200912-20126 四级真题范文及替换.doc

2009年12月 作文范文：Creating a Green Campus【1】As an increasing number of people are concerned about environmental protection, it is widely agreed that creating a green campus is vitally important.【2】A green campus means much more than thriving trees, blooming flowers or expanding lawns. 【3】It mans that everyone on campus, including faculty members and students, should be aware of the importance of environmental protection and make an effort to contribute to it in whatever he does.【4】So what can we do to create a green campus?【5】First, there should be a year-round campaign to keep everyone constantly aware of the significance of protecting the environment. 【6】Second, whatever we do, we should take environmental protection into consideration and make it a habit to save natural resources. 【7】Finally, new technology should be introduced for this purpose.句型变换： 【1】1. As an increasing number of people are concerned about environmental protection, it is widely agreed that creating a green campus is vitally important.2. More and more people are concerned about environmental protection, therefore, they all agree that a green campus should be created.3. The number of people who care about environmental protection is on the rise, and they consider it essential to create a green campus.4. As more and more attention is paid to environmental protection, people all agree that it is more than necessary to create a green campus.【3】1. It means that everyone of campus, including faculty members and students, should be aware of the importance of environmental protection and make an effort to contribute to it in whatever he does.2. It indicates that every person in a college, whoever he/she is, should be aware of the fact that protecting environment is vitally important and should try his/her best to make an effort for environmental protection.3. It means that all of the students and teachers should be not only aware of the importance of environmental protection, but also contribute their parts to this cause.4. It conveys that everyone on campus should recognize the importance of environmental protection and endeavor to add his/her effort to this cause.【4】1. So what can we do to create a green campus?2. So is there anything we can do to create a green campus?3. So can we find the ways to create a green campus?4. So what are the things to do to create a green campus?【6】1. Second, whatever we do, we should take environmental protection into consideration and make it a habit to save natural resources.2. Second, whatever we do, we should always take environmental protection into account and form a habit to save natural resources.3. Second, no matter what we do, we cant ignore environmental protection. Thus, we should grow a habit of saving natural resources. 4. Second, we should never neglect environmental protection in our life. Only in this way can we form a habit to save natural resources.【7】1. Finally, new technology should be introduced for this purpose.2. Finally, new technology is another essential element for this purpose.3. Last but not least, new technology offers more chances to attain this goal.4. Lastly, this aim cant be achieved without the help of new technology.2010年6月 作文范文：Due Attention Should be Given to Spelling1In learning English, spelling receives the least attention among quite a few students nowadays. The reasons are simple but thought-provoking.3 Topping the list is the prevailing use of computers to handle our daily paper work. Since many word processing soft wares are becoming increasingly powerful to correct almost all spelling mistakes, we tend to neglect the exact spelling of many words. 5Besides, some people hold the notion that as long as one is able to communicate in English, it is not at all important whether he can spell the words he uses or not. 6Last but not least, our exams do not test spellings so much as the used to, shifting students attention to other aspects of English acquisition.7Therefore, in order to change the situation, students should be encouraged to depend less on automatic spelling-check softwares. At the same time, teachers should highlight the importance of correct spelling, which, to a certain extent, indicates the degree of English level.