2009-2010-2第三次作文评讲.doc

2009-2010-2第三次作文评讲Topic One: My hometown is very much like my college town；Sample:My hometown is very mcuh like my college town./ There are many similarities between my hometown and college town. （Point of view）My hometown is very small but beautiful. Its located in rural area and surrounded by farmland, so the air is very fresh there. Similarly, my college town is small too. It lies in the center of framland and there are many trees in my college town. When I walk in the schoolyard, I feel cool even in summer.（Comparison）In this way, I can say that my college town makes me feel at home./ Therefore/so, living in my college town makes me feel at home. （Result） (09中文 陈思，及中文，历史，教育其他同学)Topic Two: Friendship and love.Sample One: Friendship and love are both important in our life. （Point of view）We no longer feel lonely when we have friends. It always makes us happy when we study, play and chat with them. When we feel sad and want to tell someone what happened, they always listen carefully, comfort us and try their best to make us happy. Similarly, love can drive loneliness away and bring happiness. We can share our happiness and sorrow with our lovers. They always accompany us whether in happiness or in trouble. They are devoted to us and willing to do anything for us. （Comparison）Our life becomes more beautiful and colorful for having friends and lovers. So we should value friendship as well as love. （Result）(09历史 安晓乐)Sample Two:As we all know that friendship is similar to love very much. （Point of view）First, two people, who have a good friendshiop, care about each other. When meeting difficulties, they face up to and solve them together. Moreover, they have many same interests and share happiness and sadness with each other. Similarly, two people who fall in love with each other, care about each other, too. First, they often talk about their dreams and solve the problems together. Second, they have many same opinions and understand the feelings of each other. （Comparison）In a word, friendship is similar to love very much and it is difficult to define the differences between them. （Result）(09教育 苏可可)Sample Three:Forming freidship and love needs the same factors. （Point of view）When we develop our friendship, we should choose someone who can satisfy our needs so that we can develop deep friendship. Friends should have the same beliefs, share the same values, and care more about each other. Friends also should be honest, loyal and warm-hearted. Similarly, our boyfriend or girlfrind should be loyal, honest and warm-hearted too. Having the same values and beliefs is also important. （Comparison）In this way, we can form friendship and love. In a word, froming true frienship and love needs the same factors. （Result）(09历史 郑玉杰)Topic Three: Mothers love and Fathers love。Sample One:Mothers love is very much like fathers love. （Point of view）Mothers love by its very nature is unconditional. Its great and selfless. When I was a child, my mother looked after me everyday. She did always housework for my brother and me, and when I was unhappy, she hugged me and said, “Dont cry please. Here is mother!” So I love my mother very much. Similarly, fathers love is very great and selfless, too. When I was a child, my father played with me like a friend sometimes. And he looked after me like a mother sometimes. When I was unhappy, he said, “My girl, you are the best in the world!” （Comparison）My fathers words are different with my mothers but my fathers love is almost identical with my mothers. （Result）(09教育 吴丽娜)Sample Two:People always say that fathers love is like a mountain while mothers love is like water. On the exterior, they are different, but on the interior, they are similar. /Mothers love and fathers love are different in form, but both are true love/important.（Point of view）First of all, both fathers and mothers love are selfless. They devoted their time, energy and even life to bring us up for nothing. Whats more, they are really concerned about us. Our mothers tend to take care of our daily life and our fathers give us moral support. （Comparison）However, no matter what way they choose, the result is that they both help us grow up better and more healthy. （Result）Topic Four: E-dictionaries and traditional dictionaries Sample: E-dictionaries and traditional dictionaries E-dictionaries and traditional dictionaries are similar./ E-dictionaries are very much like traditional dictionaries.