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Part Writing (30minutes) （2012.6）Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled On Excessive Packaging following the outline given below. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.1. 目前许多商品存在过度包装的现象。2. 出现这一现象的原因。3. 我对这一现象的看法和建议。On Excessive Packaging2012年6月英语四级作文是一篇现象解释型作文。现象解释型作文通常要求考生从试题的提示性文字、图表或图画入手，描述提示性文字、图表或图画中反映出的现象，对该现象进行解释说明，分析其原因并加以评论。其基本结构是：首先描述现象并说明其现状；然后分析这种现象产生的原因或相关因素；最后提出建议或总结观点。2012年6月英语四级作文是一篇结合生活细节命题的作文，主题为“过度包装”，有三段式提纲，因此是一篇提纲式文字命题、现象解释型的说明文。应该按照“描述现象”“分析原因”和“建议措施”这三段来进行写作。范文On Excessive PackagingIn recent years, with the economy growing, all kinds of goods are flowing into our life. The packaging of goods becomes more and more attracting our eyes. However, the problem of excessive packaging has aroused peoples wide concern.This phenomenon exists for a number of reasons. For one thing, the business has seen through the mind of most consumers who are face-saving, for they thought that the more beautiful the packaging of goods is, the best people like. For another thing, excessive packaging can make the majority of merchants get high profit for the cheap commodity by improving price. Perhaps the primary reason lies that the form far outweighs the content.In my opinion, it is more advisable to focus on the quality of goods than to decorate its appearance. So, it is urgent that immediate measures should be taken to stop the situation. Only in this way can we reduce unnecessary waste and have a rational and pure shopping condition, making our money worthwhile. Part I Writing （2012.12）2012年12月四级作文为图表题。与2012年6月的作文相似，只需要将第一段的描述现象改为描述图表即可。这次作文题目有两个版本。题目都是Educational Pays （教育回报），一个版本的图表显示的是教育水平越高，收入越高，另一个版本的图表显示的是教育水平越高，失业率越低。虽然图表描述的具体内容不同，但主题是一致的：教育是值得投资的。写作思路也是一致的。两篇范文都是采取三段式的描述方法。第一段：描述图表。先一句话引出图表总体内容The above bar chart clearly shows us 然后具体描述现象We see that。最后用for instance引出一些具体数据来例证现象。第二段：分析原因。先写一个引出原因的句子，然后具体列举一到两个原因即可。由于字数限制，原因不必列太多。第三段：给出建议。先是总结这个现象This phenomenon tells us that education is a worthy investment.（教育值得投资）。然后是建议国家增大教育投资，以及个人要努力学习。范文A：Education PaysThe above bar chart clearly shows us education pays in 2010. We see that one with higher education background earns more money weekly than those with lower ones. For instance, the college students with no degree get paid$712 per week whereas those with a Bachelors degree can earn $1038.Several reasons, in my opinion, can be identified to account for this phenomenon. To begin with, compared with those with comparatively lower education degree, people who have received higher education possess considerably wider knowledge, more remarkable learning and research ability, greater innovation and most of all, resourceful social network, all of which are essential to a high-income work. Also, the higher ones education degree is, the bigger platform he will have to show his ability. For example, his college, university, or research institute will organize various job fairs for them to communicate face to face with employers.This phenomenon tells us that education is a worthy investment. Therefore, substantial education investment should be strengthened while we, as college students, should study harder to build our country and strive for a better life for ourselves.范文B：Education PaysThe above bar chart clearly shows us education pays in 2010. We see that unemployment rate of those with higher education background is much lower than those with lower education degree. For instance, the unemployment rate of college students with no degree is as high as 14.9% while that of those with doctoral degree is only 1.9%.The following reason, in my opinion, is the most important one to account for this phenomenon. Compared with those with comparatively lower education degree, people who have received higher education possess considerably wider knowledge, more remarkable learning and research ability, greater innovation and most of all, resourceful social network, all of which make them more qualified and competent for their task. Thus, they are less likely to lose their jobs.This phenomenon tells us that education is a worthy investment. Therefore, education investment should be strengthened while we, as college students, should study harder to avoid unemployment.Part I Writing (多题多卷写作题 1) (30 minutes) （2013.6）Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief description of the picture and then express your views on the importance of doing small things before undertaking something big. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words. 2013年6月的四级作文几套题目均为为图画作文，写作方法相似，关键是能够从图画中找到论点，然后进行论证。属于观点论证型作文。观点论证型作文一般要求考生根据题目所给论点，按照提纲要求太过摆事实、讲道理的方式对该论点进行论证。而此次作文需要考生从图片提炼出论点，自己要做到心里有提纲。其基础结构还是三段式：首先描述图片，提出论点；然后提出论据对其进行论证；最后表明自己的立场和看法。确立文章的基本思想，这是最重要的。我们要确定图画给我们传达的是一个什么样的信息。例如作文1的重点就在这一句话“the importance of doing small things before undertaking something big”。从图画中男孩与父亲的对话中我们基本可以判断出出题人的初衷是想说在做大事情之前要先做好小事情，正好对应了中国的一句谚语：一屋不扫何以扫天下。基本思想确立以后我们就可以按套路出牌了。第一段， 我们首先用一两句话对图片做一个简洁的描述，然后总体陈述大多数人的做法；第二段， 第二段总起句表明自己的观点，观点一定要陈述清楚，不能含糊。说明doing small things 非常重要，然后就这一观点分别详述原因，one the one hand, one the other hand；第三段， 总结，一句话概括刚才所支持的观点或原因，最后一句话考生可以照应开篇，也可以表决心，比如I decide to .。范文1 ：The Importance of Doing Small ThingsFrom the carton, we can clearly see that the boy is worried about disposing of nuclear waste, while his father tells him to empty the dustbin first. This carton reminds me of a Chinese saying: If you dont clean the room (solve your problems), then how can you control the world. However, most people always attach great importance to something big, but neglect small things.In my opinion, it is necessary and important to do small things. On the one hand, doing small things well helps us to develop good habits, which set a good foundation for our future development. There is no doubt that one of the greatest differences between success and failure is the importance placed on little things. On the other hand, the big is the little. If something needs to be done, it is big. No matter what kinds of task, if it is worth doing, it can be big.Taking all these into account, we can easily notice that it is reasonable to do small things before big ones. So before doing important things, lets empty our dustbin first!Part I Writing (多题多卷写作题 2) (30 minutes) Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief description of the picture and then express your views on the importance of reading literature. