高中英语作文.doc

高考英语写作技巧一, 高考英语书面表达基本策略: 仔细审题。 如果是看图写文，看懂每幅图之间的联系至关重要。 写要点。据每幅图写出一至两句话。因为每年高考书面表达一般控制在10句话，120个词左右。 连句成文。每句话写好后，用适当的连词连接起来，使之上下连贯，呼应，通顺，简洁。 查错漏。完稿后，检查一下有没有时态，语态，拼写错误并逐一加以改正。 卷面整洁。卷面整洁干净甚至比准确，通顺，简介更重要。因为整洁干净给阅卷人精神上带来愉悦，相对而言，分数自然要给得高一些。 为了帮助同学们在平时写作练习的时候时刻牢记这些写作的基本要领，特编顺口溜如下：细审题，巧构思，列要点，防遗漏。写日记，同汉语；书信，通知格式要牢记。看清图表细梳理，写人记事按顺序；完稿后查遗漏，整洁干净莫忘记。 二, 高考英语书面表达高分策略：从遣词，造句，谋篇三个方面分析。 遣词的原则：使用高等级词汇及短语, 如果仅仅记住几个简单基础的词汇,而且一味的重复低水平的英语知识点,还远远没有达到大学的入学要求。这就要求考生在平时的训练和考试当中，有意识的强化“复杂，高级”这两个概念，使自己的作文能力区别于普通学生的作文，使自己一下子就站在一个比别人高的位置上，充分显示自己的实力。 平时学习过程中注意总结各种各样的词汇。以描述人物的词汇为例： 表达人物爱憎感情： like, love, be interested in, be fond of hate, dislike, be tired of, lose interest in happy, excited, pleased, satisfied, angry, sad, worried, disappointed, terrified, mad, frightened 介绍人物的影响及人们对人的评价： He became famous for his new theory. The people had come to love him as an inspiring leader. We regard Li Fei as our model. Lei Feng has been praised for his communist spirit. People spoke highly of him and all respected him. 常见描述人物性格，外貌和身体状况等的词语 good-looking /funny-looking /strong-looking /ugly-looking /dirty-looking /ordinary-looking /blue-eyed /white-eyed /warm-hearted /light-hearted /kind-hearted /absent-minded /tall /short /beautiful /pretty /lovely /naughty/ be blind /lame in /be in good or poor condition/ healthy/ fine/ well /strong-tempered /bad-tempered /near-sighted /far-sighted /foolish /stupid /silly /clever /smart /wise /bright / diligent /intelligent /lazy /hard working, etc. 造句的原则：句式多变，语法活用，句子是表达一个完整意思的最小当位，所以造句能力在英文写作中是非常重要的。好的英语句子能够生动，形象，准确的表达内容。所以要想写出漂亮的书面表达，必须从写好句子开始。 英语基本句型及造句: 主语+谓语+状语(介词,名词短语或从句) The sun rises up in the east and sets in the west. We get up early every morning. The meeting lasted 2 hours. 主语+不及物动词+副词 This kind of wine drinks well and sells well. The suit wears well. Glass breaks easily. 主语+谓语+介词+宾语 We all agreed on the terms. He hates to argue with his wife about such small matters. All these things are to be answered for. 主语+系动词+形容词 Good medicine tastes bitter to the mouth. He was so tired that he fell asleep the moment he went to bed. Your explanation sounds reasonable. 主语+谓语+直接宾语 I want your promise. Have your fixed my watch? This factory produces 1000 cars a week. 主语+谓语+间接宾语+直接宾语 He paid me a visit yesterday. He owed me 50 yuan. He wrote his family a letter yesterday. 主语+谓语+宾语+宾补 (to do) I will get someone to repair the recorder for you. I didnt mean to hurt you. He invited me to teach at a well-known university. 主语+谓语+宾语+宾补 (do) I often hear her sing the song. The boss made workers work 15 hours a day. Dont forget to have him come. 主语+谓语+现在分词 I heard her singing in the next room. We could feel our heats beating fast. Did you observe the birds flying around the trees? 主语+谓语+过去分词 I must have my watch repaired. We must get he task finished on time. Speak louder to make yourself understood by everybody. 主语+谓语+宾语(动名词) I suggested putting off the meeting. They all avoided mentioning the matter. We cant help laughing at the news. 主语+谓语+宾语(不定式) I cant afford to buy such a large house. Dont pretend to know what you dont. He feared to speak in her presence. 主语+谓语+宾语(名词/代词)+介词+宾语 Nothing can prevent us from going forward. Thank you for your help. He demanded an answer from me. 练习写好句子的方法一：合并句子 It was early in the morning. Mr. Smith was in his garden. He was watering flowers. Early in the morning, Mr. Smith was watering flowers in his garden. A girl was crossing a road. The girl was pretty. The road was wide. A pretty girl was crossing a wide road. 写好句子的方法二：改写句子 1) Mr. Green is a tall man, who wears a pair of thick glasses. (改成介词短语做伴随状语) 1) The book cost me 300 yuan. Mr. Green is a tall man with a pair of thick glasses. 2) The ice on the lake is too thin for us to skate on. (使用sothat结构改写句子) The ice on the lake is so thin that we cant skate on it. 练习方法三：一句多译 这本书花了我300元。 I spent 300 yuan on the book. I paid 300 yuan for the book. The price of the book is 300 yuan. It cost me 300 yuan to buy the book. 我不懂什么英语，李明也不懂。 I dont know any English, nor does Li Ming. I hardly know any English, nor does Li Ming. I hardly know any English, neither does Li Ming. I hardly know any English, no more does Li Ming. I hardly know any English, so it is with Li Ming. I know no more English than Li Ming does. I know as little English as Li Ming does. 