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模板一引语评论作文 （2011年12月新题型） 第一段：引语引用+简单评论（文章的第1、2句；引用题目中给予的原话，并对这句话的表层意思进行评论）文章第一句话：1）第一句的第一种写法：直接引用某位名人曾经说过的话 .sb. once said.Give me six hours to chop down a tree, and I will spend the first four sharpening the axe. Abraham Lincoln once said. 2011-12月CET62）第一句的第二种写法：直接引用某句平常人说的话 . You must have heard these words hundreds of times from sb. Quitting smoking is the easiest thing in the world, Ive done it hundreds of times.”You must have heard these words hundreds of times probably from your father, friends or even yourself. 2011-12月CET4文章第二句话：对引语的表面含义进行评论(用自己的语言，解释和补充题目的引语)自由发挥，见真功夫Although four-hour seems to be quite a long time, it can help people chop down the tree more smoothly and less laborious in the rest two hours. 2011-12月CET6Quitting smoking is so easy as long as keep away from cigarettes. However, many people can hardly resist the temptation of smoking and then give up their attempt to quit smoking. It is obvious that without strong will and determination no one can quit smoking with ease. 2011-12月CET4第二段：意义阐述段（文章的第3,4,5,6四句话，都写在第二段；这是字数最多，内容最丰满的一段，称为“猪肚”）文章第三句话：（点明引语的深层含义，从表面到深入，从局限到扩展;提炼出引语包含的中心词、主题词A）The saying/sentence aims at informing us of the significance of A in our pursuit of success.The saying aims at informing us of the significance of adequate preparation in our pursuit of success. 2011-12月CET6The sentence aims at informing us of the significance of a strong will in our pursuit of success. 2011-12月CET4文章第四句话：( 上句提出了引语的深层含义，那么从第四句开始就要说明这个事物的重要There is no denying that we cant emphasize the importance of sth. too much.full preparation. 2011-12月CET6a strong will. 2011-12月CET4文章第五句话：( 论述这个事物的重要。建议用“短句+长句”（或者“主题句”+扩展句）的方式展开！)Sth. can help people doFull preparation can help people reduce the risk of failure, as we can adopt counter plans (预备方案) when something unexpected occurs . 2011-12月CET6A strong will can help people achieve their goals more smoothly, as it can inspire people to approach challenges and overcome difficulties with bravery. 2011-12月CET4文章第六句话：( 上采用论据进一步论述。论据可以是身边的事情，可以是国家社会热点，也可以是名人名事，运用固定的写作公式和考前背诵相关例子，这个很好写)模板句：Quite a few examples can be given to prove the importance of A, and I can think of no better illustration than the following one:举例公式：How could sb. +插入语（解释sb.）+ do sth. + 状语+ without sth .How could Beethoven，a great German music composer who became deaf at his forties，compose so many enduring symphonies and win respect and affection from the whole world without a strong will. 2011-12月CET4How could you get a job offer without adequate preparation before an interview? 2011-12月CET6第三段：结合实际（文章的第7,8,9句；，针对第二段议论出某事物的价值和重要性后，这一段可以写一下在日常实践生活中，我们应该怎么做，理论联系实际，理论指导实际）文章第七句话：( 再次强调某事物的重要性) We should always bear in mind that 举例A will exert a far-reaching influence on our lifeno one can achieve their goals easily without preparation. 2011-12月CET6in such a competitive world of today, a man without a strong will can hardly survive let alone succeed.2011-12月CET4文章第八句话：( 我们具体应该怎么做？)Hence, what we must do is to Hence, what we must do is to carry out a full investigation, set up a proper goal and draw up a detailed plan before we take actions. 2011-12月CET6Hence, when confronted with difficulties and setbacks, we need to grit our teeth and stick to the belief/faith that where there is a will, there is a way.2011-12月CET4文章第九句话：( 再次重申某事物的意义价值重要性，不过建议使用名人名言 名人有没有说过某个名言并不重要，重要的是，1) 自己编的名言是可以的，但是不要写错了！ 