2014上海杨浦区高考二模英语翻译具体解析第1-4句.doc

翻译1 ：（4分）原句： 不管你相信不相信，善于倾听并采纳别人的意见是明智的。一. 评分标准： 1分1分1分Believe it or not / Whether you believe it or not, it is advisable to 1分listen to (others) (readily / willingly) / be a good listener1分and take/adopt/accept/follow their/ others advice/ suggestion(s) /idea(s) /opinions /viewpoint(s).或可以：Believe it or not, being ready/willing to listen to others and adopt their advice is advisable. 或可以：Whether you believe it or not, listening to (others) and adopting their opinion(s) (readily / willingly) are /is advisable.注意：“采纳”用receive , “善于”用be good at 都扣 0.5分, 原句“善于”意为“乐于”， 漏掉it 扣0.5分二. 典型错误：1. 不理解advisable 的意思，把它误认为“倾听”，而把句子中的“明智的”用“sensible, wise”表示。2. “不管你相信不相信”：翻译成：No matter whether you believe it or not, 或 Whatever you believe it or not, 3. 句型不熟练, 很多同学漏掉 it Whether you believe or not, / Believe or not4. 中文“善于”使很多同学句子出现偏差，原本正确的句子又改错。本题的得分率2.6分左右。2. 能否坚持自己所做的事情是一个人取得成功的重要因素之一。（persevere） Whether one can persevere in what he is doing is one of the important factors of his success.1) Whether one can persevere in-1Whether to persevere in 也对Whether 用if扣半分介词in 漏掉或用错都扣半分用it 做形式主语扣半分多一个连词that 扣一分语序错扣一分2) what he is doing-1what he does something he is doing /doesthe thing that he is doing/ does 都算对whatever he is doing/ does除以上两种时态外，has been doing 也算对。其他时态都扣一分the things what he is doing或what he do 都扣一分3) one of the important factors-1among the important factors/elementsone/an important factor/element 都算对factor 用错或该用复数而不用都扣半分important 写成main, major 也扣半分4) of his success-1 to （his）success leading to/contributing to success that lead to success of (his) achieving success 都算对 of his achievements of being successful for him to achieve success/succeed to achieve success /to be successful/ to succeed/ that makes him achieve success/ to achieving success /of getting success 都扣半分of whether he can achieve success 扣半分to achieve a/the success 全扣that a person can succeed/ achieve success 全扣另外前后人称一致不扣分，若有矛盾扣半分3. 在线预定出租车虽然很时尚，但许多相关的问题尚待解决。 （as）FashionalbePopularIn as 1分StylishUp-to-datefashon注：as 倒装语序错误扣0.5分。写成although, 把as 放到后半句中， 扣1分。booking a taxi online reseving a taxi onlinemaking a resevation for a taxi onle is 1分online booking of a taxi注： 缺冠词扣0.5分， 漏写”is “扣0.5分many related/revelant/concerning problemsmany problems related to/connected with/associated with/linked to/about/regarding/concerning it 1分注： 很多学生”relative”扣0.5分，多写个”but”扣0.5分， 漏写 “it”扣0.5.remain to beare to be solved/dealt with/resolved/ handled/ settled/coped with 1分need to beare left to beare wainting to bethere are many relevant problems to be注： 既写了there are有直接加remian 扣0.5， 动词单复数写错扣0.5. 写成”should be “扣0.5. 4在北京的地铁上吃东西、抽烟或躺在座位上的人可能会被处以50-500元的罚款。The man who/ The person who/ The one who Those who/ People who/ The people who1分eat, smoke or lie on the seat(s)/ chair(s)are eating, smoking or lying on the seat(s)/chair(s)1.5分（每个动作0.5分，or 写成and 扣0.5；lie拼写错误较严重，60%以上考生写成lay,介词写成in 扣0.5； 与主语单复数不一致扣0.5，不重复扣分；不少考生定语从句who后直接加分词，扣1分；时态用过去时扣1分） on/ in the subway/ metro/ underground in/ of Beijingon/ in the Beijing subway/metro/underground0.5分 （“地铁”用复数，扣0.5； 介词用at， 扣0.5； 单词拼写错误，扣0.5；这一定语如果置于句末成为状语，扣0.5）can/ may/could/might/be likely to be finedmay/might/be likely to pay a fine/be asked to pay a fine1.5分 “可能”0.5分 “处以罚款”1分50 to 500 yuanbetween 50 to/ and 500 yuanfrom 50 to 500 yuan0.5分 （多了money 一词，扣0.5；没有fine这一名词，用rang