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words. 作文2探讨的话题是文学阅读的重要性。这个话题是十分常见，对考生来说难度不大。要写好这篇作文，需要注意以下三点：一，对图片做出描述；二，在评论的基础上要亮出自己的观点；三，尽量避免语法错误。The Importance of Reading LiteratureLiterature is acknowledged as the most precious product of human civilization and wisdom, especially by our teachers. So they always ask their students to read as many as literary works. Just as the drawing shown above, a teacher gives a literary work to her student, saying: “Just think of it as if youre reading a long text-message.”It is of great significance for us to appreciate literature due to the following reasons. Firstly, a good literature can get you to know a life experience through the eyes of someone other than yourself. The more experience you gain, the more knowledgeable you are. Secondly, a good literature allows you to learn about history in a personalized way. The stories told in the works can act as mirrors and help you adjust your own behaviors. Lastly, a good literature is an effective way for relaxation. The beautiful and moving scenes shown in the literature are helpful for ones mental health.In short, literature is indispensable in our life. We, students, should catch our time to read more literatures.作文3讨论的是学习基本技能的重要性，依然采用描述图片，提出论点；然后证明自己的观点；最后总结观点的模式。The Importance of Learning Basic SkillsWe can see that in this picture, a teacher is teaching her pupils to deal with arithmetic questions, but some of them think that learning these mathematical skills is useless. They argue that by the time they are in the job market, these skills will be outdated. As to whether it is important to learn basic skills, people hold different views.As far as I know, it is very important for one student to acquire basic skills. At first, mastering basic skills well can lay a solid foundation for learning advanced skills. Basic skills are a floor, not a ceiling. Students must learn them first so that they can move on to various advanced skills. Whats more, learning basic skills helps to improve confidence and enhance self-esteem. Individuals with basic skills are likely to be more confident and active.All in all, if we want to keep progressing, it is important to learn basic skills well. By mastering basic skills and learning new things, we will have a bright future!Part I Writing (多题多卷写作题 1) (30 minutes) （2013.12）Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.“Dear Andy-How are you? Your mother and I are fine. We both miss you and hope you are doing well. We look forward to seeing you again the next time your computer crashes and you come down-stairs for something to eat. Love, Mom and Dad.”Part I Writing (多题多卷写作题 2) (30 minutes) （2013.12）Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on learning and then explain why doesnt simply mean learning to obtain information. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.“Once I learn how to use Google, isnt that all the education I really need?”Part I Writing (多题多卷写作题 3) (30 minutes) （2013.12）Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the increasing use of the mobile phone in peoples life and explain the consequence of overusing it. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.People are crossing the street looking at their cell phones and using walking sticks in order to see.2013年12月四级作文形式还是图片作文，多套作文题主题一致，都是通过漫画，探讨因特网、手机、电脑等现代信息技术对人们交流模式的影响。话题贴近日常生活。题目实际上是要求说明网络的影响，解释电子通讯能否替代面对面的、常规的交流，考生需要明确给出正面或反面的观点。此次作文还是依照三段式：描绘图片，引出社会现象，表明自己的观点，然后论证观点，最后总结观点。范文一：The modern technology has greatly altered the mode of communication among people. With the help of the Internet, people can easily contact each other anytime anywhere. However, the side effect is that many people have become over-dependent on the Internet and neglected face-to-face communication.As far as Im concerned, electronic communication cannot fully replace the direct contact among people. Although it seems to bring everyone together, it actually estranges people and decreases the effectiveness of communication. A typical example is that, traditionally, people working in the same office simply walk to others and talk. Today, however, co-workers tend to send e-mails or instant messages through the Internet even when they are sitting next to each other. As words can never convey the full message, it usually takes much more time and rounds of conversation than face-to-face communication, in which people can discuss more directly with less loss of information.To conclude, the Internet enables more effective communication in some situations, but over-dependence on it actually pulls people apart.范文二The Impact of the Internet on LearningIn the age of knowledge explosion, the Internet opens a magical portal for learners to get access to seemingly incessant information. But is information equal to knowledge? “Once I learn how to use google, isnt that all the education I really need?” This question fully embodies the prejudiced opinion that as long as people acquire abundant information, they will get proper education.The reason why education doesnt simply mean learning to obtain information is that education is not limited to the hard facts or theories students can learn from their textbooks or the Internet. It relates to a wider scope ranging from the obtainment of practical skills to the development of characters, which are hard for students to learn simply by googling