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申请信内容应包括自我介绍申请什么 申请理由 再次表示希望取得面试机会 表示感谢打分标准1看学生是否涵盖全部要点2语言表达 应考虑词汇语法结构和句子结构的丰富性 语言的准确性高级词汇在本语境中是否恰当 句与句之间的逻辑性连贯性 3书信格式占2分dear 占1分yoursLihua占1分4文章最后一句一定要写希望你能考虑我的申请期待早日回复类似这样的内容没写要扣分 1 DearSir Madam IamLiHua aseniorschoolstudentfromChina I mwritingtoapplyforajobasavolunteerteacherinSriLanka Withabundantpreviousexperience I msureI llbefitforthejob Moreimportantly IhaveagoodcommandofEnglishandgetonwellwithkids whichwillenablemetobeaqualifiedteacher Iwouldbegratefulifofferedthechance Lookingforwardtoyourearliestreply Yours LiHua 2 续写写作步骤1 理清文章思路 与写概要同一个道理 概括每段keypoints 2 做出合理预测3 增加文章可读性 3 续写写作步骤1 理清文章思路 与写概要同一个道理 概括每段keypoints Eddie themostpopularseventh grader hadgivenLorenahisjacketandaskedhertokeepaneyeas Lorenawasquitehappytobeofhelp Duringherlastclass forfearofgettingbloodonhisjacket Lorenafoldeditandplaceditonachair Shelostthejacketpara 1MomdroveLorenatoFashionFairandleft askinghernottowastemoney para 2LorenawasabouttoleavewhenshesawEddieinhisNikejacket 4 读后续写1一般打11 1516 20这两个档2续写第一段写买礼物有关的情节 礼物是agiftforherMom sbirthday和jacket 不管有没有成功买到礼物只要合理都给分但要给妈妈买礼物这件事情一定要提及如果没有提到要扣分3如果学生写的情节是完全不买agiftforherMom sbirthday和ajacket自己喜欢买啥买啥与原文情节不符要适当扣分4续写第二段应是Eddie解释原因但重点得落在Lorena身上写她的情感反应心理活动等如果都是对话分数打不高的5关键词没有达到5个要扣分 5 第一段写买礼物有关的情节Ifitdidn tstoprainingitwouldruinherday LorenawasdesperatetogotherebecauseshehadtoreplaceaNikejacket EarlierthatWednesdayafternoon Eddie themostpopularseventh grader hadgivenLorenahisjacketandaskedhertokeepaneyeashewouldplaybasketballinahurry Lorenawasquitehappytobeofhelp ForfearofgettingbloodonEddie sjacket Lorenafoldeditandplaceditonachair Thejacket shescreamed Sheshotfromherseatandranuptothedriver Shespentmostofherbreakandlunchperiodintherestroom brushingherhairandworrying OnFridayshestayedhometoavoidEddie Actually shewantedtobuyaNikejacketwithherlifesavingsatFashionFair 着急焦虑 6 MomdroveLorenatoFashionFairandleft askinghernottowastemoney WavinggoodbyetoMom LorenaranforaNikestore Enteringthedoor shehadaquickglancearound Herheartsankwhenshefoundnothingfamiliarinsight Still shecombedeverycornerofthestoreforthejacketshewantedbutinvain Finally sheturnedtotheassistantforhelp KnowingwhatLorenawanted theassistantpromisedtoplaceanorderforher sayingitshouldbereadytwodayslater Overjoyed Lorenapaidtheadvance 7 MomdroveLorenatoFashionFairandleft askinghernottowastemoney WavinggoodbyetoMom LorenaranforaNikestore Enteringthedoor shehadaquickglancearound Herheartsankwhenshefoundnothingfamiliarinsight Still shecombedeverycornerofthestoreforthejacketshewantedbutinvain Finally sheturnedtotheassistantforhelp KnowingwhatLorenawanted theassistantpromisedtoplaceanorderforher sayingitshouldbereadytwodayslater Overjoyed Lorenapaidtheadvance 定金 8 MomdroveLorenatoFashionFairandleft askinghernottowastemoney ImustfindthesamejacketandgiveitbacktoEddiebecauseIhavetoliveuptohisfaithinme thoughtLorena Shesearchedthewholefairforthejacketbutinvain Therewasnojacketexactlythesame Shewastrappedinareallystrugglingsituationandwasatalosshowtodealwiththeproblem Finally shedecidedtotryherluckinanothermarket 9 MomdroveLorenatoFashionFairandleft askinghernottowastemoney ImustfindthesamejacketandgiveitbacktoEddiebecauseIhavetoliveuptohisfaithinme thoughtLorena Shesearchedthewholefairforthejacketbutinvain Therewasnojacketexactlythesame Shewastrappedinareallystrugglingsituationandwasatalosshowtodealwiththeproblem Finally shedecidedtotryherluckinanothermarket 10 MomdroveLorenatoFashionFairandleft askinghernottowastemoney Promisingshewouldn t LorenaranhurriedlyintoaNikestore Toherdelight shesoonfoundthesamejacketthatEddiewore Thankgoodness NowIdon tneedtoavoidEddieanylonger thoughtLorena picturinghowEddiewouldreactwhenseeingthebrand newjacket Afterpayingthemoney Lorenaleftforagiftstore Shefeltrelievedtofindshestillhadenoughmoneyforadelicatesilkscarf Withthescarfgiftwrapped shepushedthedooropen 11 MomdroveLorenatoFashionFairandleft askinghernottowastemoney Promisingshewouldn t LorenaranhurriedlyintoaNikestore Toherdelight shesoonfoundthesamejacketthatEddiewore Thankgoodness NowIdon tneedtoavoidEddieanylonger thoughtLorena picturinghowEddiewouldreactwhenseeingthebrand newjacket Afterpayingthemoney Lorenaleftforagiftstore Shefeltrelievedtofindshestillhadenoughmoneyforadelicatesilkscarf Withthescarfgiftwrapped shepushedthedooropen 12 第二段应是Eddie解释原因但重点得落在Lorena身上写她的情感反应心理活动等 13 LorenawasabouttoleavewhenshesawEddieinhisNikejacket Instantlyhereyesmethis Eddiecasthiseyesaway ThenLorenafoundbesidehimstandingabeautifulgirl talkingmerrilywithherhandinhis Mindblank Lorenamadeherwaytothebusstop forgettingallaboutthegiftforhermomandtoaskEddiewhythejacketfounditswaybackonhimnow Eventuallywhenherconsciousnesscameback shewonderedwhatsheshoulddonext 14 LorenawasabouttoleavewhenshesawEddieinhisNikejacket LorenafeltdesperatetoexplainwhenEddiecameforwardandblamedLorenaforherirresponsibility Pleaseforgiveme HowIregrettedbeingsostupidtohaveleftyourjacketinthebiologyroom apologizedLorena shame facedandself condemned HearingLorena ssincereapologyandknowingwhatshehaddonetomakeup EddiegaveLorenaawarmhug sayingthatnothingcouldmatchafriendshipcherishedbybothsides Then theywenttoselectagiftforLorena smother 15 LorenawasabouttoleavewhenshesawEddieinhisNikejacket HersmilefrozeasshenoticedEddiewearingalongface Eddie