2015届高考英语二轮复习书面表达专项指导训练.doc

2015届高考英语二轮复习书面表达专项指导训练20一 、书面表达（本大题共3小题，共75分）假如你叫王方，乘出租车时丢了手提箱。在失物招领处，工作人员要求你用英文写一份书面材料。 内容要点：1 上午11点钟到达机场，然后带着5件行李乘一辆黄色出租车到假日酒店（Holiday Inn）；2 到达酒店后，发现由于粗心将手提箱遗失在出租车上。不幸的是，未注意到出租车的车牌号；3 手提箱是黑色的，由塑料制成，尺寸大约为60cm40cm16cm；4 箱内有一台摄像机、两条长裤、三件衬衫、几本儿童读物以及一个钱包。钱包内有一张2,000美元的支票；5 你的联系电话是 注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 文章的开头已为你写好。 My name is Wang Fang. I arrived at the airport at 11 am. 【答案解析】学生作品： My name is Wang Fang. I arrived at the airport at 11 am. Then I took a yellow taxi to the Holiday Inn with five luggages. When I arrived at the Holiday Inn, I found my suitcase had been left in the taxi because of my carelessness. Unfortunately, I didnt notice the taxis licence. The suitcase is black and made of plastic. It is about 60 centimetre by 40 centimetre by 16 centimetre. In it, there is a camera, two pairs of trousers, three pieces of shirts, several books for children and a purse. In the purse, there is a check of 2,000 dollars. Could the finder make relation with me? My telephone number is Thank you. Wang Fang 点评： 1. 第一段第3句：luggage为不可数名词，five luggages表达不正确，可改为five pieces of luggage。 2. 第一段第5句：licence意为执照，不是牌照，故the taxis licence可改为the number of the taxi。 3. 第二段第2句：表示度量单位的centimetre为可数名词，应把三个 centimetre都改为centimetres。 4. 第二段第3句：In it过于简短，不必在其后停顿，其后逗号应去掉。 5. 第二段第3句：shirt是可数名词， three pieces of shirts表达不正确，应改为three shirts。 6. 第二段第4句：表示价值时，通常用介词for，故of最好改为for。 7第三段第1句：make relation with me表达不正确。习作者想表达与我取得联系，可改为get in touch with me或return the suitcase to me。 修改好的文章：My name is Wang Fang. I arrived at the airport at 11 am. Then I took a yellow taxi to the Holiday Inn with five pieces of luggage. When I arrived at the Holiday Inn, I found my suitcase had been left in the taxi because of my carelessness. Unfortunately, I didnt notice the number of the taxi. The suitcase is black and made of plastic. It is about 60 centimetres by 40 centimetres by 16 centimetres. In it there is a camera, two pairs of trousers, three shirts, several books for children and a purse. In the purse, there is a check for 2,000 dollars. Could the finder get in touch with me? My telephone number is Thank you. Wang Fang请根据以下表格中的信息介绍2010年上海世博会：时间2010年五月一日十月三十一日地点上海主题城市让生活更美好宗旨促进城市多元化、经济的繁荣、科技的创新参展者200多个国家、机构和7000万人参加，展示各国在工农业、科学、技术、文化艺术方面所取得的成就。注意：不要拘泥于要点，可以适当发挥，词数120左右 参考词汇：促进：promote 产品博览会：exposition 创新：innovation.【答案解析】【参考范文】The World Expo 2010 is going to take place in Shanghai ,one of the biggest city in China .It is scheduled to last from May 1 to October 31,2010.The theme of it is Better City ,Better Life, which means it is designed to promote cultural diversity ,economic prosperity and scientific innovation of the city. More than 200 countries have been prepared to take part so as to display their outstanding achievements in industry ,agriculture ,science, technology ,culture and art .About 70, 000, 000 visitors from different parts of the world are expected to attend the event. I hope the World Expo 2010 will become one of the most impressive international fairs and expositions in history .We are expecting new friends to come to Shanghai.下图是你校学生会在全校同学中就北京奥运会给你留下最深刻印象是什么这一问题的调查结果。请根据此图写一篇短文，客观描述调查结果并发表个人观点。注意：1、短文必须包括图表的所有内容，可适当发挥； 2、短文开头已为你写好，不记入总词数；中国运动员的出色表现60.4%26.1%13.5%恢弘盛大的开幕式成功的组织工作 3、词数：100左右。 Recently a survey has been done by our school Students Union to find out_【答案解析】【参考范文】Recently, a survey has been done by our school Students Union to find out what impressed the students most about the Beijing Olympic Games. The results are shown below. More than half of the students, to be exact, 60.4%, are deeply impressed by the excellent performances of Chinese Athletes. On the other hand, 26.1% of the students cant forget the grand and fantastic Opening Ceremony, which almost doubles the number of those who think the successful organization of the Beijing Olympic has