2014年英语六级作文三段式模板.doc

2014年英语六级作文经典通用三段式模板，考生可参考借鉴。第一段I assume that you are familiar with the words of sb, who once said, “谚语.”Definitely, 对谚语的解释. (记得最好用not onlybut also)It is obvious that中心句第二段Simple as sbs remark may sound, it contains abundant life philosophy and informs us of the significance of sth.why does sth play an indispensable role in our life ?sth enables us to achieve our objectives more smoothly and realize our dreams more rapidly.the morethe more(自己扩展一句)Quite a few examples can be given to prove the importance of sth, however, I can think of no better illustration than the following one: how could 例子人物 do if he failed to do sth ?(反问句，如果谁不做sth他就不可能成功之类的)第三段From my perspective, at no time should we ignore the importance of sth.Accordingly，we should and always bear in mind that sth can (我们应该怎么样并且记住sth可以怎么样)“自己编个谚语。” A famous philosopher also once said.大学英语六级作文实例讲析(1)For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes t owrite a short essay entitle My View on Plastic Surgery. You should write at least 150 words according to the outline given below in Chinese.1 越来越多的人接受整容手术2 我的看法及理由3 结论题目分析：观点论证型作文要求对某一问题发表自己的看法。通常要在首段提出话题，以及关于此话题不同的反应，并表明自己的观点，接下来要在主题段落里论述理由，最后在结尾重申一下自己的观点。参考范文：My View on Plastic SurgeryIn recent years, more and more people, especially some young girls choose to take plastic surgeries. Some people argue that this kind of surgery can improve ones appearance, thus secure a good job. Others hold a different opinion, they consider plastic surgery as a waste of money. Personally, I agree with the latter.Firstly, beauty is only skin-deep, as the saying goes, virtue is more important than appearance. Plastic surgery cannot improve ones character. Who do you think is more popular, an ordinary girl with charming personality, or a beautiful girl with arrogant manner? Secondly, success relies on ones abilities but not appearance. Some people, especially young girls dream to find a good job after taking plastic surgery. For example, it takes one at least 30,000 Yuan to have double eyelid. Fourthly, people have to bear the risks of an unsuccessful surgery which will be a lifelong pain.All in all, it is not advisable for people to take plastic surgeries. We can get what we want by improving our inner qualities, such as our personality and ability, and there is no need to endure the pains and economic loss of a plastic surgery.好词佳句总结：Beauty is only skin-deep, as the saying goes就像俗语所说的那样，外在美不过是表面现象bear the risks 承担风险competent and well-trained people 有真才实学的人arrogant 傲慢的，自大的must 作名词使用e.g.His new novel is a must for all lovers of crime fiction大学英语六级作文实例讲析(2)For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitle Population Burden . You should write at least 150 words according to the outline given below in Chinese.1.人口老龄化问题正困扰着中国。2.人口老龄化带来的问题。3.应采取怎样的措施，谈谈自己的观点。题目分析：在世界人口走向老龄化和发达国家人口老龄化发展的同时，中国人口老龄化也在加剧。人口老龄化的产生，正是社会进步、经济发展的结果。参考范文：范文的高级词汇较多，童鞋们根据自身实际情况来选择掌握哈Population BurdenMany countries will experience aging populations in the next century because of declining birth and mortality rates. China will soon join their ranks.As for the issue of aging, its situation has been growing increasingly severe in spite of the fact most people are still ignorant of the problems it brings about. Firstly, with families becoming smaller and living pace escalating, it is even graver for families to care for aged members adequately. Secondly, aging causes a relative decline in working force in that fewer people have to support the increasing aged people. Consequently, the productivity of the whole society is affected to some extent. Thirdly and most importantly, the aging of population in China resulted from the successful implementation of family planning has not been synchronized with national economic progress.The rapidity of the populations aging has made it more urgent for the adoption of countermeasures. No doubt they key is to build a solid economic foundation. Meanwhile, importance shall be attached to overall social progress by changing the backward situation in social security, welfare and service. Whats more, family care and community services shall also be encouraged.