Unit1Penfriends.pptx

Liulei Howtoimproveyourwriting Howtobeagoodlearner AGoodLearner 华东师范大学第二附属中学附属初中 Readthepassage Content 8points Language 8points Literarygrace 4points Howtobeagoodlearner Inmyopinion althoughagoodlearnerneedn tbethebeststudent buthemustbeattentiveinclass Agoodlearnershouldbepatient careful kind responsibleandgoodataskingquestions Now letmegiveyousomesuggestions 1 Relevance attentivepatient careful kind responsibleandgoodataskingquestions Attentive patient careful kind responsibleandgoodataskingquestions Para2 Agoodlearnershouldlistencarefullytotheteachers Para3 Agoodlearnershouldpracticewhattheylearnafterclass Para4 Ishouldreadmoreandmorebooks Attentive Hardworking knowledgeable patient careful kind responsibleandgoodataskingquestions Ienjoyweekends IcansleeplateonSaturdaymornings MyfriendsandIcangotothemovies Ialwayshavealotofhomeworktodo Icandoallkindsofshopping IalwaysgoforarideonSaturdayafternoon supportingsentence1 supportingsentence2 supportingsentence3 supportingsentence4 Unnecessarysentence Myfriendisbothcarefulandkind Heisatallboywithglasses Heoftencheckshisanswersagaintomakesuretheyareallright MybestfriendisJackandheisgoodatplayingbasketball HealwayshelpsmewhenIamintrouble WhenIfail heisalwaysthefirstonetoencourageme kind careful unnecessarysentences AGoodLearner attentive patient careful responsible goodataskingquestions kind Kind Theobjectclause 宾语从句 that if what how Theadverbialclause 状语从句 because though if when after since sothat Theattributiveclause 定语从句 which who when why 2 Usingcompoundsentences Iwillreadmorebooks because IampooratEnglish Inevergiveitup Although Though itcanenrichmyknowledge Ilikeaskingmyclassmatesquestions TheyaregoodatEnglish Ilikeaskingmyclassmatesquestions aregoodatEnglish who Iwillbeagoodlearner IhopeIcanmakeit Ihope that Iwillbeagoodlearner Let spractise Ihavefreetime Iwillspenditonstudying Ireadalot IhopeIcanimprovemywritingability Ihavesomeproblems Idon tknowthem Ialwaysaskothersforhelp IfIhavefreetime Iwillspenditonstudying WhenI Itryto insteadof Iread much Ihaveimprovedmywritingabilityalot so that 3 Usingsuitableconnectives表列举 forexample suchas 表递进 what smore besides notonly butalso 表并列 also aswellas both and 表顺序 first second finally lastbutnotleast 表因果 because forthisreason asaresult therefore so sothat 表转折 but however though 表总结 inshort inaword allinall Iusedtobepooratstudy onedayIwantedtobeatopstudent Ihavetriedmybesttostudyhard Ilistentotheteachercarefullyinclass I domyhomeworkcarefullyafterclass Ireadmorebooksasmuchaspossiblebecauseitcanenablemetoenrichmyknowledge ifIhavesomethingunknown Ialwaysaskmyteachersinsteadofpretendingtoknowthem Irealizemydreamtobeatopstudent 4 Workin