一到家，我就把所见到的一切都记了下来。 On/Upon arriving home, I wrote down everything I had seen. As soon as I arrived home, I wrote down everything I had seen. The moment I arrived home, I wrote down everything I had seen. The instant I arrived home, I wrote down everything I had seen. No sooner had I arrived home than I wrote down everything I had seen. 昨天下午他才来。 He came here yesterday afternoon. He didnt come here until yesterday afternoon. Not until yesterday afternoon did he come here. It was yesterday afternoon that he arrived here. It was not until yesterday afternoon that he came here. 谋篇的原则： 满分作文都有个共性就是有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。文章的连贯性和紧凑感是很重要的。句子作为最小的表达意思的语言当位如果只是被随意的整合，是无法达到有效表达的目的。 常见的句子之间的连接手段有： 使用代词指代上一句中的名词 重复使用上一句中的词 使用连接词 使用平行结构 高考大纲中常用的连接词: 表并列补充关系的: what is more, besides, also, as well, moreover, furthermore, in addition, 表转折对比关系的: but, however, yet, instead, on the other hand, on the contrary, although, different from, in contrast to, despite, in spite of, whereas, unlike, nevertheless, not onlybut also, herethere, years agotoday, thisthat, the formerthe latter, thennow, the firstwhereas the second, oncenow, on the one handon the other hand, someothers, 表因果关系的: since, as, because (of), for, so, thus, therefore, as a result, so that, 表条件关系的: if, on the condition (that), as long as, unless, or else, 表时间关系的: when, after, before, until, as soon as, later, afterwards, soon, lately, recently, since, from then on, eventually, in the meantime, then, suddenly, at the same time, next, early this morning/year/century, after an interval, now, after, presently, later, afterward, somewhat later, finally, at last, all of a sudden, 表特定的顺序关系: above all, first of all, firstly, first, secondly, the , next, finally, in the end, at last, 表换一种方式表达: in other words, that is to say, to put it another way, 表进行举例说明: for instance, for example, like, such as, 表陈述事实: in fact, actually, as a matter of fact, to tell you the truth 表总结: on the whole, in short, all in all, general, in a word, in conclusion, in closing, in summary. 考试作文经典妙语集锦topic 1:people attend college or university for many different reasons(for example ,new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge). why do think people attend college or university? use special reasons and examples to support your answer. 1 students have ample opportunity to explore a variety of interests, increase both their general and specific knowledge, prepare for a choosen career and develop independence. 2 all of these are valuable goals to achieve, but it is my belief that most students today purse higher education insgroupsto prepare for their future careers. 3 the world has changed a great deal since universities were established. topic 2:do you agree or disagree with the following statement? parents are the best teachers. use special reasons and examples to support your answer. 1 frist ,our parents begin teaching us the moment we are born, and what they teach us in those early years are the most important we can learn. 2 in addition, they teach us how to be independent and how to learn. 3 inally, our parents are devoted teachers who always want the best for us. topic 3: food has become easier to prepare.has this change improved the way people live ? use special reasons and examples to support your answer. 1 in the past , preparing a meal was a long and laborious process. 2 meals can now be prepared in a matter of minutes rather than hours. 3 most importantly ,because food preparation is no longer such a time - consuming process, people have more time for other things. topic 4: it has been said .not everything that is learned is contained in books. compare and contrast knowledge gained from experience with knowledge gained from books. in your opinion, which source is more important? why? 1 the knowledge we gain from books and formal education enable us to learn about things that we have no opportunity to experience in daily life. 2 practical experience, on the other hand, can give us more useful knowledge. 3 it is said that one learns best by doing, and i believe that this is ture,whether one is successful or not. topic 5: a company has announced that it wishes to built a large factory near your community. discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this new influence on your community.do you support or oppose the factory ? explain your position. 