（Point of view）As science and techonology develops , more and more E-dictionaries come out and are widely used by students . E-dictionaries are tools to help us solve all kinds of difficult problems in our language learning . We often regard E-dictionaries as our teachers or friends . When we dont know the meaning of a word or are puzzled by the grammer . We will naturally turn to them for help . Similarly , when it comes to tradictionaries , we use them to look up for words meaning , pronuncition , useful expressions and so on , just as what E-dictionaries do . （Comparison）All in all , both E-dictionaries and tradictional dictionaries are useful and efficient tools to be used by people in their language study. （Result） (09历史 徐亚飞)unit 1TranslationX.1.She wouldnt take a drink, much less could she stay for dinner.2.He thought I was lying to him,whereas I was telling the truth.3.How do you account for the fact that you have been late every day this week?4.The increase in their profits is due partly to their new market strategy.5.Such measures are likely to result in the improvement of work efficiency.6.We have already poured a lot of time and energy into the project, so we have to carry on.XI1. 我认为他不会抢劫，更不用说暴力抢劫了。2. 男工平均工资每小时10美元，而女工才每小时7美元。3. 自然界的平衡一旦遭到破坏，就会带来很多不可预知的影响。4. 期终考试迫在眉睫，你最好多花点时间看书。5. 有趣的是，消费者发现越来越难以辨别某些品牌的原产国。其部分原因来自于全球化带来的影响，部分原因是由于产地的变化。6. 最近一次调查表明，妇女占总劳动力的40%。unit 3TranslationX.1.You are never too experienced to learn new techniques.2.There remains one problem,namely,who should be sent to head the research there.3.Their relationship did meet with some difficulty at the beginning because of cultural differences.4.Though he has had ups and downs,I believed all along that he would succeed someday.5.I have some reservations about the truth of your claim.6.She isnt particularly tall,but her slim figure gives an illusion of height.XI.1. 应尽早告知年轻人：必须认真对待法律。2. 他现在面临一个重要决定，这个决定可能会影响他的整个前程。3. 即使在情况最糟糕的时候，你也必须保持镇静和信心。4. 人际关系的成功与否与双方相处是否融洽以及交流是否顺畅有很大关系。5. 他受到袭击，身受重伤，随后不治而亡。6. 他的举止至少在表面上像个正常人。unit 4TranslationX.1.It is a great pleasure to meet friends from afar.2.It doesnt matter whether the cat is black or white as long as it catches mice.3.You must let me have the money back without fail by ten oclock tomorrow morning.4.Allow me to take part in this project: I am more than a little interested in it.5.Everyone knows that he is special:He is free to come and go as he pleases.6.Watching the unhappy look on her face,I felt as though she wishes to say something to me.XI.1. 现如今，仅仅受过中等教育的人要想找份好工作越来越难了。2. 留得青山在，不怕没柴烧。3. 如果你对所购物品不满意，我们将很乐意退款。4. 我们对这块伟大的美丽的土地心怀感激之情，多年来它迎接了众多的人来这里的海滩游览。5. 让老师吃惊的是，没人自愿当班长。6. 那条狗忠心耿耿地继续在火车站等待主人，直到两年后死去。unit 6TranslationX.1. (Just) as a machine needs regular running, so does the body need regular exercise.2. He learned to play the piano while studying in the United States.3. To our disappointment, he turned down our invitation.4. The reality is that, for better or worse, the world has changed with advance of new technologies.5. Most of the female students in my class appear to be ill at ease when (they are) required to answer questions.6. The local government took charge of the security for the sports meeting.XI.1. 足球之于意大利人，就像乒乓球之于中国人。2. 教师没急着要班里同学现在作决定，而是要他们仔细考虑后再下决心。3. 我不知道那是什么饮料，我喝了那么多；结果那些小伙子只能送我回家，因为我有点醉了。4. 在中国北方，三月份往往多风。5. 尽管如此，政府已经同意总支出增加6.2%。6. 信息被定义为通过陈述事实向大脑传达的知识，它可以有多种形式。unit 7TranslationX.1. At the meeting they discussed, among other things, the present economic situation.2. The more I learned about the nature, the more absorbed I became in its mystery.3. The doctor recommends that those stressed people should try something new, interesting and challenging in order to give their negative feelings an outlet.4. The teacher gives more homework to the student who has bad grades instead of cutting it down.5. By contrast, American parents are more likely to attribute their childrens success to natural talent.6. One of a teachers priorities is to stimulate students interests and their creativity.XI.1. 除了其他内容，他的研究还牵涉到发展中国家与爱滋病的斗争。2. 这些人明白了他们的服务越好，他们就挣得越多。3. 尽管父亲似乎忧虑不安，但苏珊感觉不到他在表情或行动上有什么变化。4. 能获得多少经济资助已成为学生选择上哪所学校的更重要的因素。5. 她已经减少了外出和买衣服的花费,但她还是没钱开始还债。6. 控制压力的方法之一是认识到生活中有很多事情是我们无法掌控的。unit 8TranslationX. 1. Little did she know that this picture would one day be worth more than a million dollars. 2. While I understand what you say, I dont agree with you on the issue.3. I think the police are meant to protect people.4. I went to see him yesterday, only to find that he had gone abroad several days before.5. At the weekly meeting, everyone must confine their remarks to the subject.6. If only I hadnt said those silly words! I was too young then to distinguish right from wrong.XI. 1. 五年前我几乎不会想到今天我会与这么多来自世界各地的学生坐在一起学习英语。2. 虽然这些职位给你带来荣耀和权力，但是它也赋予你巨大的责任。 3. 从长远来看，粮食生产和人口增长之间的竞争难以轻易解决。4. 有时我们发现，自己爬上了成功的阶梯，却发现阶梯靠在错误的墙壁上。（即：我们爬上去了，却发现不是自己真正追求的东西。）5. 新计划的目的是让年轻人快速走上管理岗位。6. 这个年轻人志向高远，非常希望能有所成就，让父母为他骄傲。 unit 9TranslationX.1. I am sure that I will make something of myself, even though I have not achieved any major success so far.2. I have been working hard for so many years; I feel I am entitled to a good future.3. When her husband deserted her, leaving her with nothing but scatt