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Obama模板If there is anyone out there who still doubts that America is a place where all things are possible, who still wonders if the dream of our Founders is alive in our time, who still questions the power of our democracy, tonight is your answer.If there is anyone out there who still doubts that XXXXX(论点一) is a XXXXX where all things are possible, who still wonders if the dream of our XXXXX（论点二） is XXXXX in our time, who still questions the power of our XXXXX（论点三）, this essay is my answer.用于最后一段结尾，进行总结 Its the answer spoken by young and old, rich and poor, Democrat and Republican, black, white, Hispanic, Asian, Native American, gay, straight, disabled and not disabled (cheers) Americans who sent a message to the world that we have never been just a collection of individuals or a collection of red states and blue states; we are and always will be the United States of America. (Cheers, applause.)Its the answer spoken by young and old, rich and poor, Democrat and Republican, black, white, Hispanic, Asian, Native American, gay, straight, disabled and not disabled, the people who sent a message to the questionnaire conducted by the XXXXX team of Stanford university; all of these concluded the same result that XXXXX（观点）.用于举例 Its the answer that that led those whove been told for so long by so many to be cynical and fearful and doubtful about what we can achieve to put their hands on the arc of history and bend it once more toward the hope of a better day. Its been a long time coming, but tonight, because of what we did on this day, in this election, at this defining moment, change has come to America. (Cheers, applause.)Its the answer that that led those whove been told for so long by so many to be cynical and fearful and doubtful about XXXXX（正面观点） to put their hands on the arc of history and bend it once more toward the hope of a better day. Its been a long time coming, at this defining moment, change has come to our cultural.最后一段，正面观点（段落开始结尾均可）I want to thank my partner in this journey, a man who campaigned from his heart and spoke for the men and women he grew up with on the streets of Scranton, and rode with on the train home to Delaware, the vice president-elect of the United States, Joe Biden. (Cheers, applause.)People want to thank XXXXX（某人) in their XXXXX（做了什么）, a man/woman who campaigned from his heart and spoke for the men and women he grew up with on the streets, and rode with on the train home to tiny village to XXXXX（做了什么辛苦工作）.具体例子And to my campaign manager, David Plouffe (cheers, applause) the unsung hero of this campaign who built the best (cheers) the best political campaign I think in the history of the United States of America (cheers, applause) to my chief strategist, David Axelrod (cheers, applause) who has been a partner with me every step of the way, to the best campaign team ever assembled in the history of politics (cheers) you made this happen, and I am forever grateful for what youve sacrificed to get it done. (Cheers, applause.)And to my XXXXX, XXXXX（某人） who has been a partner with me every step of XXXXX某个过程, to the best XXXXX（职位，比如说领队啊） ever assembled in the history of XXXXX（某事） who made this happen, and XXXXX（某人）will be forever grateful for what XXXXX have sacrificed to get it done.描述某特定人或者人群的具体例子I was never the likeliest candidate for this office. We didnt start with much money or many endorsements. Our campaign was not hatched in the halls of Washington; it began in the backyards of Des Moines and the living rooms of Concord and the front porches of Charleston. It was built by working men and women who dug into what little savings they had to give $5 and $10 and $20 to the cause. (Cheers, applause.) It grew strength from the young people who rejected the myth of their generations apathy (cheers) who left their homes and their families for jobs that offered little pay and less sleep. It drew strength from the not-so-young people who braved the bitter cold and scorching heat to knock on the doors of perfect strangers, and from the millions of Americans who volunteered and organized, and proved that more than two centuries later a government of the people, by the people and for the people has not perished from the Earth. This is your victory. (Cheers, applause.)XXXXX（某事） was built by working men and women who dug into what little savings they had to give $5 and $10 and $20 to the cause.具体例子XXXXX（某事） grew strength from the young people who rejected the myth of their generations apathy who left their homes and their families for jobs that offered little pay and less sleep.具体例子XXXXX（某事） drew strength from the not-so-young people who braved the bitter cold and scorching heat to knock on the doors of perfect strangers, and from the millions of XXXXX（某人） who volunteered and organized, and proved that more than two centuries later a government of the people, by the people and for the people has not perished from the Earth.具体例子以上的三个例子，一定要单独使用，千万不要放在一段之内使用。