1 an obvious advantage is an increase in the number of available jobs, and many people in the community might find emplyment in the new factory. 2 it would have to pay some taxes to the local government, and workers might go shopping or eat at a restaurant in the area before or after their shifts. 3 depending on what kind of factory it is, it might pollute the environment and bring down property values. topic 6: if you could change one important thing about your hometown, what would you change ? use special reasons and examples to support your answer. 1 i believe that such a change is important because a persons living environment can greatly affect both his physical and mental health. 2 in addition, the environment can greatly affect the way a person feels. when in clean ,attrective surroundings we always feel more optimistic. topic 7: how do movies or television influence peoples behavior ?use reasons and specific examples to support your answer. 1 one obvious effect of these media is that watching them induces people to buy certain products. 2 another way tv and the movies affect people is that they give people either a broader view of the world or a distorted one ,depending on what type of program they watch. 3 finally , perhaps the most susceptibel viewers are childern , who may be unable to tell fact from fiction and may try to imitate acts that they see on tv or in the movies. topic 8:do you agree or disagree the following statement ?television has destoryed communication among friends and family .use special reasons and examples to support your answer. 1 studies have shown that watching a great deal of television makes people more passive. 2 although television has reduced the amount of time that family and friends spend together , it doesnt have to be this way. topic 9: some people prefer to live in a small town. others perfer to live in a big city .which place would you perfer to live in? use special reasons and examples to support your answer. 1 frist , life in the city is more convenient. 2 second, there are more ways to spend leisure time in the city. 3 finally ,and most importantly , the city offers more educational and career opportunities. topic 10 when people succeed ,it is because of hard hard work.luck has nothing to do with success .do you agree or disagree with the quotation above? use specific reasons and explains to explain your position. 1 it cannot be denied that luck often plays an important role in success. 2 furthermore ,there is something to be said for simply being in the right place at the right time-perhaps meeting someone by chance who can offer a good job or rare opportunity. 3 if one is willing to work hard , i believe that success will eventually be achieved, with or without the added bebefit of luck. topic 11:do you agree or disagree with the following statement? universities should give the same amount of money to their students sport activities as they give to their libraries.use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion. 1 a students primary education goal is to pursue knowledge. 2 sports activities ,on the other hand ,require some investment every year. 3 ideally ,a school should provide its students with a well-balance education that helps them develop all of their skills. topic 12: many people visit musemums when they travel to new places. why do you think people visit musemums? use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion. 1 to gain a better understanding of this new culture ,many travelers will go to a history or cultural musemum. 2other people choose to visit museums abroad insgroupsto see things that they can not see at home. 3it is an activity that will provide the traveler with a better understanding of the world ,no matter what his specific interest is. topic 13 : some people prefer to eat at food stands or restaurants. other people prefer to prepare and eat food at home.which do you prefer?use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion. 1lthough the food we prepare may not be as elegant as that which can be found in a fine restaurant, i like the taste of my mothers cooking because it tastes like home. 2 we also talk more around the dinner table when we eat together at home because the atmosphere is quieter more personal. 