高中英语作文教学课件.ppt

Pointcontrastcomposition 影响高考英语书面表达得分的几个因素 1 语篇信息是否完整2 行文是否连贯流畅 语言是否得体 3 是否使用高级词汇4 是否使用复杂句5 卷面整洁 书写工整 现在正是春暖花开的春游时节 你校学生以 高三学生要不要参加春游活动 展开了讨论 请根据以下讨论结果 写一篇短文 第一步 审题 listtheoutlineofthewriting 体裁 人称 时态 一般现在时 第三 一人称 议论文 文体 中段 首段 尾段 开门见山 指出论点 论证1 赞成及其理由 论证2 反对及其理由 作者自己的观点 三段式 Keywords 1 paragraph1 topic 高三学生去春游讨论2 paragraph2 supportingandopposingideasandreasons 接触自然呼吸新鲜空气精神放松大脑休息高考临近没心情玩耽误学习3 paragraph3 theauthor sopinion 以我的观点 senior3students gospringouting discussion beclosetonature breathesomefreshair relaxthemselves resttheirbrains withcollegeentranceexaminationdrawingnear don tfeellikegoing inmyopinion delaylearning Keywords 高中生身体差充足的睡眠加强锻炼 增加户外活动定时吃饭少吃零食养成良好的健康习惯 highschoolstudents poorhealth thehealthisinbadcondition enoughsleep takemoreexerciseanddomoreoutdooractivities havethreemealsregularly eatlesssnacks Form developgoodhealthhabits Keysentences paragraph1 simplyintroducethetopic 1 我们就 高三学生要不要参加春游活动 展开了讨论 WehavehadaheateddiscussionaboutwhetherSenior3studentsshouldgospringoutingornot Differentpeoplehavediferentopinionsonthequestion 2 关于这个问题不同的人有不同的观点 Paragraph2 statetheviewsandreasonsofbothparties Point1 正方观点Sentencepattern Mostofus about65 areinfavoroftheideathat Moststudents about65 arefortheideathat 2 Moststudents about65 arefortheideathatSenior3studentsshouldgospringouting 1 Mostofusabout65 areinfavoroftheideathatSenior3studentsshouldgospringouting 65 的学生支持这个观点认为高三学生应该春游 Reason1 接触大自然 呼吸新鲜空气 有利健康 Sentencepattern Theythinkitgood forsb sth todosth Intheiropinion itisofgreatbenefittodosth 1 Theythinkitgoodfortheirhealthtobeclosetonatureandbreathesomefreshair 2 Intheiropinion itisofgreatbenefittobeclosetonatureandbreathesomefreshair Reason2 另外 活动能够放松精神 休息大脑 以致于他们更有精力 theycanrelaxthemselvesforawhileandresttheirbrains theywillbemoreenergetic What smore inaddition besides sothat Conclusion 小段总结 进一步亮明观点 前后呼应 他们认为这将对学生有益 某事对某人有益sth dogoodtosb sth bebeneficialtosb Theythinkitwilldogoodtotheirstudents Theythinkitisbeneficialtotheirstudents Point2 的学生认为不应该春游 反方观点 注意 使用过渡句 自然衔接句子和段落 承上启下 Sentencepattern However Someothershavetheoppositeopinion Ontheotherhand somestudentsareagainsttheidea however about35 studentshavetheoppositeopinion Ontheotherhand about35 studentsareagainsttheidea Reason1 高考临近 没有心情玩Sentencepattern Theysay believe holdtheopinion that Theybelievethatwithcollegeentranceexamination draw near theydon tfeellike go anywhere going drawing Reason2 另外 他们认为春游耽误学习 他们应该集中精力学习 注意 两个观点之间的连接 theythinkthatgoingspringoutingwill andtheyshould theirstudies fix focustheirattentionon delaylearning Besides 现在正是春暖花开的春游时节 你校学生以 高三学生要不要参加春游活动 展开了讨论 请根据以下讨论结果 写一篇短文 Howtowriteagoodcomposition 表示观点对比类写作作文模板RecentlyWehavehadaheateddiscussionabout 论点 Differentpeoplehavedifferentopinionsonthisproblem Moststudentsareinfavoroftheideathat Theythink 理由一 What smore theycan 理由二 However about35 studentsholdtheoppositeopinion Foronething theysaythat 理由一 Foranotherthing theythinkthat 理由二 AsfarasI mconcerned itis not agoodideatodo WehavehadaheateddiscussionaboutwhetherSenior3studentsshouldgospringoutingornot Opinionsaredividedonthequestion Moststudents about65 arefortheideathatSenior3studentsshouldgospringouting Theythinkitgoodfortheirhealthtobeclosetonatureandbreathesomefreshairandwhat smore theycanrelaxthemselvesforawhileandresttheirbrainssothattheywillbemoreenergetic Theythinkitwilldogoodtotheirstudents Ontheotherhand about35 studentsareagainsttheidea Theysaythatwithcollegeentranceexaminationdrawingnear theydon tfeellikegoinganywhere Besides theythinkgoingspringoutingwilltakeatleastadayoff Theycan taffordthetime Theythinktheyshouldfixtheirattentionontheirstudies WehavehadaheateddiscussionaboutwhetherSenior3studentsshouldgospringoutingornot Moststudents about65 arefortheideathat Ontheotherhand about35 studentsare againsttheidea Senior3studentsshouldgospringouting what smore Besides WhetherornotshouldSenior3studentsgospringouting Wehavehadaheateddiscussion Opinionsaredividedonthequestion Moststudents about65 arefortheideathatSenior3studentsshouldgospringouting Theythinkitgoodfortheirhealthtobeclosetonatureandbreathesomefreshairandwhat smore theycanrelaxthemselvesforawhileandresttheirbrainssothattheywillbemoreenergetic Theythinkitwilldogoodtotheirstudents Ontheotherhand about35 studentsareagainsttheidea Theysaythatwithcollegeentranceexaminationdrawingnear theydon tfeellikegoinganywhere Besides theythinkgoingspringoutingwi