2）名人的名字不要拼错，更不要写拼音！) .sb. once said.Preparation breeds success. Benjamin Franklin once said. 2011-12月CET6“A strong will can conquer all things.” Churchill once said. 2011-12月CET4Success consists in A.Nothing can be more important than A in our pursuit of success.四六级写作引语评论作文人生哲理类，积极价值观话题论据论证素材1. 合作（团结）的重要性The importance of unity/cooperationSignificance：主题句：Cooperation can help people achieve their goals more smoothly.拓展句：If everyone in a group can cooperate with each other and play their own strength, those seemingly unachievable tasks for one single person can be successfully accomplished/perfectly done through combined efforts.举例： After the financial crisis swept the whole world in 2008, how could the world economy recover at such a high speed without cooperation among countries all around the world?How:We should Always bear in mind that in such a competitive world of today,No individuals or organizations can achieve success without cooperation.Hence, we need to foster a sense of cooperation by attending various group activities.“Coming together is a beginning. Keeping together is a progress. Working together is a success.” Henry Ford once said.2 . 坚持和毅力的重要性Significance：主题句：Persistence can help us carve out a way to success.拓展句：Although the way to success is bumpy (崎岖的) and full of inevitable setbacks, it is persistence that lead us to the destination we are eager to reach .举例：How could Thomas Edison，one of the greatest inventors throughout the history of mankind who experienced numerous unsuccessful attempts , invent the first electric lamp without persistence?How :We should always bear in mind that persistence plays an indispensable role in our pursuit of success.When coming across setbacks and hardships, we need to grit our teeth and stick to the faith that our efforts and persistence will be rewarding. “Great works are performed not by strength, but by perseverance.” Samuel Johnson once said.3. 乐观和悲观心态(人生哲理)Significance:主题句Optimism can help people achieve their objectives more smoothly.拓展句As it can inspire people to approach challenges and overcome difficulties with confidence and courage.举例：How could Beethoven，a great German music composer who became deaf at his forties，compose so many enduring (经久不衰的) symphonies (works) and win respect and affection from the whole world without optimism?How:We should always bear in mind that optimism will exert a far-reaching influence on our life.Hence，what we must do is to cultivate an optimistic mindset and try our utmost to influence those who are pessimistic.“An optimist sees the rose; a pessimist the thorn.” A philosopher once said.4. 谦虚的好处Significance:主题句Modesty can inspire people to achieve greater success.拓展句Those who are modest will never be content with their current achievements, instead, they will work constantly to achieve a higher target.举例：How could Benjamin Franklin, who was once a printer of humble origins, attain tremendous achievements in so many fields such as science, politics, literature and navigation if he was simply content with small achievements?How:We should always bear in mind that modesty will prompt us to go farther.Accordingly, at no time should we be satisfied with our small accomplishments, instead, we need to keep an open mind to accept new things, absorb new information, acquire new knowledge and seize new opportunities.“Success consists in industry and modesty.” A philosopher once said.5.梦想目标和理想的意义Significance:主题句Our dreams/goals/ideals /objectives will keep up from giving up easily especially when we are in great trouble.