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高三暑期辅导讲义 IV写作2011: 若你是明启中学李明，想申请一个扶贫项目，帮助贫困地区的儿童。根据以下启示写一封申请信。启示：国际儿童基金会将资助中学生开展扶贫项目，以帮助贫困地区的儿童。申请成功者将获得项目经费2000元。有意者请来信告知。信中请包括： 1你个人基本情况 2你对申请项目具体设想 3项目经费使用情况l My name is Li Ming. I am a student in Ming Qi middle school. I am Grade 3. One day I saw some poor childrens life in the TVl Due to my love and warm heart for the children in poor areas, I want to apply for a poor-supporting event and fund to support the children in poor families. I want to support the study of children in Wenchuan. Although the earthquake has gone away three years, the destroy from earthquake has not completely been moved. Many families lost their home and money in earthquake so that they couldnt have power to support the study of Wenchuan. Watching the childrens eyes for desiring to study in TV, I feel worried. I think I must do something. I want to use 2000 Yuan to support the children who mostly need to go to study but their families are mostly poor. I want to use money to support 3 most-needed students. The following is my plan. (136 words)l If I have the opportunity to get the fund of 2000 yuan, Id really love and try my best to build a solid and beautiful school building for the poor children in the mountainous areas.-Dear Sir,Hello! Im Li Ming, a student from Mingqi High School of Shanghai. As Ive always been interested in charity, Im writing to you in the hope that I could be given the 2,000-yuan fund to carry out my project to help children in poor areas.My poverty-relief program is divided into three parts. In the initial stage, Ill try to purchase textbooks for subjects such as English and Maths. Given that new books are usually expensive, Ill be on the look-out for good-quality second-hand books. The second stage of my program is to recruit high school students who have a strong desire to help pupils in poor areas. Surely they should be armed with relatively profound knowledge to be qualified teachers. We will set out for primary schools, which are selected and contacted in advance, to carry out our program, which of course is my last stage.As to how to allocate the money, Id like to use 1,000 for textbooks, and the rest to pay for the travelling fee of volunteers.I am looking forward to your reply, thanks!Yours, Li Ming (188/ 8+7+4 )-To whom it may concern, Dear Sir or Madam,My name is Li Ming, a student from Ming Qi middle school. Im writing this e-mail, on behalf of every charity-pursuer, to apply for the project aimed at helping children in poverty-stricken areas. My experience of last years visit to a school in the depth of a mountain triggered the intention to shoulder the responsibility of helping them overcome the hardships and struggles they would go through.There is a series of steps in my project that will be demonstrated as follows: Of the top priority is our organizing an activity to introduce the living and learning conditions of kids in poor areas and thus bringing home to the public the urgency of immediate action to be taken to help them out, whether by donating money or by sending daily necessities from clothes to books. As should be done next, a video play will be shot to convey the wishes, cheers and encouragement from us city people to them. Equally significantly, I along with my teammates have planned to visit those kids, to play and chat with them, which is bound to establish a solid connection between us.If I were lucky enough to be granted the 2000 yuan fund, a quarter of it would be spared for the traffic and so cost, while the rest would be added to the money collected to be donated contributing to modernizing and improving the teaching devices.Thanks for taking time to read my e-mail and Im looking forward to being part of your project.Yours, sincerely,Li Ming (260/ 9+10+5)2013:上海博物馆拟举办一次名画展，现就展出场所（博物馆还是社区图书馆）征集公众意见，假设你是王敏，给上海博物馆写一封信表达你的想法。你的信必须满足以下要求： 1. 简述你写信的目的及你对场所的选择； 2. 说明你的理由（从便利性，专业性等方面对这两个场所进行对比）Dear Sir:My name is Wang Min. Ive learned that an art exhibition is to be held and that youre collecting suggestions on its location. Im writing this letter to share with you my opinions. In my opinion, it is more advisable to hold the art exhibition in Shanghai Museum than in community libraries. My reasons are as follows.On one hand, it is more convenient for people to get to Shanghai Museum which is located in the center of the city. And the museum is much more spacious than community libraries, which provides visitors with a more comfortable environment for appreciating art.On the other hand, as a well-known museum, Shanghai Museum is more professional and experienced in holding art exhibitions. Its professional security guards and advanced facilities can better protect those famous paintings from being damaged or stolen.Therefore, I suggest the exhibition be held in the museum.Wang Min (158/7+6+3)-2014: 学校英语报正在酝酿改版，拟从现有的三个栏目（健康、娱乐、文化）中去除一个，并从三个备选栏目（时尚、职业规划、读者反馈）中挑选一个纳入该报。假设你是该校学生程飞，给校报编辑写一封电子邮件，表达你的观点。邮件须包括以下内容：1. 你建议去除的栏目及去除的理由；2. 你建议增加的栏目及增加的理由。Dear Sir/Madam,As an avid reader of your newspaper, Id like to offer some suggestions for changes that hopefully could be made to your future editions. A section that I think you can do without would be Culture and, in the meantime, a section that I suggest adding to the newspaper is Career Planning. My reasons are as follows.Since this newspaper is intended for students, a relaxed tone and light-hearted topics would get in good graces with us. Culture seems a rather serious section, which isnt really necessary considering our school curriculum has done an excellent job imparting to us gems of various cultures in the world. Besides, culture and entertainment are inextricably linkedthat is, we can subliminally learn about western culture through listening to English songs and watching American or British TV series. For example, Big Bang Theory has shown us how Americans now regard smart is the new sexy, and Sherlock has shown us how the wry humor of Brits can actually strengthen the bond between two detectives.The reason why Id like to see a Career Planning section is that high schools in Shanghai seldom offer career guidance, something that should be made indispensable to the curriculums. Employers often complain about graduates lack of skill and, more importantly, mental preparedness to do things professionally. I think that its part of a s