非谓语动词与写作.ppt

众所周知 作文中出现过多的简单句会让人觉得单调乏味 句子与句子之间的关系显得松散 而文章中过多地出现复合句又显得累赘 读起来费劲 恰当地运用非谓语动词 或者介词短语等 对简单句和复合句进行转换 不仅句型多样 句子活泼 而且读起来结构紧凑 言简意明 一 运用非谓语动词转换简单句1 这儿的人都喜欢汤姆写的那本小说 Allthepeopleherelikethenovel ItiswrittenbyTom AllthepeopleherelikethenovelwrittenbyTom 过去分词作定语 2 这是一家工厂 月产成千上万辆小汽车 Thisisafactory Itproducesthousandsofcarsamonth Thisisafactory producingthousandsofcarsamonth 现在分词作状语 3 消防队员及时赶到 他们对我们帮助很大 Thefirefighterscamehereintime Theyhelpedusalot Thefirefighters cominghereintimehelpedusalot 动名词作主语 4 我们应该多讲英语 我们认为这是很重要的 WeshouldspeakmoreEnglish Wethinkitisveryimportant WethinkitveryimportanttospeakmoreEnglish 不定式作真正宾语 5 我们应该如何提高我们的英语口语水平 这是个问题 HowshouldweimproveourspokenEnglish Itisaquestion HowtoimproveourspokenEnglishisaquestion 不定式短语作主语 ThequestionishowtoimproveourspokenEnglish 不定式短语作表语 二 运用非谓语动词转换复合句1 这里曾有一家化肥厂 位于城市的南边 它每天释放出大量有毒气体 污染环境 Therewasalargefactory whichproducedfertilizer Everydayitgaveoutalotofpoisonousgas whichpollutedtheenvironment Therewasalargefactory whichproducedfertilizer Everydayitgaveoutalotofpoisonousgas pollutingtheenvironment 现在分词作状语 简析 原句 中分别由which引导两个定语从句 重复且单调 将第二个定语从句转换为现在分词短语作状语后 不仅表达多样 而且言简意明 2 当我们赶到校门口时 已经8点了 我们见到老师时 不得不为迟到而向她道歉 Whenwegottotheschoolgateitwaseight Whenwesawourteacher wehadtosaysorryforourbeinglate Whenwegottotheschoolgateitwaseight Seeingourteacher wehadtosaysorryforourbeinglate 现在分词作状语 简析 原句 中有两个由连词when引导的状语从句 将第二个状语从句转换为现在分词短语作状语后 就避免了 原句 中重复使用同类从句的问题 3 我们认为中学生学习一门外语是必要的 同时我们也认为 中学生掌握一门外语是可能的 Wethinkitisnecessarythatmiddleschoolstudentsshouldlearnaforeignlanguageandwealsothinkthatitispossiblethattheycanmasterone Wethinkitisnecessarythatmiddleschoolstudentsshouldlearnaforeignlanguageandwealsothinkitpossibleforthemtomasterone 不定式作真正宾语 简析 原句 中先后出现两个从句 冗长 累赘 难读 而采用动词不定式替换第二句中的从句后 言简意明 4 由于老师的帮助 我英语进步了 因为我英语进步了 我相信我能考上更好的大学 Becausemyteacherhelpsme myEnglishhasgreatlyimproved BecausemyEnglishhasgreatlyimproved I msureIwillgotoabetteruniversity Withmyteacherhelpingme myEnglishhasgreatlyimproved BecausemyEnglishhasgreatlyimproved I msureIwillgotoabetteruniversity with复合结构作状语 简析 原句 两处重复出现由because引导的从句 读起来很别扭 换用 with 现在分词的复合结构 后 读起来给人的感觉大不一样 5 为了赶上同班同学 李东不遗余力地学习 为了好好学习 他从不玩电脑游戏 LiDongsparesnoefforttostudysothathecancatchupwithhisclassmates Heneverplayscomputergamessothathecanlearnbetter LiDongsparesnoefforttostudysothathecancatchupwithhisclassmates Heneverplayscomputergamessoastolearnbetter 不定式作状语 简析 原句 两处重复使用sothat引导的目的状语从句 换用不定式作状语后 殊途同归 但效果好多了 另外 此处的soastolearnbetter也可以用介词短语withthepurposeoflearningbetter作目的状语 三 运用非谓语动词转换短文 根据一般表达写出该短文的高级表达 北京市有大量的出租车司机 他们每天全心全意地为乘客服务 对北京市的交通发挥着重要作用 他们起早贪黑 赚钱养家糊口 有一次 我下车时不小心把手机忘在了车上 但当我和司机同志联系上之后 他立即开车把手机送到了我的家门口 让我感动不已 一般表达 TherearealargenumberoftaxidriversinBeijing Theyservepassengersheartandsoul