2013年丰城二中高考英语写作.doc

2013年丰城二中高考英语写作一、写作文四步1 审题，明确具体要求通过审题弄清楚写作的要求, 包括文章主题、写作内容、主要时态、主体人称等。其中主体人称, 就是要确定以第几人称进行写作。2 确定所需主要词汇和所用表达结构理清要点，然后选词造句，对列出的要点进行语言组织。这时要注意力求语言准确得当。同时应尽可能使用较高级的语法结构和词汇，如非谓语动词、复合句等使句式多种多样，多样化句式, 方能显示较强的语言功底, 大大提高作文档次，最大限度地完美文章。根据表达需要, 交叉使用长句与短句、简单句与复杂句。(1) 用it is/was.that.强调句式；(2) 用作状语的介词短语开头的完全倒装句或用以only in this way等开头的部分倒装句；(3) 用with的复合结构(with+宾语+宾补)作状语或定语；(4) 用非谓语动词；(5) 用what引导的名词性从句；(6) 用独立主格结构；(7) 恰当运用感叹句、被动句等；(8) 适当运用however, in my opinion, fortunately, personally等插入语；(9) 尽量用短语代替单词来表达同样的意思; 3 整理成篇 行文连贯。接下来要根据内容分清文章的层次，确定详略，将写好的单句要重新排列组合起来，使之前后连贯成一篇完整的文章。同时选用恰当的关联词使文章过渡自然，行文流畅。另外，根据内容编排，该分段时要分段，使表达清楚，一目了然。行云流水，整齐划一，闯过写作第四关。4. 润色, 使其锦上添花一查人称是否符合要求；二查语法是否正确, 特别是时态、主谓一致等, 确保“语言规范”；三查逻辑关系, 看前后观点是否一致, 特别是你所举的例子与你要证明的观点是否一致；四查是否使用一些较为高级的句型, 如非谓语动词结构、with 短语结构、定语从句、倒装句型、恰当的连接词等。这条不必强求, 视自己实际水平而定。二、作文模版一、对比观点1、对比选择型模板一（二个角度） There is a widespread concern over the issue that （作文题目）. But it is well known that the opinion concerning this hot topic varies from person to person.A majority of people think that _ 观点一_ . In their views there are 2 factors contributing to this attitude as follows: in the first place,原因一. Furthermore, in the second place, 原因二. So it goes without saying that观点一. People,however,differintheiropinionsonthismatter.Somepeople hold the idea that观点二. In their point of view, on the one hand，原因一. On the other hand,原因二. Therefore, thereis nodoubtthat观点二_.As far as I am concerned, Ifirmlysupporttheviewthat观点一或二.Itis not only because _._, but also because _._. The more _._, the more_._.2、对比选择型模板二（二个角度）1).Recently, we may hear quite different opinions_.2).Most people take it for granted that_.3).However, others hold_.4).A dominant idea is that_.5).In this view,_.6).Nevertheless, the objectors think_.7).They argue that_.8).As to me, I prefer_.9).On the one hand,_.10).On the other hand,_.11).Therefore,_.12).In conclusion,_.2、对比选择型模板三（二个角度）1).There is a heated debate over_.2).It is commonly accepted that_.3).In contrast, others_.4).Those who hold the first opinion suggest_.5).In their view,_.6).However, others think_.7).They argue that_.8).Considering one after another, I stand on the side of_.9).First of all,_.10).Further more,_.11).Thirdly,_.12).Therefore,_.二、说明利弊Nowadays many people prefer A because it plays a significant role in our daily life. Generally, its advantages can be seen as follows. First (的优点之一) . Besides,（的优点之二） .But every coin has two sides. The negative aspects are also apparent. One of the important disadvantages is that (的第一个缺点) To make matters worse, (的第二个缺点) Through above analyses, I believe that the positive aspects overweigh the negative ones. Therefore, I would like to (我的看法) (From the comparison between these positive and negative effects of A, we should take it reasonably and do it according to the circumstances we are in. Only in this way, (对前景的预测)三、解决方法题型 （要求考生列举出解决问题的多种途径 ） 问题现状 怎样解决(解决方案的优缺点) In recent days, we have to face the problem A , which is becoming more and more serious. First, .(说明的现状) Second, .(举例进一步说明现状) Faced with A , we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation. For one thing, (解决方法一). For another .(.解决方法二). Finally, .(解决方法三). Personally, I believe that .(我的解决方法). Consequently, Im confident that a bright future is awaiting us because.(带来的好处).四、现象说明文Recently _, what amazes us most is_, it is turethat_. There are many reasons explaining _.The main reason is_. What is more, _. Thirdly _. As a result _. Considering all there, _. For one thing _, for another_. In Conclusion _. 五、图表作文As is shown/indicated/illustrated by the figure/percentageinthe table (graph/ picture/ pie/ chart), _作文题目的议题_has been on the rise (goesup/increases/drops/decreases), significantly/dramatically/ steadily rising/decreasing from_ in _年_ to _ in _年_. From the sharp/marked decline/ rise in the chart, it goes without saying that _现象总结_.Thereareatleasttwogoodreasons accounting for _.Ontonehand, _. Ontheotherhand, _ isduetothefactthat _.Inaddition, _ isresponsiblefor _.(Maybetherearesomeotherreasonstoshow _.Butitisgenerallybelievedthattheabovementionedreasonsarecommonly convincing. )AsfarasIamconcerned,I hold the point of view that _. 三、英文作文必背之12个句型1 There is no denying the fact that + S + V .(不可否认的.)There is no denying the fact that air pollution is an extremely serious problems2 It is universally acknowledged/accepted that +句子 (普遍都知道/接受.)It is universally acknowledged/accepted that a persons education is the most important aspect of his life.3. What surprises/amazes me most is that 使我惊讶/惊奇的是.What surprises/amazes me most is that the little girlknows so many things.4. 使用定语从句Environmental protection is of great importance, which can make us live more comfortably and more healthily.5 When it comes to （当说到.时，）When it comes to education, the majority of people believe that education is a lifetime study.6 As an old saying goes: (正如老话所说.)As an old saying goes: All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.7 It is/was + 被强调部分 +that. It was not until 11:00pm that I came back to home.8 Only + 状语 ，使用部分倒装Only in this way can we live a more harmonious life.9 So , Such开头，使用部分倒装So precious is time that we cant afford to waste it.10 as 作“尽管”意思时Rich as our country is, the qualities of our living are by no means satisfactory.11 doing sth. 做主语； enable sb. to do sth.Listening to music enables us to be relaxed.Living in school enables them to save a great deal of time on the way between home and school everyday12 It is hig