英语正反观点对比类作文.ppt

议论文写作指导正反观点 Discussion Whatisagoodwriting Structure Goodbeginingandending 好的开头和结尾 Wellorganizedandsmoothlydeveloped 结构合理 行文流畅 Content everythingneededincludedwhichisrelatedtoyourview 内容要完整 Language NoChinglish 避免中文式英语 NoGrammaticalmistakes 没有语法错误 Withexactlyusedwordsandrelativelychangedsentencepatterns 词语的准确运用和句式的富于变化 正反观点题型 要求学生从正反两个方面来论证某一观点 对这类题型 审题时注意 体裁 议论文时态 一般现在时人称 第一人称或第三人称 最近 你校同学正在参加某英文报组织的一场讨论 讨论的主题是 公园要不要收门票 请你根据下表提供的信息 给报社写一封信 客观地介绍讨论情况 注意 1 信的开头已为你写好 2 词数 100左右 3 参考词汇 门票 entrancefeeDearEditor I mwritingtotellyouaboutthediscussionwe vehadaboutwhetheranentrancefeeshouldbechargedforparks DearEditor I mwritingtotellyouaboutthediscussionwe vehadaboutwhetheranentrancefeeshouldbechargedforparks 提出问题 Opinionsaredividedonthequestion 60 ofthestudentsareagainsttheideaofentrancefee Theybelieveapublicparkshouldbefreeofcharge Peopleneedaplacewheretheycanrestandenjoythemselves Changingentrancefeeswillnodoubtkeepsomepeopleaway Whatismore itwillbecomenecessarytobuildgatesandwalls whichwilldoharmtotheappearanceofacity 过渡句 观点一 论据一 论据二 Ontheotherhand 40 thinkthatfeesshouldbechargedbecauseyouneedmoneytopaygardenersandotherworkers andtobuyplantsandyoungtrees Theysuggest however feesshouldbechargedlow YourstrulyLiHua可以看出 这类文章的写作 首先要提出问题 即双方讨论的问题 接下来提出观点一 并用一系列论据进行阐明 说明完观点一之后 再提出观点二 继续用论据进行说明 如果需要说明自己的观点 可接下来说明自己的观点 观点二 论据一 论据二 文章结构 正反观点对比类的文章 提出问题 不同观点对比 说明自己观点或者总结 Thestudentsofclass3hadadiscussionaboutwhetheritisnecessarytostartlearningEnglishfromchildhood Opinionsaredividedonthisissue SomeofthemthinkthatEnglishlearningshouldstartfromchildhood Aslittleboysandgirlshaveaverygoodmemory theycanlearnalotofEnglishwordsbyheart ThiswillhelpthemlayasolidfoundationfortheirfutureEnglishlearning Butothersdonotagree YoungchildrenhavetolearnChinesepinyinatschool IftheystudyChinesepinyinandEnglishatthesametime itwillbeveryeasyforthemtomixthemup ThiswilldoalotofharmnotonlytotheirChineselearningbutalsototheirfutureEnglishlearning Inshort thestudentshavenotarrivedatanyagreementyet What smore What sworse 作文模板 hadadiscussionaboutwhether Opinionsaredividedonthisissue ofthestudentsthink should What smore But However Ontheotherhand ofthestudentsthink shouldn t What sworse Inshort havenotarrivedatanyagreementyet 介绍讨论的主题 开头句 我们举行了一场讨论 讨论内容是学生是否可以 Wehadadiscussionaboutwhetherstudentsshouldbeallowedto 我们已经作了一个调查 调查内容是学生是否可以 We vehadasurveyonwhetherstudentsshouldbeallowedto 我写信是要告诉你我们的一场讨论 讨论内容是否可以 I mwritingtotellyouaboutadiscussionwehavehadaboutwhetherstudentsshouldbeallowedto 过渡句 Opinionsaredividedonthisissue Opinionsaremainlydividedintotwogroups Differentpeople however havedifferentopinionsonthismatter Differentpeople however thinkquitedifferentlyonthismatter 在这个问题上大家意见有分歧 主要有两种不同意见 然而 在这件事上不同的人有不同的看法 介绍正方观点 Sixtypercentofthestudentsarefortheidea Sixtypercentofthestudentsthinkitnecessaryto Somepeoplethinkthat Accordingtothem allofusshould Somebelievethat Theyareoftheopinionthat 介绍反方观点 However ofthestudentsthink Ontheotherhand ofthestudentsthink However othershavedifferentopinions But ofthestudentsthink Othersarguethat Intheiropinion 进一步介绍正反方观点 What sworse What smore Inaddition Besides First Second Third inmyopinion asfarasIamconcerned personally weshouldpayattentionto Therefore Iamfullyconvincedthat Onlyinthiswaycanwe Weshould which ofcourse willbenefit 结尾句 Intoday sclass wediscussedaboutwhethertheoldbuildingswithalonghistoryshouldberemovedintheoldcityreconstruction About40percentofthestudentsagreethattheoldbuildingsshouldberemoved Theythinkitmoreimportanttoimprovethelivingconditionsofthecitizens Besides manyoldbuildingsarealreadyshabbyanddangerousaswell Whiletheothersholdt