高三英语专题读写任务写作学案-梁枫(叙述经历)-教师版.doc

广州卓越教育机构一对一(教师版)高三专题读写任务学案第4讲叙述经历本讲内容主要包括：1.如何写好过渡句（这篇文章让我想起我的经历）；2.描述例子的时候如何分层；3.如何运用高级语言手段【诊查】（一）基础篇强调过渡句的使用，成绩中等的学生可在填写完表格后，挑其中三句背熟，固定用在自己的作文上(推荐1、3、6较简单)：相关短语1. 读了这个故事后，我情不自禁地想起After reading the story, I _ _ remembering2. 这个故事让我想起一次类似的经历。The story _ me _ a similar experience.3. 这个故事让我想到了另一个发生在九月的故事。This story reminds me of another story _ _ _ _4. 这篇文章/故事让我想起自己的一次经历。两年前，我但是当结果The passage reminds me of my own experience of Two years ago, I But when_ _ _ 5. 我确实有的经历。有一次，当我但是在那个时候I _ _ my own experience of doingOnce when I HoweverAt that time6. 我永远也不会忘记我的经历。我记得当我I will _ _my own experience of I remember when I was7. 我曾有难以忘怀的/相似的经历去年夏天直到那时我才意识到I once had an unforgettable/similar experience thatLast summer_ _ _ did I realize8. 我朋友的一次经历很有说服力。一天然后最后直到那时，我才意识到One of my friends experience is _ _ _. One day Then FinallyNot until then did I realize 9. 我突然想起我朋友的一次相似的经历。这个故事始于然后.最后It _ _ me/It struck me _ my friend had a similar experience. The story began whenLaterIn the end10. 从这次经历中，我学到了/知道了/意识到合作的重要。From this experience, I _/_/_ _cooperation is of importance.语篇模板叙述一次想家的经历（时间、地点、原因）。（2011广东高考）The passage _ me _ my own experience of feeling homesick. _ I was 10 years old, I depended on my parents for everything. _, they once sent me to my uncles home in another city because they were too busy to take care of me. _ _ _, I did miss my parents and feel lonely.(2） 提高篇成绩比较好的学生可直接翻译去诊查，并结合上述表格的7、8、9、10（较有难度）：Sentence l: 上述故事让我想起一个类似的经历，在这段经历里我学会了如何关爱他人。Sentence 2: 直到那时，我才意识到老师对我产生了积极影响。Sentence 3: 读了关于在中国发生的事故的报告后，我想到十年前发生在我身上的事情。Sentence 4: 我记得当我读高中的时候，我认为父母为我做任何事情是理所应当的。Sentence 5: 我朋友的一次经历非常有说服力，从他的经历我看到了爱的伟大。Sentence 6: 是她的帮助让我很快地恢复和在数学上迅速提高，因此我真的非常感激她所做的事情。Sentence 7: 惊喜的是，我被告知打扫垃圾是这次训练营的最后一项考验，而我是唯一一个人被宣布合符资格。【导学】（一）技巧点拨这类要点中常含”以你或你朋友的经历说明” “讲述一次你或你朋友的经历”等. 叙述经历一般包括记叙文的基本要素, 即某人在何时何地因何原因做了何事结果如何, 或者说, 一般包括时间, 地点, 起因, 经过和结果. 这个故事往往与阅读材料中的故事相类似, 值得注意的是, 所述经历一定要紧扣你要说明的主题。（二）初级篇例题导写No.1学生省去构思这一步，对这种题型都喜闻乐见，乐于接受；注意引导学生有意识地运用所积累的过渡句，如remindof; when I.; at that time; in the end等等。1. 叙述你因做了对不起父母的事而后悔的经历.首先, 引出经历: 我曾有过一次难以忘怀的经历, 那次确实伤害到了我的父母.然后, 叙述经历: was addicted to playing computer / asked me to do homework / shouted rudely at / regretted that I was wrong _ _ _2. 叙述一次你或你的朋友助人的经历. (包括时间, 地点和起因) 首先，引出经历：我自己确实有过帮助别人的经历。 然后，叙述经历：took a bus/tried to drive an old lady off for having no money to buy a ticket/paid for her/thanked me and praised me_ _ _3叙述一次冒险的经历。（时间、地点、起因、经过和结果） 首先，引出经历：我永远也不会忘记我自己的冒险经历。 然后，叙述经历：walked through the woods/a snake was shacked and tried to attack us/dont move and- keep silent/the snake crawled away _例题导写No.2读写任务：阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左有的英语短文。 Millions of students take examinations every year. A small part of the students decide that the best thing would be to cheat as they take those examinations. Cheating is something: that is not uncommon at school and thus it has become a serious problem. Why do students cheat? The reasons for this are rather complex. The main reason is that examination is believed to- be the best measure of ones intellectual capacity, so students cheat to prove it to others. Secondly, when students are not prepared for the examination they may think they are forced to , so they can pass or get a better grade. Also, if you are in an environment where everybodys cheating and teachers turn a deaf ear to this. You dont want to stay behind. There are some schools where the teachers are simply not active in spotting out cheaters, which encourages students to cheat. Finally, some students simply surrender to（屈服于）peer pressure for they cannot bear standing out in the crowd. 写作内容： l以约30词概括短文的内容要点； 2. 以约120个词就“考试作弊”的主题发表看法，内容包括： (1)考试时你最好的朋友要抄你的答案，你会如何做？ (2)你对考试作弊的看法； (3)叙述你的一次难忘的考试经历。Part 1：30个词概括对如何概括的技巧进行复习 _ _ _ Part 2: 根据提示词填空可以叫学生构思一下，自己会举怎样的例子呢？（要求例子服务中心）_(我曾经有一次难忘的经历)when I took an English examination in my junior high school. Thats a final examination, for which I didnt prepare well. _(然而), my desk-mate was good at English, and moved her paper to my side, letting me copy her answers. _(在那时), I hesitated, “Should I be honest or get a high grade?” _(在之后)a long struggle, I made up my mind not to cheat.