山，提出议论点。利用转折，承接下文，提出问题。使用非限制性定语从句，丰富句子结构。运用递进结构What s worse ,使文章有层次感。利用过渡句衔接文章。使用倒装句，总结全文。加分亮点：sharp急剧的，大量的 give rise to 引起，使发生 in question 正被讨论Consequently从此，因而Part 6:2008年6月1. 娱乐活动多种多样2. 娱乐活动可以使人们受益，也可能带来危害3. 作为大学生，我认为.Recreational Activities Abundant recreational activities are available for people to release their strain and stress, ranging from sports to online activities. There is a hot debate arguing whether they are good for the public or not, especially for college students. As for such a question, different people hold different views. Some believe that recreation is helpful if we want to keep healthy physically and mentally. While there also sounds an opposite voice, which claims activities bring many problems meanwhile. For example, some young people are easily addicted to the virtual world online, which affects their study badly and may lead to worse consequences as well. As for me ,I hold a belief that recreational activities do more good than harm. They do give us a good chance to relax and build good personal relationships with others, too. As long as we can arrange our time reasonably, they will definitely provide more benefits for us.精彩点评：开门见山，摆出事实。提出讨论的问题：社会对娱乐活动的争论。模板句引出两种对立观点。和运用对比结构Some believe thatWhile说明不同的观点。用模板句提出自己的观点。给出原因。加分亮点：be available for 可供之用 range fromto从到 Be addicted to 沉溺于，热爱Part 7:2007年12月1. 各大学为大学生开设了多种多样的选修课2. 学生出于各种原因选择不同的选修课3. 以我自己为例 What Electives to Choose Nowadays, there exist a wide range of selective courses in college which are ready for the undergraduates to choose from. These courses make the students college life more colorful. However, as for the purpose of choosing electives, different students have different ideas. Some students choose more electives just to get more knowledge, so that they could be well-prepared in the future job hunting. Some students just want to extend their interests. Some students suppose the knowledge in the text book is limited. They should choose more courses in order that they could spend four more colorful school years. Still, others have no definite aim and they just want to finish their study. As far as I am concerned, I just want to learn more knowledge for my future life and job. I dont care about the scores I have got. I just want to be a man having a sharp and imaginative mind with different knowledge which is beyond my major. So I think the possession of much more knowledge can make my future life easier and more interesting.精彩点评：开门见山，说明大学里开设了很多选修课这一事实。话锋一转，支出大家选择选修课的目的各不相同。运用了SomeSomeStill others的并列平行结构，列举不同学生的做法及目的。另外本段使用了so that, in order that 等结构，使文章结构连贯。用模板句提出自己的观点。再次阐明观点，回应主题。加分亮点：well-prepared 准备好的 sharp 锐利的，敏捷的 imaginative 有想象力的Part 8:2007年6月1. 本社团的主要活动内容2. 参加本社团的好处3. 如何加入本社团 Welcome to Our Club Welcome to our club! Our “Easy-to-Learn” English club aims at helping college students to study English in easier ways. There will be varieties of colorful activities almost every week in our club, such as English Talk Show, English Corner, English Lectures, English Songs Competition, etc. If you are accepted by our club, you will find you have made a wise choice. To begin with, you may practice and improve your English in our activities in a relaxed and comfortable way. In addition, you may make new friends in the activities, which will inevitably make your college life more enjoyable and meaningful. Last but not the least, you may participate in all the activities at a very low price or even free of charge. If you feel interested in our club, please dont hesitate to join us . You just need to fill in the form and we will contact you as soon as possible. Our telephone number is 7788666, and if you have any problem, please call us. Thanks for your attention and we are looking forward to your joining!精彩点评：开门见山，支出此社团的宗旨。列举丰富的活动，说服力强，更能吸引学生加入。运用并列平行结构To begin withIn addition Last but not the least列举具体的活动。语言口语化，鼓动性强。再次表示“欢迎加入社团”，突出主题。加分亮点：inevitably 不可避免地 participate in 参加 free of charge 免费Part 9:2006年12月1. 许多人喜欢在除夕观看春节联欢晚会2. 有些人却提出取消春节联欢晚会3. 在我看来Spring Festival Gala on CCTV The CCTV Spring Festival Gala is one of Chinas most popular annual television events, watched by millions of people on the eve of the lunar New Year. However, in recent years, the 4-hour show is losing its appeal, especially to youngsters. People in increasing numbers choose not to watch the show. They claim that the stereotyped Gala should give way to diverse modern celebrations. However, some other people are faithful audience of it. They argue that the Evening Gala has somewhat become a tradition since it was initiated in the 1980s. Whats more, watching the show is an indispensable part of the festival for them. Though the Gala is no longer popular with young people, I enjoy watching the show with my family. Yet to maintain the interest of the young generation, the organizing committee should develop a program more exciting, more colorful and more entertaining than the previous ones. For example, its a good idea to invite some big names in Chinas film and music industries to perform on the Gala stage.精彩点评“开门见山，支出春节晚会的影响力。话锋一转，提出问题。Show使主语表达简介。和是分别引出争议双方观点的结构。somewhat起缓和语气的作用。表递进关系。这一句型用于提出自己观点。不定式结构表目的。举例说明。加分亮点：lose ones appeal 失去吸引力 stereotyped 老套的 give way to 让路，让步 Initiate 开始 indispensable 不可缺少的Part 10:2006年6月1. 有些大学允许学生自由选择某些课程的科任老师2. 学生选择教师时所考虑的主要因素3. 学生自选任课老师的益处和可能产生的问题On Stud