英语文段书面表达学案nu-侯继生.doc

谨以初中英语文段书面表达及分析评价赋分表献给我的学生和前来指导的老师们！英语文段书面表达-主题句和支持句选用与评价学案 主讲：丰台实验学校 侯继生 班级_ 姓名_ 一、文段书面表达题1借钱篇：根据中文和英文提示，写一封意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于60词的回信。信的开头和结尾已给出，其次数不计入所完成的回信内。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。成长中每个人都要面对烦恼，并解决问题。假如你叫刘明，是美国中学生艾丽丝的朋友。你收到了她的电子邮件，请给他回复，回答他的问题，提出你的建议，并就此事谈谈你的看法。来信：Hi! Liu Ming,Im so sad. Angela is a close friend of mine. This morning she wanted toborrow some money from me. If I lend her the money, Im afraid she wontpay me back. I dont know what to do. Do you have the same problem? I need your help.Im looking forward to hearing from you soon. yoursAlice中 折 线二、文段书面表达题2公交篇：根据中文提示和英文书信内容，写一封意思连贯，符合逻辑、不少于60词的回信。信的开头已给出，其词数不计入所完成的回信内。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。假如你叫刘京，是美国中学生托尼的笔友，你受到了他的来信。请给拖你写一封回信，回答他的问题，介绍北京的公交服务，并说明你的感受。来信：Hi! Liu Jing,My grandpa is going to Beijing next month because he has heard a lot about the city and he would like to see it himself. He says the bus service in Beijing is very good now, and peoplecan go anywhere by bus. Is he right? Can you tell me something more about it?Im looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours Tony三、文段书面表达题1借钱篇(答案A)请你按提示进行分析评价题裁： 给朋友提建议是否借给别人钱 体裁：书信体作者：参考答案题源：2011年北京中考试题 词数：88句数：10总分：下面的问题是你分析评判的思路。不需逐个回答。1. 关于“回答”：哪一句是主题句和支持句？2. 关于“建议借给钱”：这个要点的主题句是什么？有几个支持句？分了几个层次来劝说的？ 3. 关于“看法”： “看法”的主题句和支持句分别是什么？从思想和联系实际方面支持句是怎样“说服人”的？4. 你认为一般用多少句话就可以完成这篇书面表达了？为什么？ 5如果要求你在文章的第(9)句后再加上一句话，你要写什么？一、是否体现题目要求的全部要点Hi, Alice, (1)Im glad to hear from you. (2)Yes, I sometimes have the same problem.(3)I think if she really needs the money, youd better lend it to her. (4)You dont have to worry too much. (5)Shell probably pay you back when she has money. (6)If you dont lend her the money, Im afraid you may lose the friend. (7)I think everyone may have trouble in life and we should help each other. (8)So when my friends need money, I will try my best to help them. (9)Maybe Ill get it back, or maybe I wont. (10)I hope what I said can help you. Yours Liu Ming531二、主题句(论点)： A：正确 B：模糊 C：有争议论述（支持句）层次与逻辑：A：清晰 B：一般 C：模糊321三、叙述和议论否合乎情理且有思想和教育性并且联系自己或实际？ A：很好 B：一般 C：没有 321。四、文段书面表达题1借钱篇(答案B)请你按提示进行分析评价题裁： 给朋友提建议是否借给别人钱 体裁：书信体作者：参考答案题源：2011年北京中考试题 词数：54句数：8总分：下面的问题是你分析评判的思路。不需逐个回答。1“回答问题”：“Yes，I do.”这个主题句有支持句吗？2“建议借给钱”:“(3)You must lend your money to her.”你是怎样看待这个主题句的？如果把must 改成“Youd better lend”效果会怎样？ 3 “谈看法”：你能找到要点3“看法”的主题句和支持句吗？从第(7)句等句子，你能看出此文在逻辑和层次方面的问题吗？4. 你还发现其它问题要评说的吗？一、是否体现题目要求的全部要点？