（三）中级篇阅读下面短文，然后按要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文 When Sam first got to his boarding school with his parents, he was very happy. He thought he would be able to go home every weekend. When he was told he would not, he started crying because the thought of not seeing his parents was driving him crazy.He was given uniforms and all other things that he would need for the term. He started crying when it was time for his parents to leave. He was then taken to the dorm, where he saw other children happy. He tried as much as he could to fit in but could not because his mind was at home. He started feeling homesick (想家) and wanted to go homes as soon as possible.He got sick soon because he could not eat the school food. He could not concentrate in the classroom. All he could think was being at home with his family. He had no mobile phone or other means to get in touch with his parents. He was angry and felt lonely. He thought his parents hated him and that was why they left him in a boarding school.写作内容1. 以约30个词概括上文的主要内容。2. 以约120个词讲述一次你（或你的朋友）想家的经历，内容包括：时间、地点和起因；想家给学习和生活带来的影响；你（或你朋友）是如何应对的。写作要求1.作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。评分标准概括准确，语言规范，内容何时，语句连贯。 _ _ _ _ _ _ 【展示】（一）初级篇根据括号给出的中文提示填空。Getting back what you have lost would be _(一次难忘的经历). Last Monday, I lost my expensive cellphone, on which my name was stamped. Fortunately, it was returned. _(那天早上), I rushed out of my house and jumped into a taxi, for I would be late for the final examination. _(当我一到达) school, I headed for my classroom quickly, _（只发现）I had left my cellphone on the back seat. _（当的时候）the exam ended, to my great surprise, I found the driver waiting at the school gate. He handed the phone over to me, _（脸上带着微笑）. So touched was I that tears rolled down my cheeks. _, _ (从这个故事，我确信)the significance of honesty, which will contribute to building a warm and harmonious society. As a famous saying goes, honesty is the best policy.（二）中级篇运用所学句型改写老师可引导学生就两方面进行改写：1.本节课所学的过渡句和分层描述例子；2.词汇和句型的表达是否存在错误，或可否更加优美【强化复合句、非谓语、特殊句型的运用】下文1. 难忘的一节英语课I think of my first English class. When I was in Senior One, one day, our English teacher Miss Liu came in the classroom. Though she spoke English during the whole lesson, I could understand she talked. And I was interested in learning English. At the end of the class, she asked me to retell the text. I was nervous and my voice shaked. After I retold it in broken English, I felt ashamed of myself. However, she praised me. She said, my pronunciation was good. _ _ _ _ _ _ 2. 一次过生日的经历Last year I had a very special birthday. Last year, I spent my birthday in the countryside with my cousins. We got up early, went out to climb the mountain behind my cousins house. I saw beautiful plants and lovely birds. We went fishing, caught lots of fish for supper. _ _ _ _ _ _ （三）高级篇 阅读下面短文，然后按要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。My husband received a letter a month ago from a young woman who had been his student when she was in middle school. She was writing because she wanted to thank him for having a great influence on her life.In the letter she wrote, “You were the teacher who helped me discover my talent for math. Before you came to teach us, I had been terribly poor at math, and had never thought that I would be interested in it. To my surprise, you magically showed me the beauty of math. I guess that was the turning point of my attitude towards it. Gradually my interest in it began to grow. Thanks to your encouragement, I made continuous progress in math, and finally made up my mind to study it in the university. Today I am working as an accountant at Valley Medical Center in California. You played an important part. Thank you!”What a wonderful gift to a relief teacher! My husband has received many letters from students over the years. This one was special, for it arrived at this time in his life when he is in very poor health.【写作内容】1. 以约30个词概括上文的主要内容。2. 以约120个词就老师影响学生的话题谈谈你的想法，内容包括：(1) 上文使你想起哪位对你帮助最大的老师；(2) 举例说明该老师对你学习或成长的影响；(3) 你怎样看待老师对学生的影响。【写作要求】1. 作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。【评分标准】概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，语篇连贯。_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。