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DescriptiveWriting Descriptivewriting sometimescalled showingwriting iswritingthatdescribesaparticularperson placeoreventingreatdetail Descriptivewritingusesalotoffloweryadjectivesandadverbstodescribewhatisgoingonorhowsomethingappears Descriptiveessaysareoftensubjectivetasks Thedescriptiveessayisoftencreative personal orsimplyartistic Ifyouweregoingtodescribebitingintoanapple youwouldnotsimplysay Hebitintotheappleandittastedgood Descriptivewritingwouldconveythesamesentenceasfollows Thecrunchofhisteethpiercingtheapple sskinwasdeafeningandthesweetjuicesoftheapplerandownhischin Heslowlyclosedhisteethontheripe succulent ruby coloredapple Thetasteofthemeatwasassweetascandyandhefelteuphoric UsingtheFiveSensesinDescriptiveWriting Smell Adjectivesinclude 芳香的 aromatic sweet scented fragrant臭的 恶臭的 smelly reeking fetid malodorousputrid 腐烂的 Taste Adjectivesinclude pungent 辛辣的 sour acrid 辛辣的 bitter fetid stinking putrid 腐烂的 decaying rancid 陈腐的 reek stale 不新鲜 走味的 bad ExampleOne Salt Lookslike white small shiny Feelslike grainy soft slipsthroughmyfingers Tasteslike bitter salty bad Soundslike quiet rustle silent Smellslike faint odorless mildlybitter ExampleTwo Thescaronhischinonlyshowsupinacertainlight sight Hewearstoomuchaftershave 须后水 smell Thekiwifruittastesacid taste Hehasahigh pitchedlaugh sound Hishairfeelswiry 金属丝的 touch Here sanexampleofhowallfiveofoursensescanbeusedtodescribeasimplescene Theapplewasbrightgreen itsskinpolishedandshiningasitnestledinthefruitbowl sight Thescentwasfresh asthoughthefruithadjustbeenpluckedfromthetree smell Shetookitfromthebowl herfingersclosingaroundthefirmsmoothskin touch assheliftedittoherlips Theapplecrunchedloudly sound asherteethcutthroughtheskinintothetart juicyflesh taste Asthefreshjuicerandownherthroatshenoticedasmallblackspeckmovingslowlyinthecreamyflesh Closerinspectionrevealedthatshehadn tjusttakenabitefromtheapple she dbittenthroughafat juicyworm Para 8 PayattentiontotheuseofTOUCHindescriptivewriting Ifeelthedelicatesymmetryofaleaf Ipassmyhandslovinglyaboutthesmoothskinofasilverbirch ortheroughbarkofapine InspringItouchthebranchesoftreeshopefullyinsearchofabud thefirstsignofawakeningNatureafterherwinter ssleep Ifeelthedelightfultextureofaflower anddiscoveritsremarkablefolds andsomethingofthemiracleofNatureisrevealedtome Occasionally ifIamveryfortunate Iplacemyhandgentlyinasmalltreeandfeelthehappyquiverofabirdinfullsong Iamdelightedtohavecoolwatersofabrookrushthroughmyopenfingers TomeathickcarpetofpineneedlesorsoftgrassismorewelcomethanthemostluxuriousPersianrug Persianrugs Tomethecolorfulseasonsareathrillingandunendingdrama theactionofwhichstreamsthroughmyfingertips Findtheadjectivesandadverbsinthisparagraphandunderlinethem Task1 Ifeelthedelicatesymmetryofaleaf Ipassmyhandslovinglyaboutthesmoothskinofasilverbirch ortheroughbarkofapine InspringItouchthebranchesoftreeshopefullyinsearchofabud thefirstsignofawakeningNatureafterherwinter ssleep Ifeelthedelightfultextureofaflower anddiscoveritsremarkablefolds andsomethingofthemiracleofNatureisrevealedtome Occasionally ifIamveryfortunate Iplacemyhandgentlyinasmalltreeandfeelthehappyquiverofabirdinfullsong Iamdelightedtohavecoolwatersofabrookrushthroughmyopenfingers Task2 PayattentiontotheverbsshowinghowHelenfeltthethingsaround Ifeelthedelicatesymmetryofaleaf Ipassmyhandslovinglyaboutthesmoothskinofasilverbirch ortheroughbarkofapine InspringItouchthebranchesoftreeshopefullyinsearchofabud thefirstsignofawakeningNatureafterherwinter ssleep Ifeelthedelightfultextureofaflower anddiscoveritsremarkablefolds andsomethingofthemiracleofNatureisrevealedtome Occasionally ifIamveryfortunate Iplacemyhandgentlyinasmalltreeandfeelthehappyquiverofabirdinfullsong Iamdelightedtohavecoolwatersofabrookrushthroughmyopenfingers Task3 Writeadescriptivecompositionusingthefivesenses youcanuseon