高考英语书面表达一：建议信模板.doc

写作一：建议信(A Letter of Advice)题型特点建议信是生活中常见的一种文体，是写信人向收信人对某事提出的建议和忠告。建议信可能是写给个人，也可能是写给某个组织或机构，信的内容要包括写信的原因、建议的内容、提出建议的理由。建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服力。具体写作步骤一般是“三段式”，通常以firstly, secondly, thirdly或to begin/start with, then, later, last but not least 等依次陈述建议，具体结构为：建议信常用句式1开头常用语I know you have trouble in . after reading your letter. I am writing to give you some suggestions/give you a hand. 在读了你的信后，我知道你在上有困难。我写这封信的目的是给你一些建议/帮助。Youve asked me for advice with regard to/regarding .and Ill try to make some useful suggestions here. 关于你向我征求建议，在此，我将尽力提出一些有用的建议。Im sorry to know that you are having trouble with/in doing . at the moment.得知此刻你遇到麻烦我深感遗憾。Im very glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how .非常高兴收到你的来信，在信中，关于如何你向我征求意见。2主体部分常用语When it comes to/As for . I would like to suggest/recommend .涉及/关于我想建议The following are my suggestions./My suggestions are as follows.我的建议如下。In my opinion/Personally/As far as Im concerned, it would be wise to take the following action. 在我看来，采取如下行动是明智的。You may/might as well do .你不妨做I would like to suggest that .我想建议If I were you, I would .如果我是你，我会It seems to me that you could .我认为你可以I think it would be more beneficial if you could .我想如果你能可能会更有利。3结尾常用语I hope you will find these suggestions helpful./I hope my suggestions will be of benefit to you.我希望你认为这些建议有帮助。/我希望我的建议对你有益。I hope you will take my advice into consideration. If you have any questions or requirements, please do not hesitate to tell me./If you have any questions, please feel free to ask me at any time.我希望你会考虑我的建议。如果你有任何问题或要求，请毫不犹豫地告诉我。/如果你有任何问题，请随时问我。I believe you will take my advice into account/consideration seriously.我相信你会认真考虑我的建议的。黄金模板Dear _，(建议对象)Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to_.(引出对方需要建议的主题)Here are a few suggestions.(引出作者建议) First, it is important to_.Then, it also helps to_. Besides, it should be a good idea to_.You can also_.可以根据要求用不同的句式提出建议，如下：As to_， I suggest _.(需要具体到某一方面) In addition，_.(其他的建议) Im sure _.(预测可能的结果，给对方以行动的信心和决心)I hope _.(表达愿望)Yours sincerely，Li Hua范文鉴赏Dear Peter, Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well. (引出建议主题) Here are a few suggestions. (引出个人建议) First, it is important to take a Chinese course, as youll be able to learn from the teacher and practice with your fellow students. Then, it also helps to watch TV, and read books, newspapers and magazines in Chinese whenever possible. Besides, it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs, because by doing so youll learn and remember Chinese words more easily. You can also make more Chinese friends. They will tell you a lot about China and help you learn Chinese.(具体建议)Try and write me in Chinese next timeYours sincerely，Li Hua 模拟写作Dear Headmaster,As a student of this school, I feel that it is my obligation to make some suggestions concerning the basic conditions of our dormitoryGenerally speaking, the dormitory building is well equipped. However, there are two unpleasant aspects that cause inconvenience to us: First, because the heating system is in need of improvement it cannot maintain warmth in our rooms during the winter. Second, the furniture is not designed in a practical manner. There is no shelf to place books.I would be very grateful if my proposal could be considered and positive changes could take place in these regards.Yours sincerely,Li Ming假设你是李华,你的好友李明在交友过程中遇到了困难,请你根据以下提示用英语给他写一封信,给他提一些建议:1.帮他分析原因2.给他提出建议3.陈述你帮助他的具体打算注意:100词左右短语再现: in order to Join in Be concerned about Get along well with Communicate withLast but not least微写作1.In order to have friends, you have got to be an honest person.2.First, youd better join some clubs and join in some activities to meet new friends.3.Second, once you have friends , learn to be concerned about them.4.Dont ignore them at any time.5.Last but not least , you should get along well with them and often communicate with them.Dear Li Ming,In your letter, you said you are not good at communication with others and often feel lonely. I think you can just make it so good as you can follow the advice below.First, you should learn about your classmates likes and dislikes. Second, you should take an active part in the discussion held in your class and show your own opinion actively, and at the same time, learn to listen to others patiently. The friends with more people. Third, it will be a good idea to help.With time going on, people will know you better and like to make friends with you if you can do the above.I hope you will find these ideas useful.Yours,Li Hua假设你叫张伟,你的一位朋友李华刚刚被一所中学聘为美术老师,因为刚毕业没有教学经验,担心教课不受学生欢理,特写信向你征求建议,回信应包括如下内容 1.鼓励他不要有顾虑,要向经验丰富的老师学习,认真教学 2.多与学生交流,请课要尽量生动活泼,多讲些学生喜欢的内容注意:1.词数100个左右 2.信的开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数Dear Ii HuaI am delighted to have received your letter and heard about your present situation with you.Firstly,I should express my congratulations on your working as a teacher. As you know, it is very normal for a new teacher to feel nervous in class. Secondly, being a young teacher, youd better learn from experienced teachers and devote more time to studying teaching methods. Thirdly, since you just graduated from university, you have a lot in common with the students. In other words, you can easily communicate with the students. Last but not least, you should teach them more about what they like to know.By doing so, I think you would certainly overcome the worryGood luck to you every dayFaithfully yoursZhang Wei假设你是李华,曾在伦敦奥运会上担任志愿者,你的英国笔友杰克逊想当2016年奥运会的志愿者,但他不知道作为一名志思者需要什么条件以及要干些什么,请你根据以下要点给杰克逊回信: 1.志愿者必须热情,具有率献精神 2.为来自世界各地的运动员及官员当向导 3.提供信息、翻译、急救以及运动场地的其他服务 4.帮助运动员们提东西Dear Jackson,Its nice to hear from you. Im glad to hear that youd like to be a volunteer of the 2016 Olympic Games. As a volunteer, you must be enthusiastic and devoted.First, you should act as a guide for the officials and athletes from all over the world. Whats more, you should also provide information, translation, first aid and other services around the competition venues in the city. If necessary, you may help the athletes to carry luggage. The job is simple, but tiring. However,it is very important and meaningful.Best wishesYours,Li Hua假如你叫李华,你的好朋友李明英语听力水平不高,每次考试因此失多分,他很苦恼,特向你求助,请给他写一封信提出可行的建议,词数100个左右Dear Li MingI sorry to hear that your English grade is low in each test. As for this. youd better coThe and follow my advice.First. do you have a good vocabulary? Youd better make a plan to recite vocabularies every day. How much time do you spend listening to English materials every day? On average, the time ranges from10to20. Third, how well do you make use of skills? In fact, mastering such basic skills is and necessary, like going through the questions and answers quickly, predicting what the title is about. trying to decide its main idea and so on.As you know. practice makes perfect. So long as keep on trying, you are sure to make great progress.Looking forward to your good grade next time.Yours,Li Hua李丽华是某校高二年级学生,看到本市要修建新车站,想给总