句型转换：11. In learning English, spelling receives the least attention among quite a few students nowadays.2. Nowadays, quite a number of students tend to ignore spelling in their learning of English.3. Nowadays, students are not paying enough attention to spelling in English learning.4. Nowadays, there are many students who attach little significance to spelling in English learning.31. Topping the list is the prevailing use of computers to handle our daily paper work.2. What comes first in the list is the overwhelming use of computers to deal with our daily paper work.3. First and foremost, our daily paper work is mostly handled by computers.4. To begin with, computers play an important role in dealing with our daily paper work.51. Besides, some people hold the notion that as long as one is able to communicate in English, it is not at all important whether he can spell the words he uses or not.2. In addition, some believe that so far as one can communicate in English without difficulty, spelling does not matter that much.3. Additionally, many tend to ignore the exact spelling of each word they use when they have no trouble conveying the meaning.4. Secondly, according to some people, according to some people, the importance of spelling pales compared with the need of communication.61. Last but not least, our exams do not test spellings so much as the used to, shifting students attention to other aspects of English acquisition.2. Finally, our exams test less about spelling than before, distracting students attention to other aspects of English acquisition.3. Lastly, since spelling is less tested in exams, students have shifted their attention to other aspects of English acquisition.4. Thirdly, without being tested in exams, spelling receives less attention from students than other aspects of English acquisition.71. Therefore, in order to change the situation, students should be encouraged to depend less on automatic spelling-check softwares.2. Consequently, in order to change the situation, students awareness should be raised to depend less on automatic spelling-check softwares.3. Hence, only when students use less automatic spelling-check softwares can the situation be changed.4. Thus, the situation can not be changed before students cut down on their dependence on aromatic spelling-check softwares.2010年12月 作文范文：How Should Parents Help Children to Be Independent?1Nowadays, a lot of parents are overdoing in taking care of their children. 2From doing laundry to job hunting, they have made every effort. 3However, instead of making life easier for the next generation, such deeds deprive the youth of opportunities to grow independent.4In order to cultivate a sense of independence in their children, parents are supposed to first stop doing what the youngsters are able to do for themselves. 5Besides, it is advisable that parents expose their children to more difficulties and failures on purpose, helping them to learn valuable lessons from setbacks. 6Last but not least, parents should infuse their children with a sense of responsibility.7It is hopeful that all parents realize an independent soul dies in a bed of roses and find a more sensible way to love their kids.句型变换：11. Nowadays, a lot of parents are overdoing in taking care of their children.2. Nowadays, numerous parents are shouldering more responsibilities than necessary to care for their children.3. Nowadays, many parents are doing more than enough for their children.4. Nowadays, parents are offering excessive assistance to their children.31. However, instead of making life easier for the next generation, such deeds deprive the youth of opportunities to grow independent.2. Nevertheless, rather than making their life easier, such deeds leave children with no room to grow independent.3. Nonetheless, far from making life easier for the next generation, such deeds prevent children from becoming independent.4. Yet, without making life easier for the next generation, such deeds provide them little chance to grow independent.41. In order to cultivate a sense of independence in their children, parents are supposed to first stop doing what the youngsters are able to do for themselves.2. Only when parents stop doing what the youngsters are able to do for themselves, can a sense of independence be cultivated.3. Parents are supposed to first stop doing what the youngsters are able to do for themselves, with a purpose to cultivate a sense of independence in their children.4. A sense of independence would not be cultivated until their parents stop doing what the youngsters are able to do for themselves.51. Besides, it is advisable that parents expose their children to more difficulties and failures on purpose, helping them to learn valuable lessons from setbacks.2. In addition, parents should expose their children to more difficulties and failures deliberately in order to help them to learn valuable lessons from setbacks.3. Additionally, more exposures to adversities strengthen childrens will.4. Moreover, difficulties and failures are resources for children to learn valuable lessons.61. Last but not least, parents should infuse their children with a sense of responsibility.2. Finally, parents should foster their children a sense of responsibility.3. Lastly, parents should help their children to develop a sense of responsibility.4. Thirdly, parents should guide their children to become responsible.2011年6月 作文范文： Online Shopping1 Online shopping has become a fashion trend. 