WritingHelp (2).pptx

Proofreading Composition ByJiangshan Jin anSeniorHighSchool For65years MrLihasbeenwalkaroundourneighborhoodtwicetheday It spartofhisdailyexerciseroutine Heisaretiringbiologyteacher AsMrLigetsolderandolder hehastorestseveraltimealonghisroute Therefore hestillgetsupearlyandstickshisroutine Theneighborshavenoticedhisstops Weplacedifferentchairsalongourrouteandinvitehimtositandtookarest Now themile longrouteisspottedwithchairs WhenweseeMrLitogoby werealizeweshouldalsogetoutbuthaveawalk walking a retired times However his take and to DoyouknowwhathappenedonMay6thinLiu an 2018Liu anInternationalMarathon SinceitisthefirsttimeforthemtocometoLiu an theywanttovisitsomeplacesofinteresthere Astheinterpreterofthisevent youareappointedtointroduceLiu antothem Whatdoyouwanttoshowtothem Eventually twoathletesfromKenyaandEthiopiawonthechampions DearTom IamextremepleasedtoknowthatyoushowinterestinLiu anbecause2018Liu anInternationalMarathon Infact Liu anhasalonghistoryofover2 000years whichislocatinginthewesternAnhuiProvince Inaddition itcoversaareaofaround14 990squarekilometerswithapopulationofmorethan5millions Therearevarioussightshere FamoussightsincludingTiantangMountain WanfoLake andtheCemeteryofRevolutionaryMartyrsinJinzhaiCounty etc TouristscometothesefamoussightsbecausewecanenjoyagoodviewandlearnaboutthehistoryoftheAnti JapaneseWar TakingawalkaroundWanfoLakeorvisitingTiantangMountainareamongtheactivitieswhatwillgiveyouacloseexperienceofLiu an Besidesplacestovisitto youcertainlycannotmisslocalspecialtiessuchasLiu angreenteaandcreekfish IsincerelyhopethatyoucancometoLiu anforavisit Yours LiHua extremely of located an million include they and that DearTom IamextremelypleasedtoknowthatyoushowinterestinLiu anbecauseof2018Liu anInternationalMarathon Infact Liu anhasalonghistoryofover2 000years whichislocatedinthewesternAnhuiProvince Inaddition itcoversanareaofaround14 990squarekilometerswithapopulationofmorethan5million Therearevarioussightshere FamoussightsincludeTiantangMountain WanfoLake andtheCemeteryofRevolutionaryMartyrsinJinzhaiCounty etc TouristscometothesefamoussightbecausetheycanenjoyagoodviewandlearnaboutthehistoryoftheAnti JapaneseWar TakingawalkaroundWanfoLakeandvisitingTiantangMountainareamongtheactivitiesthatwillgiveyouacloseexperienceofLiu an Besidesplacestovisit youcertainlycannotmisslocalspecialtiessuchasLiu angreenteaandcreekfish IsincerelyhopethatyoucancometoLiu anforavisit Yours LiHua Beginning Generaldescription Localspecialty Ending Touristattractions 假如你是李华 21班TVStation的主持人 一批美国学生打算来北京旅游 请写一封发言稿 向他们介绍北京的情况 并欢迎他们到北京 1 北京简介 占地16 000平方千米 人口约20 000 000 位于中国的东北部 2 旅游景点 天安门城楼 故宫 长城等3 当地美食 烤鸭 炸酱面等注意 1 120个词左右2 开头和结尾已经写好 但不计入总词数 3 可适当增加细节 使行文连贯 参考词汇 天安门城楼TiananmenGate tower炸酱面noodleswithbeanpaste Dearfriends WelcometoBeijing Yours LiHua Onepossibleversion Dearfriends WelcometoBeijing IamverydelightedtointroduceBeijingtoyou Beijing locatedinthenortheasternChina servesasthecentreofitspolitical economic scientific educationalandculturallife Withanareaof16 000squaremeters itishometoabout200millionpeople Beijinghasalonghistorywithabundantplacesofinterest ofwhichthemostfamoussightsincludeTiananmenGate tower theForbiddenCityandtheGreatWall WhileTiananmenGate towerpresentsyouamodernBeijing theForbiddenCityandtheGreatWallshowyouhowwisetheancientChinesewere WanderingaroundBeijing youwillexperiencevariouswonderfulChineseculture Asforlocalspecialties thewell knownBeijingduckandthenoodleswith