拓展句They will lead us to the destination we are eager to reach, bring out the best in us and stimulate us to remain firm in our faith.举例： How could Helen Keller, a disabled woman who was born blind and deaf, finally be a world-renowned writer who wrote If I Had Three Days to See without an aim to overcome her physical limitation？How：We should always bear in mind that objectives are of great importance in our pursuit of success.Hence, we must set up proper goals before we start to do anything and stick to it whatever difficulties we meet.“One of the most dangerous forms of human error is forgetting what one is trying to achieve.” Paul Nitze once said.6. 创新精神creative spiritSignificance:主题句Creative spirit can promote the advancement of both individuals and society as a whole.拓展句only those who are innovative can make continuous progress and maintain a competitive edge.举例：How could Steve Jobs, a genius who changed the way of modern communication, recreation and even our life, launch so many powerful electronic products constantly without creative spirit?How:We should always bear in mind that creative spirit is of great significance to us all.Hence, we need to develop a habit of discovering new things，using new methods and applying new thoughts in our work, study or simply everyday life.“Innovation is the spirit of human beings progress.” A philosopher once said.7. 互助/爱心的重要性Significance:主题句Offering help will benefit others as well as ourselves.拓展句It could not only be able to bring convenience and benefitto others, but realize our own values and obtain happiness and satisfaction.举例：How could Wenchuan, after being severely damaged by the earthquake in 2008, rebuild their homeland at such a high speed without help from people all around the world?How:We should always bear in mind that helping others is a essential virtue that every Chinese citizen should have.Hence, we should not hesitate to help those who are in need.Present rose to others with remaining fragrance at hand.” Bacon once said.考前练习：8. 自信的重要性 confidence9. 行动的重要性10.沟通的重要性名人举例论证名人名言警句引用论证社会重大时事论证一、名人举例论证小虹语录：像坚强、毅力、乐观、目标、梦想等这样的人生哲理、个人素质是很多历史名人伟人大家所共有的，所以，为了减轻大家的背诵负担，特别精简了同学们最熟悉，也是阅卷者最亲切的一些名人史实作为举例。不在多，在精，有句话说的好“less is more”少就是多！贝多芬 Beethoven1770-1827,德国作曲家（keywords：乐观/毅力/意志/梦想）How could Beethoven，a great German music composer who became deaf at his forties, compose so many enduring symphonies and win respect and affection from the whole world without perseverance/ a strong will / optimism?德国伟大的作曲家，在他四十多岁的时候失聪，如果没有毅力/强大的意志力/乐观精神，他怎么可能创作出如此经久不衰的经典的交响乐，并赢得全世界的尊重和爱戴？爱迪生（Thomas Edison）18471931，美国发明家、企业家 （keywords：坚持 毅力 克服困难）How could Thomas Edison，one of the greatest inventors throughout the history of mankind who experienced numerous unsuccessful attempts, invent the first electric lamp without persistence？人类历史上最伟大的发明家托马斯.爱迪生，如果没有经历数千次失败的尝试后的坚持，怎么可能成功地制造出第一盏电灯？海伦凯勒 （Helen Keller）1880 -1968, 盲聋女作家、教育家、慈善家、社会活动家（keywords：坚强 意志梦想 乐观）How could Helen Keller, a disabled woman who was born blind and deaf, finally be a world-renowned writer who wrote If I Had Three Days to See without a strong will/ an optimistic mindset/ an objective to overcome her physical limitation?海伦凯勒，一个生来就盲聋的残疾女人，如果没有坚强的意志/乐观的心态/ 目标去克服她的身体极限，怎么可能成为创作出加入给我三天的光明这样的作品的世界知名的作家？牛顿(Newton)1642-1727, 英国数学家, 科学家, 哲学家 （keywords：谦虚/不自满，不骄傲）How could Newton, one of the most influential scientists throughout the history of mankind，discover the Law of Momentum Conservation if he was content with his achievements of finding Three Laws of Motion and made no further efforts in scientific research?