Now, I know you didnt do this just to win an election, and I know you didnt do it for me. You did it because you understand the enormity of the task that lies ahead. For even as we celebrate tonight, we know the challenges that tomorrow will bring are the greatest of our lifetime: two wars, a planet in peril, the worst financial crisis in a century. Even as we stand here tonight, we know there are brave Americans waking up in the deserts of Iraq and the mountains of Afghanistan to risk their lives for us. There are mothers and fathers who will lie awake after their children fall asleep and wonder how theyll make the mortgage or pay their doctors bills or save enough for their childs college education.For even as all reasons listed, we know the challenges that opponents will bring are the greatest of our front.最后一段开头Theres new energy to harness, new jobs to be created, new schools to build, and threats to meet, alliances to repair.If XXXXX, theres new energy to harness, new jobs to be created, new schools to build, and threats to meet, alliances to repair.用于新建XXXXX将为我们带来的好处。MR. OBAMA: There will be setbacks and false starts. There are many who wont agree with every decision or policy I make as president, and we know the government cant solve every problem. But I will always be honest with you about the challenges we face. I will listen to you, especially when we disagree. And above all, I will ask you to join in the work of remaking this nation the only way its been done in America for 221 years block by block, brick by brick, calloused hand by calloused hand.There will be setbacks and defect. There are many who wont agree with every decision in this essay, and, of course, the XXXXX（某人） cant solve every problem. But XXXXX（某人） will always be honest with you about the challenges you face.结尾段的开头原文：What weve been debating here in Washington over the last few weeks will affect the lives of the students here and families all across America in potentially profound ways. This debate over budgets and deficits is about more than just numbers on a page; its about more than just cutting and spending. Its about the kind of future that we want. Its about the kind of country that we believe in. And thats what I want to spend some time talking about today.模板：What weve been debating here in XXXXX over the last XXXXXXXXX will affect the XXXXXXXXX here and XXXXXXXXX all across XXXXXXXX in XXXXXXXXXXX. This debate over XXXXXXXXXX is about more than just numbers on a page; its about more than just XXXXXXXXXXXXXX. Its about the kind of future that we want. Its about the kind of country that we believe in. And thats what I want to spend some time talking about today.超棒的起始段，几乎就是为托福作文准备的。原文：But theres always been another thread running through our history - a belief that were all connected, and that there are some things we can only do together, as a nation. We believe, in the words of our first Republican President, Abraham Lincoln, that through government, we should do together what we cannot do as well for ourselves.模板：But theres always been another thread running through our history - a belief that XXXXXXXXXXX正面观点, and that there are some things we can only do together, as XXXXXXXX. We believe, in the words of XXXXXXXXXX, （that through XXXXXXXXX词句可以忽略不用）, we should do together what we cannot do as well for ourselves.用于论证段原文：Now, for much of the last century, our nation found a way to afford these investments and priorities with the taxes paid by its citizens.模板：Now, for much of the XXXXXXXX一段具体时间, XXXXXXX found a way to afford these investments and priorities with the XXXXXXXXX paid by XXXXXXXXX.用于论证或者举例。原文：But as far back as the 1980s, America started amassing debt at more alarming levels, and our leaders began to realize that a larger challenge was on the horizon.模板：But as far back as the XXXXXX, XXXXXXXXXXXX started XXXXXXXX at more alarming levels（此处写得妙）, and XXXXXXXX began to realize that a larger challenge was on the horizon.（写得好有画面感啊）用于论证或者举例。原文：To meet this challenge, our leaders came together three times during the 1990s to reduce our nations deficit three times.模板：To meet this XXXXXXX, somebody do something three times during the XXXXXXX to do something three times.用于论证或者举例。原文：But we have to do it without putting at risk current retirees, or the most vulnerable, or people with disabilities; without slashing benefits for future generations; and without subjecting Americans guaranteed retirement income to the whims of the stock market.模板：But we have to do it without putting at risk current XXXXXX, or the most vulnerable, or people with disabilities; without slashing benefits for future generations; and without subjecting XXXXXXXX（某国家） guaranteed retirement income to the whims of the stock market.O(_)O哈哈，又见奥巴马并列金句！而且模板度超高！原文：To give you an idea of how much damage this caused to our nations checkbook, consider this: In the last decade, if we had simply found a way to pay for the tax cuts and the prescription drug benefit, our deficit would currently be at low historical levels in the coming years.模板：To give you an idea of how much XXXXXXXX this caused to XXXXXXXXX, consider this: In the last decade, if we had simply found a way to XXXXXXXXXX, our XXXXXXXXXX would currently be at XXXXXXXXXXXX historical levels in the coming years.绝棒的举例句！原文：Finally, there are those who believe we shouldnt make any reforms to Medicare, Medicaid, or Social Security, out of fear that any talk of change to these programs will immediately usher in the sort of steps that the House Republicans have proposed.模板：Finally, there are those who believe we should XXXXXXXXX, out of fear that any talk of change to XXXXXXXX（接名词结构）will imm