Hi, Alice, (1)Im glad to hear from you. (2)Yes, I do. (3)I think you must lend your money to her. (4)She helps you, too. (5)Dont forget when you were ill, she helps you. (6) I think she will angry with you, if you dont lend her the money. (7)Please lend her the money, and she musts return soon, because she is your friend. (8)I hope what I said can help you. Yours Liu Ming531二、主题句(论点)： A、正确 B、模糊 C、错误论述（支持句）层次与逻辑： A、清晰 B、一般 C、混乱321三、叙述和议论否合乎情理且有思想和教育性并且联系自己或实际？ A、很好 B、一般 C、没有 321四、。公交篇答语、介绍公共汽车、及谈感想看法“参考资源库”1. the bus tickets are cheap and the are comfortable 2. Its true that the bus service in Beijing is very good/ much better than before.3. It doesnt take you long to get on . 4. You dont have to spendin getting on a bus/ wait for long to .5. There are many buses in Beijing.6. take you to anywhere you want to go.7. Yes, your grandpa / he is right.8. also some special seats for old peoplespecial routs(路线) for buses so buses can run very fast.9. I like taking buses very prefer taking a bus because its for the environment.10. I thinkyour grandpa will enjoy 11. Im sure will like the bus service in when he comes to 五、文段书面表达题2公交篇答题表：请你在空格处写短文题裁：向外国人介绍北京公共汽车交通 体裁：书信体作者：参考答案题源：2011年北京中考试题 词数：句数：总分：写作提示一、是否体现题目要求的全部要点？1、怎样回答？_2、从哪些方面谈北京公共汽车交通好的优势？_3、从那两个方面谈你的感受？_Dear Tony,Im glad to know your grandpa is coming to Beijing.If you have more questions, please ask me. Yours, Liu Jing 531二、主题句(论点)： A：正确 B：模糊 C：错误论述（支持句）层次与逻辑： A：清晰 B：一般 C：模糊321三、叙述和议论否合乎情理且有思想和教育性并且联系自己或实际？ A：很好 B：一般 C：没有 321四、。六、你的公交篇答案与“标答”比较表：请比较并在各项中写一两项你的收获或不足题裁：向外国人介绍北京公共汽车交通 体裁：书信体作者：参考答案题源：2011年北京中考试题 词数：句数：总分：反思与质疑提示：一、是否体现题目要求的全部要点？1、你的回答有什么不同？_2、在介绍北京公交的优势方面你从这个答案中得到了什么启示？_3、与答案相比在谈感受方面你有什么不足？_4、这个答案谈北京公交只涉及公共汽车，你是否觉得片面？你觉得还应该谈什么？ 另外，如果请你把这个答案的最后一句话换个说法，你怎么说？_Dear Tony,(1)Im glad to know your grandpa is coming to Beijing.(2)Your grandpa is right. (3)The bus service in Beijing is really good now. (4)There are bus lines all over Beijing and buses can even take you to a small village. (5)Besides, special seats are offered on buses. (6)People do not have to spend a long time waiting for a bus and the tickets are cheap. (7)I like taking a bus because I think its comfortable and also good for the environment. (8)So its a good choice for your grandpa to travel by bus in Beijing.Yours, Liu Jing 531二、主题句(论点)： A：正确 B：模糊 C：错误论述（支持句）层次与逻辑： A：清晰 B：一般 C：模糊321三、叙述和议论否合乎情理且有思想和教育性并且联系自己实际？ A：很好 B：一般 C：没有 321四、。七、作业：2009中考文段书面表达根据中文大意和英文提示词语写出意思连贯，符合逻辑，不少于60词的短文。所给英文提示词语供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。 某英文报纸就家务劳动（housework）话题征文，请你投稿。 每个家庭都有许多家务，人人都应该学做一些。谈谈你经常帮父母做哪些家务，有什么体会，并打算在暑假为家里做什么。 提示词语：every family, lots o