TheyplayanimportantpartinthetrafficofBeijing Theymakesomemoney Theyworkfromdawntillnight Oneday IleftmycellphoneinthetaxiItook Igotintouchwiththedriver Hedrovetomyhomeandgaveitbacktome Iwasveryexcited 高级表达 TherearealargenumberoftaxidriversinBeijing servingpassengersheartandsoulandplayinganimportantpartinthetrafficofBeijing Inordertomakesomemoneytosupporttheirfamilies theyworkfromdawntillnight Oneday IgotoutofthetaxiinahurrywithmycellphoneleftinthetaxiItook Onhearingwhathadhappened thetaxidriverdrovetomyhomeasfastaspossibleandgavethecellphonebacktome Seeingmycellphoneagain Iwastooexcitedtosayaword 运用非谓语动词转换简单句1 Weweretouchedbytheteacher swords Wedecidedtoworkhard 2 Ididn treceiveherletter Ihadtowriteagain 3 Theboycametoschoollateagain Thismadetheteacherveryangry 4 Theboysweremakingthemostoftime Theywantedtofinishtheworkearlier 5 Isawanoldgranny Shelayontheground Iwentovertohelpher 答案 1 Touchedbytheteacher swords wedecidedtoworkhard 2 Nothavingreceivedherletter Ihadtowriteagain 3 Theboy scomingtoschoollateagainmadetheteacherveryangry 4 Theboysweremakingthemostoftimesoastofinishtheworkearlier 5 Seeinganoldgrannylyingontheground Iwentovertohelpher 运用非谓语动词转换复合句1 Whenwearrivedatthecompany wewereshownaroundtheworkshopsfirst Whenweweretalkingtotheemployees wefounditwasnecessarythatweshouldlearnaforeignlanguage wewereshownaroundtheworkshopsfirst Whenweweretalkingtotheemployees wefound 答案 Arrivingatthecompany itnecessaryforustolearnaforeignlanguage 2 Itookpartinthemeeting whichwasheldinBeijinglastFriday Itwasveryinstructive whichwashostedbyamanagerwhocametoourcompanyyesterday Itookpartinthemeeting lastFriday Itwasveryinstructive whichwashostedbyamanager yesterday 答案 heldinBeijing comingtoourcompany 3 Assoonastheysawafewpeoplestillintheburninghouse theyrushedintoittosavethemwithouthesitation theyrushedintoittosavethemwithouthesitation 答案 Onseeingafewpeoplestillintheburninghouse 4 Motherwenttoworkinahurry andshedidn thavebreakfast Shewasasbusyasabeethesedaysandcamebackhomeverylate Motherwenttoworkinahurry Shewasasbusyasabeethesedays 答案 withouthavingbreakfast comingbackhomeverylate 运用非谓语动词转换短文大城市里高楼大厦林立 房价越来越高 一方面 很多人无房居住 另一方面 大量房子却卖不出去 不少人即使买了一套住房 恐怕也要一辈子辛辛苦苦工作来还银行贷款 我们希望政府采取措施 关心这些收入不高的人群 一般表达 Therearemoreandmoretallbuildingsinbigcities Theirpricesaregoingupdaybyday Ononehand therearestilllotsofpeople Theyhavenohousestolivein Ontheotherhand manyapartmentsarehardtobesoldout Evenifyoubuyanapartment I mafraidyouhavetopayoffthemoneyyouborrowfromthebank Youwillworkharddayandnightallyourlife Ihopeourgovernmenttakestrongmeasurestosolvethehousingproblemandtakecareofthepeople Theirincomesarelow 高级表达 Therearemoreandmoretallbuildingsinbigcities withtheirpricesgoingupdaybyday Ononehand therearestilllotsofpeoplehavingnohousestolivein Ontheoth