2Almost everyone has experienced online shopping-some even have got accustomed to it. 3However, while making our life easier, it may bring us problems as well.4Goods ranging from fruit to steak, from a book to an intensive training program, from a film ticket to a package tour can all be purchased without leaving ones home, which saves all the traffic jams, parking inconvenience and queuing time. 5Nevertheless, goods or services of poor quality, fake products or even Internet frauds may consume rather than save our time, energy and money, turning our online shopping experience into a nightmare. 6What can we do in order to eat the fish and avoid the bones?7Think before you order, and dont allow room for products without signs to show their manufacturing time and place, products of unbelievably low price and products free of charge to spoil your life.Analysis:1.用一句话概括社会现象。Fashion trend “流行，时尚趋势”。2.用experience 和get accustomed to 来表明很多人都有网购经历，甚至习以为常。Get accustomed to “习惯于。”，为亮点表达。3.However 转折并引出下文网上购物有很多好处，但也有不少问题。4.用range from to 排比句型列举说明网上可购买的商品种类齐全。Which 引导的非限制性定语从句说明网购的诸多好处。Inconvenience “不便，麻烦”。5.用带转折的nevertheless 引出网购的弊端。Rather than.列举出网上购物可能带来的问题。Fake “伪造的”；fraud “欺骗，骗局”； consume “消耗”。6.用问句承上起下引出下文的建议，同时类比的修辞手法即形象又易懂。7.用think before you order 总结并道出作者的建议网购须“三思而后定”，此短语改自“think before you leap”“三思而后行”。Allow room for sb. to do sth.给某事的发生留出空间；spoil “破坏的兴致或兴趣，”均为亮点表达。1 1Online shopping has become a fashion trend.2Nowadays, it is fashionable to shop online.3It has become a fashion to shop online.4Online shopping is increasingly fashionable.31.However, while making our life easier, it may bring us problems as well.2.However, each coin has two sides, so it is with online shopping.3.Just as every sword has two blades, online shopping has obvious advantages and potential disadvantages at the same time.4.Convenient as it is, online shopping may have many problems.41.Goods ranging from fruit to steak, from a book to an intensive traning program, from a film ticket to a package tour can all be purchased without leaving ones home, which saves all the traffic jams, parking inconvenience and queuing time.2.You wont be caught in a traffic jam, or quarrel with others for parking space, or queue to pay if you shop online and you can buy almost everything, from fruit to steak, from a book to an intensive training program, from a film ticket to a package tour.3.Since there are a variety of “shops” online, you can buy almost everything , from fruit to steak , from a book to an intensive training program, from a film ticket to a package tour, without travelling from one shop to another, and you will be free from queuing, traffic jams, and parking problems.51.Nevertheless, goods or services of poor quality, fake products or even Internet frauds may consume rather than save our time, energy and money, turning our online shopping experience into a nightmare.2.However, if you get cheated by some poor products or even some tickets, you would waste more time, energy and money.3.Despite all the benefits, online shopping may bring some problems if you are fooled by tickets.2011年12月 作文范文：Nothing Succeeds Without a Strong WillMaybe most of us have heard of the humorous saying, “Quitting smoking is the easiest thing in the would. Ive done it hundreds of times.” But have you ever thought about its implication? Undoubtedly, nothing succeeds without a strong will. Those who claim to have practiced smoking-quitting for hundreds of times fail to have a strong will. Without a strong will, one can never give up smoking once and for all, not to mention being successful in other endeavors. It is a strong will that contributes to the success of the Olympic winners, that results in the spectacular victory of the 2010 World Expro, and that leads to the successful exploration of the moon.Where there is a will, there is a way. Only when the will is strong enough will the way lead us to success.万能句型：1 问句引出论点1. But have you ever thought about its implication?2. Have you ever reflected on this ?3. What does thismean to you?4. What does thismake you think of?2 做某事失败的原因1. Those whofail to have2. The reason why some peopleis that they dont have3. Some people find it hard tofor lack of3 举例说明某事的重要性1. It is that contributes to the success of, that results in the spectacular victory of, and that leads to the successful2. is indisputably the basis of the success of, the spectacular victory of and the successful3. More evidence can be cited to support the importance of, for example, the success of, the spectacular victory ofand the successful4. Achievements such as the success of, the spectacular victory of and the successful exploration of can fully illustrate the importance of4 造成成功的因素1. Only when will the way lead us to success.2. Only can lead us onto a path to success.3. The way to success is possible only if2012年6月 作文范文：On Excessive PackagingExcessive Packaging has increasingly become a common concern of the public. A packa