3 lastly ,when we are finished we do not have to worry about who will pay the bill. topic 14: some people believe that university students should be required to attend calsses .others believe that going to classes should be optional for students.which point of view do you agree with? use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion. 1 adults must be able to manage their time on their own and to make their own decisions. 2 by the time they reach university ,students are no langer childern. 3 finally, non-compulsory class attendance may not only lead to improvement in the students, but also in the teaching. topic 15: neighbors are the people who live near us. in your opinion, what are the qualities of a good neighbor? use specific details and examples in your answer. 1/ the frist requirement of a good neighbor is that he does not disturb others in the neighborhood. 2/ second, a good neighbor should cooperate in the care of the neighborhood. 3/ neighbors should watch out for each others security by reporting suspicious people who may be trying to steal something and dangerous conditions such as broken slide on the playground. 4/ finally,the best neighbors help each other when they are in trouble. topic 16: it has recently been announced that a new restaurant may be built in your neighborhood. do you support or oppose this plan? why?use specific details and examples in your answer. 1/ furthermore,in this busy society, it is often difficult to find the time and energy to prepare a meal after working hard all day. 2/ at times like this dinning out can really be a big help, andshavingsa restaurant located in the neighborhood only makes it more convenient. 3/to sum up, i believe the advantages ofshavingsa restaurant in the neighborhood outweigh the disadvantages, and so i would support this proposal. topic 17 : some people think that they can learn better by themselves than with a teacher. others think that it is always better to have a teacher.which do you prefer? use specific details and examples in your answer. 1/perphaps the most important is that a teacher can help me interpret and better understand what i am studying. 2/ in addition, i can benefit from the teachers greater knowledge of and experience with the subject. 3/finally, a teacher can direct my studies so i can learn more efficiently. topic 18: what are some important qualities of a good supervisor(boss)? use specific details and examples to explain why these qualities are important. 1/ most importantly, a supervisor must be very knowledgeable about his companys business. 2/ another important quality is the ability to delegate. 3/ last but not least, a good supervisor must be even-tempered and able to offer constructive criticism. topic 19: should governments spend more money on improving road and highways, or should government spend more money on improving public transportation (buses, trains, subways)?why?use specific details and examples in your answer. 1 frist of all ,better public transportation systems,including buses, trains and subways, will encourage more people to use them rather than drive their own cars. 2 second, using public transportation saves energy. 3 and last but not least, greater use of public transportation causes less pollution and will keep the environment cleaner. it is better for children to grow up in the countryside than in a big city.do you agree or disagree? use specific details and examples in your answer. 1 one important advantage of raising children in the countryside is that the environment is cleaner and healther. 2nother advantage of country living is safety. 3 finally, a country upbringing allows children to experience a more natural environment without all the distractions of entertainment places in the city. topic 21: in general , people are living longer now.discuss the causes of this phenomenon. use specific reasons and details to develop your essay. 1 mankinds longevity is due mainly to advances in science and technology. 2nd as civilization has advanced, our living environment and sourses of food have become more sanitary. 3 furthermore, work is now sa