人类历史上最有影响的科学家之一牛顿，如果他只满足于发现了力学三定律而不再努力，他怎么可能会进而发现动能守恒定律 ？本杰明.富兰克林 (Benjamin Franklin)1706-1790 资本主义精神最完美的代表，十八世纪美国最伟大的科学家和发明家，著名的政治家、外交家、哲学家、文学家和航海家以及美国独立战争的伟大领袖（keywords：谦虚/ 不自满，不骄傲）How could Benjamin Franklin, an once printer of humble origins, attain tremendous achievements in so many fields such as science, politics, literature and navigation if he was simply content with small achievements?出身卑微的印刷工本杰明.富兰克林，如果只满足取得的小小的成就，怎么可能在诸如科学、政治、文学和航海等这么多领域取得巨大的成就？史蒂夫.乔布斯 (Steve Jobs)1955-2011，发明家、企业家、美国苹果公司联合创办人（keywords：创新精神）How could Steve Jobs, a genius who changed the way of modern communication, recreation and even our life, launch so many powerful electronic products constantly without a creative spirit？改变了现代通讯方式、娱乐方式甚至是我们的生活方式的天才史蒂夫.乔布斯，如果没有创新精神，怎么可能持续发布功能强大的产品？姚明 （Yao Ming）1980- ，中国长城 （keywords：自信）How could Yao Ming，an once ordinary and unknown basketball player in Asia, achieve unprecedented success in NBA Without confidence?如果没有自信，曾经平庸无名的亚洲篮球运动员姚明，怎么可能在NBA取得前无古人的巨大成就？特蕾莎修女 （Mother Teresa of Calcutt）1910-1997，慈善工作者，主要替穷人服务，1979年获诺贝尔和平奖（keywords：爱心）How could Mother Teresa ，who was once the president of a high school, quit her enviable job and dedicate her whole life to serving the poor without sincere love and philanthropy ?如果没有真挚的爱心和善心，特蕾莎修女，这个曾经的中学校长怎么可能会辞去令人羡慕的工作而将毕生奉献在为穷人服务上呢？常用名人名录：林肯 Abraham Lincoln 丘吉尔 Winston Churchill 比尔.盖茨Bill Gates海明威 Hemingway 亚里士多德 Aristotle 拿破仑Napoleon爱因斯坦Albert Einstein 居里夫人Madame Curie 华盛顿 Washington培根 Bacon 莎士比亚 Shakespeare 马克吐温 Mark Twain毕加索 Picasso二、社会重大时事论证小虹语录：有些论证，好像很难从名人身上下手，这个时候可以关注一下社会重大时事！南丁格尔 （Nightingale）1820-1910，被誉为“提灯女神”，近代护理事业的创始人（keywords：帮助 爱心）How could Nightingale , who was born with blue blood, give up her favorable living conditions and dedicate her whole life to helping those who are injured and in need without sincere love and philanthropy ?如果没有真挚的爱心和善心，南丁格尔，出身名门的她怎么可能放弃优越的生活条件而将毕生奉献在帮助那些受伤的和有需要的人上呢？The successful hosting of the 29th Beijing 2008 Olympic Games should be attributed to cooperation among people from all walks of life.第29届北京奥运会的成功举办，应该归功于各行各业人们的通力合作。For example, after the financial crisis swept the whole world in 2008, how can the economy recover at such a high speed without thecooperation among countries ?2008年金融危机席卷全球后，如果没有各个国家之间的通力合作，经济怎么可能以如此快的速度恢复？Another case in point is iPhone, researched and designed in America while assembled respectively in global factories around the world.Without orderly and efficient cooperation among different departments, how can iPhone be featured by perfect functions and trust-worthy quality. (88 words)另外一个例子是iPhone手机，她在美国研发设计，而在全世界的工厂里分别组装，如果没有不同部门之间有序而又高效的合作，iPhone 怎么可能拥有完美的功能和令人信赖的品质的特点？How could Wenchuan, after being severely damaged by the earthquake in 2008, rebuild their homeland at such a high speed without love from people at home and abroad?如果没有国内外人们的爱心和帮助，受到2008年地震损害最大的汶川，怎么可能以如此快的速度重建家园？三、名人名言警句引用论证11类名人名言警句，常常放在段末句末，起到吸引阅卷者眼球，脱离一般写作俗套的功效，建议大家在考前多背一些常用的谚语俗语名人警句等！IDEAL 理想/目标1. Dont part with your illusions. When they are gone you may still exist, but you have ceased to live. (Mark Twain , American writer) 不要放弃你的幻想.当幻想没有了以后,你还可以生存,但是你虽生犹死. (美国作家 马克吐温)2. Ideal is the beacon. Without ideal, there is no secure direction; without direction, there is no life. ( Leo Tolstoy , Russian writer) 理想是指路明灯.