2019_2020学年高中英语Unit2PoemsSectionⅤWriting教学案新人教版选修.docVIP

Section Writing诗歌改写技法指导本单元的写作任务是诗歌改写。改写是用不同形式表达同一内容，使之成为与原文意思相同而表达方式、文体不同的作品。改写可以变换文章的人称、顺序，可以改变原文的体裁、结构，也可以灵活运用自己的语言，尽可能用多种方法来表达、替换原文的内容。一、基本框架具体写作步骤一般是“三段式”，具体为：第一段：简要介绍诗歌的内容。第二段：详细论述诗歌的主题。第三段：总结照应上文。二、注意事项1改写必须忠实于原作的中心思想。这就要求想象和联想要符合原作精神，不能任意想象，谈得漫无边际。2改写要注意创作性。改写是再创作的过程。作者并不是单纯地翻译诗歌，不能仅就诗歌的内容进行简单的扩充，而是要进一步展开种种想象，使人物形象有血有肉，栩栩如生，使故事情节更加完整生动。3改写时可以插入丰富的想象，将原来文中没有的东西，如人物的表情、动作、语言、神态和行为等都加进去，在不改变原作主题思想的基础上，写成一篇完整的文章。总之，诗歌改写应该把握原文的主题，结合自己的理解，用通俗易懂的语言进行创作，加入自己的语言，使文章符合主题，流畅易懂。黄金表达1开头The poem is written by the famous poet . It is rhymed at the end of every line.2中间As far as I am concerned, this poem is . Compared with other poems, . In the poem, we can sense/find . The poet expressed his/her feeling of . in the poem.This poem has successfully touched the hearts of the readers.In my opinion, we should learn . Therefore, we can find that . If I were the poet, I would . We can appreciate the image of . through the piece of poem.3结尾In conclusion, . Through the poem, . 典题演练请将下面的英文短诗，以“Reading Is Valuable”为题改写成为一篇短文。I love reading books，Which are my best friends.They are an important bridge to a new world，Always helping me avoid getting puzzled.They remove all troubles just like a sharp knife，And bring happiness to me in daily life.As for me a book is the angels sweetest kiss.注意：1.词数100左右；2展开合理想象，突出主题，但不得照抄短诗原文；3必须结合短诗的内容，但不能写成诗歌的形式。Reading Is Valuable 谋篇布局1体裁：说明文2话题：诗歌改写3时态：一般现在时4人称：第一人称为主5结构联想词汇1以多种灵活的方式 _答案：in many flexible ways2在解决问题方面有帮助 _答案：be helpful in problemsolving3每当我感到沮丧时 _答案：whenever I feel depressed4不但而且 _答案：not only . but also . 连词成句1通过阅读，我可以了解作者在书中以多种灵活的方式表达出来的思想和情感。I can know the writers thoughts and feelings by reading what the writer expresses in books in many flexible ways.By means of reading, I can get to know the writers thoughts and feelings that are conveyed in books in many flexible ways.(升级句)2除此之外，阅读能帮我解决问题并摆脱困境。Besides, reading can help me solve the problems and help me out.Besides, not only is reading helpful in problemsolving but it also gets me out of trouble.(升级句)3每当我感到沮丧时，阅读帮助我把消极情绪转化为快乐和勇气。When I feel sad, reading helps me turn passive moods into pleasure and courage.Whenever I feel depressed, reading helps me transform negative moods into joy and courage.(升级句)连句成篇Reading Is ValuableThe poem tells us reading is valuable in many ways.For me, it benefits me in the following ways. Firstly, by means of reading, I can get to know the writers thoughts and feelings that are conveyed in books in many flexible ways. Secondly, I can learn about the writing styles of many foreign writers by reading some translations and even get to know the appropriate words and action in different situations by reading. Besides, not only is reading helpful in problemsolving but it also gets me out of trouble. Whenever I feel depressed, reading helps me transform negative moods into joy and courage.All in all, I have benefited a lot from reading, which makes me a better person. I think books are the best gifts that God has given me.跟踪训练请根据下面的英文短诗，展开适当的想象，写一篇短文，标题为：My Teacher Mr Moore。My Teacher Mr MooreTheres a teacher Mr Moore.Who is lovely and thirtyfour.Always encouraging us to try.He leads us to a world of “why”We all admire him more and more.注意：1.不得照抄短诗原文；2必须结合短诗的内容，发挥想象，适当展开；3必须突出短诗的主题，结构完整，语言连贯；4短文不能写出诗歌形式；5词数100左右。 精彩范文名师点评there is no other teacher who impresses me more than . , no more than结构与there be句式结合使用，同时还镶嵌了一个定语从句，使得句式复杂而高级，同时表达了最高级含义。Compared with other teachers, Mr . ，过去分词短语作状语，进一步说明老师的突出之处。make his classes lively and interesting，形容词作宾补，说明老师课堂的特点。not only . but also 连接并列谓语，用得恰如其分。whenever he puts forward questions 句中使用了whenever引导的让步状语从句。感叹句的运用表达了对老师的热爱与钦佩之情。总评本文是一篇人物介绍。文章重点讲述了老师出色的教学方法对同学们帮助良多，从而获得学生的尊敬和喜爱。文章总体结构清晰，全文三段式行文，采用总分总结构，长短句结合，句式丰富多变，语言准确、地道、流畅，很多短语和高级句式的使用令文章颇显档次，语言功力深厚，是上佳之作。课外拓展阅读中国优秀传统文化专题练阅读下面短文，在空白处填入1个适当的单词或括号内单词的正确形式。Classical Chinese poetry is traditional Chinese poetry _1_ (write) in Classical Chinese and typified by certain traditional forms. Many _2_ (poem) come from particular historical periods, such as the poetry of the Tang Dynasty and the verse of the Song Dynasty. _3_ (it) existence dates back to at least as early as the publication of the Classic of Poetry or Shijing. There are _4_ (vary) combinations of forms and genres, most of _5_ arose at the end of the Tang Dynasty.Development of Classical Chinese poetry _6_ (active) continued up to the year of 1919, when the May Fourth Movement _7_ (take) place, and is still popular even today. Classical Chinese poetry created during this 2,500year period has been developing continuously, _8_ (produce) a great deal of diversityclassified by both major historical periods _9_ dynastic periods.One of the key aspects of Classical Chinese poetry is its close interrelationship with other forms of Chinese art