好词佳句总结：aging population 老年人口birth rate 出生率mortality rate 死亡率ignorant of 不知道 不懂graver 更严重的e.g.This heavy rain could have grave consequences.这场大雨会造成严重后果。adequately 充分地productivity 生产力implementation 执行family planning 计划生育rapidity 速度 在这用rapidity比speed 好countermeasure 对策solid economic foundation 稳固的经济基础Population old age人口老龄化Population burden人口负担Old age social security老年社会保障Sustainable development可持续发展大学英语六级作文实例讲析(3)How to improve students mental health1、 大学生的心理健康十分重要2、 因此，学校可以.3、 我们自己应当.题目分析：学生的心理健康是近年来被热议的话题之一，属于经典的问题解决型，故不外乎采用举例子，作比较，分类别，列数字，打比方等方式讨论。参考范文：Students mental health has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life. Indeed, it is widely accepted that it has gained growing popularity among persons in all walks of life. There is a general discussion today about the issue of disorder in brains.Obviously, it is necessary that effective actions should be taken to prevent problems. Authorities in universities play a critical role in the situation. To begin with, schools, such as colleges or universities, can provide chances for the young men to ease their attention. Whats more, some are physically strong, but psychological problems are able to bring potential threats. Teaches may have a chance to find them in advance. Besides, specialists in this field are to be required to make full preparation for cases in time. Facing the crisis, experts can deal with it in a professional way, which means they have more or better opportunities to save us than others. (学校)From the factors mentioned above, we may safely draw the conclusion that we can free ourselves from mental illness by taking certain precautions. For example, if you have pains or puzzles in mind, finding a friend to express these is a good way to release pressure. Certainly, there is little doubt that further attention will be paid to the issue.(我们)Chance 总结：potential threats 潜在威胁ease 减轻，舒缓psychological problems 心理问题precaution 预防措施release pressure 释放压力play an important/critical role in sthit is widely accepted that To begin with, Whats more, Besides,From the factors mentioned above draw the conclusion that等等均为经典模板句式!大学英语六级写作常见错误分析大家在英语六级写作时难免会犯一些错误，下面看小编为大家整理的大学英语六级写作常见错误分析，供各位参考。语法错误(一)句子结构错误1. 主从句叠置1) There are more and more students who like to use the computer. / More and more students like to use the computer.2) There are still many problems that should be noted and resolved. / Many problems still should be noted and resolved.2. 简单句叠置I like chatting on line very much, so I go to the net bar almost every weekend. / I like chatting on line very much. I go to the net bar almost every weekend.3. 从句叠置It is known to all that computers play an important role in many fields of our life. / As is known to all, computers play an important role in many fields of our life.4. 句子成分缺失If we work hard, we will surely be successful. /Working hard, we will surely be successful.5. 语序错误1) Why do college students spend more and more time on the computer?1) I often wonder where they have got their money.(二)动词形式错误1.时态错误Many people think that the Internet will be more useful in the future.2.语态形式错误1) I have been excited several days at the news that you will come here.2) Most of the students are satisfied with the service in the dining hall.3.单复数形式错误1) Wise men seek opportunities rather than wait for them. / A wise man seeks opportunities rather than wait for them.2) Some people are afraid that computers may control men in the future.4.