没有理想,就没有坚定的方向;没有方向,就没有生活. (俄国作家 托尔斯泰. L .)3. If winter comes, can spring be far behind? (P. B. Shelley, British poet)冬天来了, 春天还会远吗? ( 英国诗人 雪莱. P. B.)4. Living without an aim is like sailing without a compass. Alexander Dumas (Davy de La Pailleterie, French Writer) 生活没有目标就像航海没有指南针. (法国作家 大仲马. A.)5. The ideals which have lighted my way and time after time have given me new courage to face life cheerfully. (Albert Einstein, American scientist)有些理想曾为我们引过道路,并不断给我新的勇气以欣然面对人生.(美国科学家 爱因斯坦.A.)6. The important thing in life is to have a great aim, and the determination to attain it. (Johan Wolfgang von Goethe, German Poet and dramatist) 人生重要的事情就是确定一个伟大的目标,并决心实现它.(德国诗人,戏剧家 歌德.J.M.)7. The only limit to our realization of tomorrow will be our doubts of today. (Franklin Roosevelt , American president) 实现明天理想的唯一障碍是今天的疑虑. (美国总统 罗斯福. F .)STRUGGLE 奋斗篇1. Genius only means hard-working all ones life. (Mendeleyev, Russian Chemist) 天才只意味着终身不懈的努力. (俄国化学家 门捷列耶夫)2. I have nothing to offer but blood, toil tears and sweat. (Winston Churchill, British Politician) 我所能奉献的没有其它,只有热血,辛劳,眼泪与汗水.(英国政治家 丘吉尔 . W.)3. Patience is bitter, but its fruit is sweet. (Jean Jacques Rousseau , French thinker) 忍耐是痛苦的,但它的果实是甜蜜的. (法国思想家 卢梭. J. J.)4. Progress is the activity of today and the assurance of tomorrow. (Emerson, American thinker ) 进步是今天的活动,明天的保证. (美国思想家爱默生)5. There is no royal road to science, and only those who do not dread the fatiguing climb of gaining its numinous summits. (Karl Marx, German revolutionary) 在科学上没有平坦的大道, 只有不畏劳苦沿着其崎岖之路攀登的人, 才有希望达到它光辉的 顶点.( 德国革命家 马克思. K .)6. The man who has made up his mind to win will never say impossible .(Bonaparte Napoleon, French emperor) 凡是决心取得胜利的人是从来不说不可能的.( 法国皇帝 拿破仑. B.)7. Where there is a will, there is a way. (Thomas Edison, American inventor) 有志者,事竟成. (美国发明家 爱迪生. T.)SUCCESS 成功篇1. Achievement provides the only real pleasure in life. (Thomas Edison,American inventor) 有所成就是人生唯一的真正乐趣.( 美国发明家 爱迪生. T. )2. If you wish to succeed, you should use persistence as your good friend, experience as your reference, and prudence as your brother and hope as your sentry. (Thomas Edison, American inventor) 如果你希望成功,当以恒心为良友,以经验为参谋,以谨慎为兄弟,以希望为哨兵. (美国 发明家 爱迪生. T.)3. Only those who have the patience to do simple things perfectly ever acquire the skill to do difficult things easily. (Friedrich Schiller, German Dramatist and poet). 只有有耐心圆满完成简单工作的人, 才能够轻而易举地完成困难的事. (德国剧作家, 诗人 席 勒. F.)4. Success covers a multitude of blunders. (George Bernard Shaw , British Dramatist) 成功由大量的错误铸就.( 英国剧作家 肖伯纳. G.)5. The people who get on in this world are the people who get up and look for circumstances they want, and if they cannot find them .they make them.(George Bernard Shaw, British dramatist) 在这个世界上,取得成功的人是那些努力寻找他们想要机会的人,如果找不到机会,他们就 去创造机会.( 英国剧作家 肖伯纳. G.)6. You have to believe in yourself. Thats the secret of success. (CharlesChaplin, American actor) 人必须相信自己,这是成功的秘诀. (美国演员 卓别林.C.)TIME 时间篇1. Do you love life? Then do not squander time; for thats the stuff5 life is made of. (Benjamin Franklin, American president) 你热爱生命吗?那么,别浪费时间,因为生命是由时间组成的.(美国总统 富兰克林. B.)2. Each moment in history is a fleeting time, precious and unique. (Richard Nixon, American president) 历史巨轮飞转,分分秒秒的时间都十分宝贵,也独具意义.(美国总统 尼克松. R.)3. I am a slow walker, but I never walk backwards. (Abraham Lincoln ,American president) 我走得很慢,但是我从来不会后退. (美国总统 林肯. A.)4. Never leave that until tomorrow, which you can do today. (Benjamin Franklin , American president ) 今天的事不要拖到明天. (美国总统 富兰克林.B. )5. Ordinary people merely think how they shall spend their time; a man of talent tries to use it. (Arthur Schopenhauer , German philosopher ) 普通人只想到如何度过时间,有才能的人设法利用时间.(德国哲学家 叔本华. A. )6. The golden age is before us, not behind us. (Mark Twain , Ameri