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四级作文评分标准1. 作文满分为15分。 2. 阅卷标准共分为五等: 2分、5分、8分、11分及14分。-各等级标准样卷 3. 阅卷人员根据阅卷标准,对照样卷评分,若认为与某一分数(如8分)相似,即定为该分数(即8分);若认为稍优或稍劣于该分数,则可加一分(即9分)或减一分(即7分)。但不得加或减半分。 4. 评分标准: 2分-条理不清,思路紊乱,语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误,且多数为严重错误。5分-基本切题。表达思想不清楚,连贯性差、有较多的严重语言错误。8分-基本切题。有些地方表述思想不够清楚,文字勉强连贯;语言错误相当多,其中有一些是严重错误。11分-切题。表达思想清楚,连贯性较好,但有少量语言错误。14分-切题。表达思想清楚,文字通顺、连贯。基本上无语言错误,仅有个别小错。 注:白卷,作文与题目毫不相关,或只有几个孤立的词而无法表达思想,则给0分。5. 字数不足或段落不合要求应酌情扣分: 如题目中给出主题句,起始句,均不得计入所写字数。累计字数CET490-9980-8970-7960-6950-5949个以下扣分123579对规定写三段的作文,只写一段者得04分;只写两段者得09分。样卷1 得分2分本文是一篇带有中文提示的传统四级英语考试作文。下面对五份样卷作详细的分析、说明。评语:条理不清,不成篇章,除个别句子外,内容基本无法理解,语言错误严重且错误数量多。 I like sports. It take me more porfit. The first one is healthy as well know. The second is relaxion. After learning in school, I like make some movement just as running. It can relax myself. Although there has so many other positive aspects of sports, there also has some negative aspects of sports. It make someone damagours, because you would hurt in sport, just like football. It is most likely to happen but it couldnt provent people frome sports.I think that sports take more profit than damagous to me. I like sports.样卷2 得分5分评语:基本切题,连贯性差,意思表达不清,有不少严重的词汇和语法错误 Sports can provide us good healthy. Especially when we are in childhood, sports can be benefit of our growing. It can strengthen our body, brighten our brain, widen our all kinds of interests and make you encouragable. As a student studying in colledge, sports is essential and important for our study. Positive sports can make you succeed in all kinds of things. But it doesnt follow that sports has not any shortcoming. If occupying all of you spare time, sports will influent other habbies of yours. If you do that for a long time, you well become a hollow-brain man. It is terrible for your forture. I like sports very much. Because suitable sports really can help my study. And it make me confident. I can solute any question depending on my energy and strong body.样卷3 得分8分评语: 基本切题,有些地方表达不够清楚,且欠连贯。语言错误相当多,其中有些是严重错误。 There are a lot of positive aspects of sports. People takes part in sports and games from time to time is likely to have a good body. While having sports, people can strengthen his muscles, fasten his speed of response, and increase his ability of resisting diseases. Sports are also helpful to train peoples charactors and determination. But you can never neglect the negative aspects of sports. People may hurt himself or others when he join sports, espectially those are voilent. On the end, having sports has more advantages than disadvantages. I enjoy playing baskeball and this has brought me much excitement. And I have make some good friends when we played basketball together. We always stick to the rules so that I never hurt others or be hurted.样卷4 得分11分评语: 切题,条理清晰,层次分明,文字连贯。有少量语言错误。 Sports have a lot of good effects. It can make you stronger and more intelligent. Proper sports can also make you feel energetic for work. For example, if you play football, your muscles exercise and become stronger and stronger. If you play chess, your brain moves quickly. Thats good for the development of you intelligence. On the other hand, sports have a few ill effects. It may make you feel tired if you exercise too much. And old people may be hurt by improper sports. Furthermore, sports may even lead to sudden death. I prefer to play football, Im a member of college team. When I play, I feel excited, and after it, I feel relaxed. Thats to say: Its good for my health.样卷5 得分14分评语: 文字通顺,层次分明,连贯性好,表达清楚,仅有个别小错。 Sports benifit us in many respects. When taking part in sports, we get the chance to train almost all parts of our bodies. There is no doubt that proper sports activities keep our physical fitness. Furthermore, sports can enrich our life and maintain our psychological health. Through participation, everyone can learn that on the playground he not only struggles for himself but also fights for his team. Sports teach us about consideration, cooperation and optimism to failure.But sports can do some harm to those people who can not plan their activities properly. Too hard training may hurt their bodies, exhause their vigor, and even cause them to be sick. In generally, I love sports
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