非谓语动词形式错误1) Let me say “hello” to you on behalf of everyone.2) Doing exercise in the morning is good for ones health.3) Having studied in our school for 3 years, I find that the canteen service has changed a lot.(三)代词错误1) We can use computers in doing everything we like.2) A college student should be able to do his washing on his own.(四)冠词错误1) A/The horse is a useful animal.2) The exam will be held in December, 2004.(五)词性错误1) I wish you can consider my suggestions.2) If a person wants to succeed, he must learn to endure sufferings and setbacks. 用词错误1) Students must know how to operate a computer. / Students must know how to work on a computer.2) People can be exposed to many new things on the Internet. / People can learn many new things on the Internet.3) The purpose of this letter is to express some opinions on the service in the dining hall. / The purpose of this letter is to make some complaints about the service in the dining hall.表达习惯错误1) What generated so large a change? / Why is there so large a change?2) Now 6000 yuan is enough for you to buy a P4 computer. / Now you can buy a P4 computer for 6000 yuan.3) In a room often live 6-8 students.4) I think there are three reasons for this great change.5) The prices of the food are too high. / The food is too expensive.6) The reason for this is that some people want to earn plenty of money without working hard. / This is because some people want to earn plenty of money without working hard.标点符号及大小写错误1) However, every coin has two sides. I think the surroundings in our canteen are the best among all universities.2) The man was racing down the street because he was late for the class.3) At last I want to let you know that I love our university very much.4) My favorite sports are swimming, jogging, mountaineering and playing table tennis.5) The best English film in my eyes is Forrest Gump.英语六级作文如何写好主题句？主题句(topic sentence)是表达段落主题的句子。它用以概括段落大意，要求全段其他文字都围绕它展开。请看下例：My mother has passed along to me certain rules for getting along with others. Dont argue with parents; they will think you dont love them. Dont argue with children; they will think themselves victimized. Dont argue with spouses; they will think you are a tiresome mate. Dont argue with strangers; they will think you are not friendly. My mothers rules, in fact, can be summed up in two words: Dont argue.主题句中提出的certain rules指的是什么?展开句中通过四个Dont argue - 逐一加以交代。从结构来看，这是一个比较典型的段落，它包括了主题句，推展句和结论句(即本段中的末句)。1.1 主题句的位置主题句通常放在段落的开端，其特点是开门见山地摆出问题，然后加以详细说明。其作用是使文章的结构更清晰，更具说服力，便于读者迅速地把握主题和想象全段的内容。主题句可以放在段中起到承上启下的作用，或放在段尾起概括全段的作用。但初学者比较难于掌握，因而在六级考试中，考生应尽量采用将主题句放在段落开头的写作手法。例1: Our life today depends very much on energy. In towns and in villages, on farms and in factories, machines have made life easier than it used to be. The machines use energy, and energy is needed for heating, lighting, communications, carrying goods - everything. Factories and industrial plants use a great deal of energy to make the things that we use and buy and sell.，这段文字所讲的主要是能源问题。第一句就概括性地提出“我们目前的生活很大程度上依赖于能源”。而随后出现的三句都是具体事例，对第一句进行说明和论述。我们可以断定第一句为该段的主题句(斜体部分)。例2: (主题句)No one can avoid being influenced by advertisements. (推展句1)Much as we may pride ourselves on our good taste, we are no longer free to choose the things we want, for advertising exerts a subtle influence on us. (推展句2)In their efforts to persuade us to buy this or that product, advertisers have made a close study of human nature and have classified all our little weakness.以上这段由三句话组成。第一句是主题句，直截了当指出无人不受广告影响这个主题，接着列举两个推展句对其补充和支持，指出我们已无法自由选择所需的商品，理由是广告商已仔细研究了我们的心理，并完全掌握了我们的弱点。句子衔接自然，步步紧扣主题。1.2 如何写好主题句中的关键词段落的主题句对主题的限定主要是通过句中的关键词来表现的。关键词要尽量写得具体些。对“具体”的要求包括两个方面：一是要具体到能控制和限制段落的发展;二是要具体到能说明段落发展的方法。准确地把握关键词是清楚地表达段落主题、写好段落主题句的重要前提之一。在上面的例1，例2中，主题句的关键词分别为：depends very much on energy; no one can avoid being influenced. 我们再看下列例句：原句1: He can fix a bicycle himself.斜体部分应为主题句中的关键词。但它只是限制了段落发展的部分内容，并没有告诉读者该用哪种方法展开，是用因果关系法还是用分类法?修正：He can fix a bicycle himself in several simple