Around twenty years ago I was living in Seattle and going through hard times. With rich experience and a Masters degree, to my shame, I could only drive a school bus to make ends meet.Later that afternoon, I dropped off a little girl in a quiet suburban neighborhood. As she passed she handed me an earring, saying I should keep it in case somebody claimed it. The earring was painted black and said BE HAPPY. It hit me. I had been putting all of my energies into what was wrong with my life rather than what was right! I decided then and there to make a list of 50 things I was grateful for. At first it was hard, then it got easier. One day I decided to up it to 75. My life was completely changed. I know that it was because I changed my attitude to gratitude, which is the key to happiness. I spent the next year conducting training workshops all around the Seattle area and then decided to risk everything and go back to Scotland where I had lived previously. I closed my one man business, bought a plane ticket and got a six month visa. One month later I met my wonderful English wife and best friend of 15 years now. We live in a small beautiful cottage, two miles from a paved road in the highlands of Scotland. 【写作内容】1. 以约30个词概括以上短文的主要内容；2. 然后以约120个词就“幸福”话题写一篇短文，内容包括：(1) 请讲述一件你经历过的幸福的事情；(2) 简述你对幸福的理解。【写作要求】1. 在作文中可以使用自己亲身的经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容但不得直接引用原文中的句子；2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。【评分标准】概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯。_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _参考答案：【诊查】（一）基础篇常用句式1. After reading the story, I cant help remembering读了这个故事后，我情不自禁地想起2.The story reminds me of a similar experience.这个故事让我想起一次类似的经历。3. This story reminds me of another story that happened in September这个故事让我想到了另一个发生在九月的故事。4. The passage reminds me of my own experience of Two years ago, I But whenAs a result 这篇文章/故事让我想起自己的一次经历。两年前，我但是当结果5. I did have my own experience of doingOnce when I HoweverAt that time我确实有的经历。有一次，当我但是在那个时候6. I will never forget my own experience of I remember when I was我永远也不会忘记我的经历。我记得当我7.I once had an unforgettable experience thatLast summerNot until then did I 我曾有难以忘怀的/相似的经历去年夏天直到那时我才8. One of my friends experience is a convincing example. One day Then FinallyNot until then did I realize 我朋友的一次经历很有说服力。一天然后最后直到那时，我才意识到9.It occurred to me/It struck me that my friend had a similar experience. The story began whenLaterIn the end我突然想起我朋友的一次相似的经历。这个故事始于然后.最后10. From this experience, I learn/know/realize that cooperation is of importance.从这次经历中，我学到了/知道了/意识到合作的重要。语篇模板叙述一次想家的经历（时间、地点、原因）。（2011广东高考）The passage reminds me of my own experience of feeling homesick. When I was 10 years old, I depended on my parents for everything. However, they once sent me to my uncles home in another city because they were too busy to take care of me. At that time, I did miss my parents and feel lonely.（二）提高篇1. The story above reminds me of my similar experience, in which I have learnt how to take care of others.2. Until then did I realize that my teacher has a positive influence on me.3. Having read the report about accidents happened in China, I think of the accident which occurred to me ten years ago.4. I remember when I was in high school, I took it for granted that parents should do everything for me.5. One of my friends experience is a convincing example, from which I can see the greatness of true love.6. It was with her aid that I recovered soon and improved myself in maths rapidly, so I felt grateful for what she had done.7.To my great surprise, I was told that cleaning the rubbish is the last test of the training camp, and I was the only one who was announced qualified.【导学】（二）初级篇例题导写No.11. 叙述你因做了对不起父母的事而后悔的经历 （引出经历） I once had an unforgettable experience that I did hurt my parents. (叙述经历) I remember when I was fifteen years old and I was addicted to playing computer. One day, I chatted with my friend about some interesting things on the Internet. Then, my mum had asked me to do my homework many times, so I felt annoyed and finally shouted rudely at her. After that, I realized that I was wrong and regretted having done that. I shouldnt have treated my parents that way.2. 叙述一次你或你的朋友助人的经历。（引出经历）I did have my own experience of helping others. (叙述经历) On an extremely hot day two yea